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Tarashi — Love and a Sea ch.1
Published: 2008-01-30 06:56:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description ~Intro~
These days, the oceans are chaotic. No one can go surfing or swimming anymore, because of how crazy the oceans have been. They constantly act as though it were storming. The reason for this is because the one who keeps the ocean calm has passed away and her succeeder hasn't taken her place.

~Prologue~
... As Kureema pitched forwards into the sea, bleeding, she closed her eyes and looked back on how she ended up this way...

~1~
... "Oh mom! I'll miss you so much!" A girl with long crimson hair, eighteen years old, named Kureema said to her mother while the two were dancing. She was moving out with her boyfriend and her family was having a party.
"That's the hundredth time you've said that!" Her mother shouted over the music.

When the party was over, everybody had their good bye hugs, kisses and tears.

Kureema and her boyfriend had barely made it through the apartment door when they were lip-locked and all over each other. Hands sliding under shirts to feel the skin underneath.
When he started to take his clothes off, she laid a hand on his chest, stopping him. She whispered "I'm not ready for this yet.." they had been wanting to for months now.
  He took her hand. "I'm sorry." he said in a tender voice.
"Why are you apologizing? I'm the one that keeps putting it off."
He stared at the floor.
She said "Hey! That doesn't mean we can't kiss the night away!"
They laughed together for a while. Their lips and tongues met again.


Kureema woke snuggled next to her boyfriend. He was still sound asleep. She watched him sleep. He was truly adorable when he slept.
  She loved him so much, she knew she wouldn't be able to bear it if he were to die..
He stirred slightly, then woke. His eyes met hers. "How long have you been watching me?"
"Awhile." she said simply.
"Not all night again, I hope." He said, grinning at her.
She giggled. "Not this time."  They wrapped their arms around each other with sleepy morning tenderness. "I love you so much.." She said quietly.
"I love you too, honey."
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Comments: 26

DeadlyVampireUnicorn [2008-05-26 20:08:27 +0000 UTC]

awww....it\'s good!!!!

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Tarashi In reply to DeadlyVampireUnicorn [2008-05-27 12:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Thankyous! >w<

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DeadlyVampireUnicorn In reply to Tarashi [2008-05-28 13:00:24 +0000 UTC]

ur welcies!!!

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claire-overton [2008-01-31 04:53:44 +0000 UTC]

I like this one better than you're rape Gaalee one. =___=

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Tarashi In reply to claire-overton [2008-01-31 05:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehe..

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gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-01-31 01:30:46 +0000 UTC]

AWWW, SHWEET.
(ill get ur mermaid gaalee started soon. I need a nap now though......O_O)
Mermaids are so......mystical.

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Tarashi In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-01-31 05:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Maybe my story'll help you out with writing yours.

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to Tarashi [2008-01-31 07:29:52 +0000 UTC]

maybe.

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Tarashi In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-01-31 08:07:00 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Hindari [2008-01-30 22:57:28 +0000 UTC]

aw! so cute!! cant w8 for the next one!! =3

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-01-31 05:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Teh next one is sad. D: Something bad happens.

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-01-31 23:49:13 +0000 UTC]

DDD: omg!! must read it!! must know!!

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-01 12:26:11 +0000 UTC]

TwT Workin on it. The story has a happy ending though. So if you think its too depressing, wait for the end. It'll make you smile. :3

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-01 22:52:17 +0000 UTC]

yay!! X3 for some reason i'm into stories with a sad ending.. it's like you think everything is goin to turn out okay in the end but then BAM its sad!! D: depressing, yes... but unpredictable and unique.
cant w8 for more!!

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-03 00:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Yayz! I'm slightly stuck, even though I have the whole thing already written out. XD I'm adding a few details here and there.

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-03 01:56:10 +0000 UTC]

ooo details! X3 details are good =3 well if you even need some help im always here!

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-03 02:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't like this one scene, so I was wanting to change it a bit.. cuz I hate the way it is now and I was having difficulty.

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-03 02:47:20 +0000 UTC]

o.. is it bc you cant seem to fit some more things in there while keeping it ... good? .. im bad at words V_V

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-03 04:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, pretty much yeah. X3

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-03 22:51:45 +0000 UTC]

XDD i have the same prob but im sure it'll come out awsm =3

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-04 12:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thankies. :3

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LazyCatArt [2008-01-30 18:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Cool^^

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friends come and go over time but true friends leave footprints on our hearts

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Tarashi In reply to LazyCatArt [2008-01-31 05:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Thankyouz! :3

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LazyCatArt In reply to Tarashi [2008-01-31 17:23:42 +0000 UTC]

no prob^^

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friends come and go over time but true friends leave footprints on our hearts

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Tarashi In reply to LazyCatArt [2008-02-03 00:56:56 +0000 UTC]

:3

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LazyCatArt In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-03 17:39:39 +0000 UTC]

XD

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friends come and go over time but true friends leave footprints on our hearts

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