Duskloup [2006-10-16 01:03:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is very well written; it's flows. I like how you didn't use too many adverbs such as 'said' too much and I know using that word is sometimes unavoidable. Lastly the old english tougue like (I guess that's what it's called) dialogue is absolutly superb and the descriptions throughout are very envisioning and imaginative.
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Terri-chan In reply to Duskloup [2006-10-16 22:45:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. I thought it would belittle the characters to speak like us lowly mortals. They are gods, after all. They have an image to maintain. What did you think of the story itself? I wasn't sure where the plot would wind up, so I tried to leave it kind of open ended.
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