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NeverlandRakuen [2012-05-14 21:22:14 +0000 UTC]
from : "they were so much alike" to "I promised you i would some day" i cried... D': good job *sobs* <3
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edkoolness [2011-09-15 21:28:10 +0000 UTC]
so cute
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miraHMH [2011-08-19 21:39:51 +0000 UTC]
So cute!! >3<
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love-fate [2011-03-10 04:27:47 +0000 UTC]
cute... >.<
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Angelkitten2 [2011-03-04 10:38:11 +0000 UTC]
i am gonna cry! the ending! so sad!
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minsra [2007-12-21 03:01:12 +0000 UTC]
yay! please continue! it's really Kawaii so far! when do you think you'll get chapter 2 done?
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minsra In reply to Tarashi [2007-12-21 14:21:52 +0000 UTC]
lol. don't be so hard on yourself. you're talented too, i've just been writing a lot lately (cause i have no life). And i've been reading hundreds of Fanfics, so you pick up on a few things when you write. but anyway,
i like this so far so please continue, and i'll go read that other one 'Gaara in America' lol sounds interesting already.
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Tarashi In reply to minsra [2007-12-21 20:23:18 +0000 UTC]
I think the first chapter is my fav, really. X3
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Tarashi In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2007-12-20 23:53:11 +0000 UTC]
I've gotten a paragraph done.. It makes meh wanna cry!!
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Tarashi In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2007-12-21 20:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Gaara's thinking stuff while holding onto Naruto.. but things change and they eat ramen.
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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2007-12-20 23:54:58 +0000 UTC]
I've been wanting to write one for a while... I finally couldn't resist!!
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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2007-12-21 01:27:05 +0000 UTC]
X3
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catqueen991 [2007-12-14 22:00:00 +0000 UTC]
I like where this is going! Please continue!
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