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Tarashi — GIA.. Review AND ALL of ch. 6
Published: 2008-02-15 04:11:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1018; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 2
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Description A review of the whole story (Been so long since I updated, I feel it's necessary):

Gaara moves to America with his siblings.
He kills a gang, an old man finding their dead bodies on his early morning walk. One man is left alive, though delirious.
Gaara has his first day of school.. Meeting Mr Bhakah (who inquires why he's ‘wearing eyeliner') and his gym and art teachers..(He awes the class with the number of pull ups in gym, and appeared to have enjoyed himself in art.)
Enter: Ms. Rebecca. She drives the two siblings home and kisses Gaara on the kanji, scaring the piss out of him.
She gets home, which can be seen from where Gaara and siblings are staying, and appears wounded.
He tries ramen for the first time and loves it.
Gaara sneaks out and a drunk guy thinks he's a prostitute. Gaara kills him. He finds the drunken blood addicting and leaves it..     Hoping on finding somebody else before returning home.
He decides to kill Ms Rebecca, because of the strange feelings he's having.
He ends up drinking some blood from the wound she'd gotten and stealing some of her cookies.
Some girls talk to Gaara and Kankuro.. One of them who we later find out is named Lola, touches one of Gaara's sandy bracelets and it attacks her, unnoticed by anyone but her and Gaara.
Mr. Baka inquires about Gaara's ‘eyeliner' and he calmly tells him it wasn't because of his dead parents and that, in fact, he was glad his dad was dead and that he wished he was the one that killed him.
A masochistic girl (Lola again) catches Gaara's interest.
He realizes basketball is fun!


~6~ Curiosity

Gaara's fame seemed to spread through out the school quickly. People pointed and talked excitedly when he walked by. It was making him uneasy. Being stared at by so many people...

Gaara headed toward his next class.. And saw a blonde talking to some strange people.  The direction of his next class made him have to walk by them.
The blonde guy was talking about him.. Saying things about how hot he was and how much he wanted to ‘do' him.
Gaara blushed as he rushed away from them, totally freaked out.

When he entered his last class, the first thing he noticed was the smell of clay and.. Blood. However faint it was. He glanced to his art teacher and saw she was wearing a shirt that had sleeves that went just past the elbows.. Covering the wound she had gotten on her arm.
Gaara worked some more on his current art project before finishing and turning it in. As he handed it to Ms Rebecca, he asked "Where did you get that wound from..?"
She squeaked and almost dropped the project that was just handed to her. "Oh, I just.. Wait, how did you find out?"
Gaara shook his head. "Never mind that. Tell me."
She blinked. "My boyfriend is a little...Oh, you never mind! It's not important!" she scurried off, leaving him alone. He returned to his seat.


Gaara and Kankuro met up after school and they walked home in silence.

The old man was driving home after a lot of shopping. He even got a gift for his granddaughter..    When he saw Gaara. He recalled back to the bloody scene when he saw the injured man. ‘H-he.. Has dark eyes.. A demonic tattoo above his eye and red, red hair..'
The old mans eyes bulged. He was staring at the murderer of a whole gang of people.. Probably more.
Kankuro said "Go straight home, got it?"
Gaara's eyes narrowed. "Don't tell me what to do.."
"Please!"
"Fine. I have nothing better to do." Gaara said coldly.
Kankuro twitched in fear, then left.
Gaara walked down the street.. He casually glanced up to an oncoming car.
The old man almost gasped as the gaze rose up to him. The eyes screamed of murder.
Gaara paid no heed to the old man.. Before the car was heading right for him. The old man was planning on killing him.
Sand got in the way of the oncoming car, stopping it. The old man screamed in fear when the car crashed into sand instead of a heartless killer.
Gaara stared in shock. Shukaku did have helpful moments. He decided that fleeing was a better idea. He leapt to a roof, then hopped across other roofs until he was home. He went straight to bed. School was tiresome...

The door to Gaara's room opened as Kankuro checked to see if he had really listened to him. The door closed again as Kankuro sighed in relief.

Gaara woke, bloodlust unusually high. Night had just fallen. He swore, realizing he slept a bit too late. He rose from his bed and wandered about his room for a few moments before exiting and eating some ramen and watching his two siblings watch the news with wide eyes. They were learning of Gaara's recent murders..and the car wreak of the old man.
Gaara paid no heed as he silently ate the ramen, wishing the liquid was blood.
When he finished he walked over to the window and stared outside. The black haired girl, Lola, was passing by. "I'm going out for a while.." he mumbled.
His frightened siblings said "What are you doing..?"
"Nothing important." Gaara said simply as he headed for the door to exit the building.

Soon Gaara was following Lola, his bloodlust rising slightly the longer he watched her. She eventually turned down onto a dark alley. He grinned. Maybe he could get his blood here?
She walked down the alley some before stopping and leaning against a wall, back sliding against it as she lowered herself to the ground. Gaara hid in the shadows near her, watching.
She stared tearfully at the wall as she removed a thick bracelet, revealing some cuts on her wrist. She drew a razor blade and mumbled "Nobody cares about me.." as she dragged the razor across her wrist.
Gaara's eyes widened. He couldn't do that even if he wanted to.
Lola started crying as she said "Nobody loves me.." and she cut herself again.
If Gaara's bloodlust wasn't incredibly high already, he probably would have laughed.
She sobbed silently as she stopped cutting across her wrist. She angled the blade to go down her arm. "Nobody will miss me.. If I killed myself, right?" she asked herself, pressing the blade into her skin and started to slide it down her arm, to kill herself.
Sand gripped the razor and flung it. Gaara stepped forward. "What are you doing?"
Lola squeaked in fear. "Wh-wh.."
Gaara's eyes narrowed as he stepped closer. Sand lifted her to her feet. She looked as though she were going to scream. She tried to back away but the sand stopped her as Gaara drew closer. "Were you about to kill yourself?" he asked in curiosity.
"Yes." Lola said flatly. She struggled against the sand. "Are you going to kill me?" She said almost hopefully.
"No.. Well maybe, but first.." Gaara said grabbing her arm and bringing the bloody wrist to his mouth.
Lola bit back a moan as the tongue licked at her self-inflicted cuts.
After a while, Gaara gave the cuts one last lick and pulled away. "Why waste blood..? It's always so good.."
Sand dripped off of her and she relaxed some. "Y-your eyes!" She squeaked, seeing that they were glowing.
"Oh.. Ignore that. It happens when blood excites me." Gaara said simply.
Lola gaped at him. "That's.. Not normal."
Gaara stared at her lazily. "I'm not exactly normal."
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Comments: 62

Darkness-Warrior98 [2011-05-23 16:08:23 +0000 UTC]

finish...? please...?

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SailorStarMiracle [2010-12-16 17:17:13 +0000 UTC]

but chapter 7 never came.....actually lola and i are alike i cut my wrist 5 times and they still havent healed yet i think there scars. PLEASE POST CHAPTER 7 I'M BEGGING U!

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Hakirai [2010-06-28 19:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Please write more when you get a chance X3

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Soukami [2009-07-07 14:17:11 +0000 UTC]

er...he fell asleep?? ...isn't that...bad..? ._. lol

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Houkari [2009-03-06 19:37:27 +0000 UTC]

I wanna read more! ^w^ I sence a Shukaku possesion comming!

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Reika-Ishitari [2008-12-29 16:57:42 +0000 UTC]

I want to see what happens next!!

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Nautoisawsome1408 [2008-08-27 06:19:23 +0000 UTC]

are you going to have the next one up soon

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Tarashi In reply to Nautoisawsome1408 [2008-08-30 21:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully..

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Nautoisawsome1408 In reply to Tarashi [2008-09-01 03:49:31 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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Tarashi In reply to Nautoisawsome1408 [2008-09-03 05:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankies! :3

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kitten-ears11 [2008-08-20 09:50:09 +0000 UTC]

COOL GAARA IS NOW A VAMPIRE...not really :3 when she cut her self, it made me think of my friend, because she called my other friend a bich and got upset and cut her self with bark it just left light cuts on her legs it was really retarded when she told me and my other friend, we were looking at her like WTF, it like she just wanted pity... it pissed me off, didn't tell her that though

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Tarashi In reply to kitten-ears11 [2008-08-20 18:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, cutting seems to be... something that we'd like not to think about, but it happens.. Hell, I"ve done it.

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kitten-ears11 In reply to Tarashi [2008-08-21 07:53:33 +0000 UTC]

when i get mad i just bite my hand, it helps but it dosn't put me to the point i want to die witch is good

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Nitari [2008-08-12 14:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Cool, i like this story! ^^ You should make Gaara go Shukaku and cause destruction on the city! (sorry I have had sugar....) Hope you don't mind me suggesting. I will watch you, keep up the good work!

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Tarashi In reply to Nitari [2008-08-14 01:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, thats a good idea. >D
And thanks for the watch. :3

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Nitari In reply to Tarashi [2008-08-14 09:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome for both things!

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Tarashi In reply to Nitari [2008-08-14 18:48:06 +0000 UTC]

>w<

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Nitari In reply to Tarashi [2008-08-14 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I want to read more! Gaara forever!

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Tarashi In reply to Nitari [2008-08-16 07:03:12 +0000 UTC]

>w< Yezzu, Gaa-sama forevar!! DD

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naruto-and-yugioh [2008-06-05 17:05:13 +0000 UTC]

ummm wow i absolutly love that gaar fic please write more when you have time i luv gaara he's adorable he just doesn't know it yet

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Tarashi In reply to naruto-and-yugioh [2008-06-08 21:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankyous! :3

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imevilbutidontcare42 [2008-05-30 20:17:21 +0000 UTC]

This is a REALLY good story. I hope you make chapter 7 soon.

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Tarashi In reply to imevilbutidontcare42 [2008-06-10 16:44:42 +0000 UTC]

thaaaankyous~~ >w<

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Hindari [2008-02-24 05:13:21 +0000 UTC]

AWSM!! loved it!! X3 kekeke be afraid lil girl be very afraid >D

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-24 22:11:57 +0000 UTC]

X3 Thankies!

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-24 22:44:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-02-23 19:08:40 +0000 UTC]


I can just picture trhat last scene....
Y-your eyes!"
"Oh.. Ignore that. It happens when blood excites me."
"That's.. Not normal."
Gaara stared at her lazily. "I'm not exactly normal."

(Go ON girl, MOAN! You know u wanna! I mean who wouldnt with GAARA licking your wounds??)

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Tarashi In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-02-23 19:13:35 +0000 UTC]

XDDD She did. Don't you pay attention?

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gaara-iz-my-rabu In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-23 20:37:10 +0000 UTC]

nuh uh....
it said she bit back a moan

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Universeofdreams [2008-02-18 06:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes I finally read all of this and now I'm hooked. Very different from what I thought it was like.

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Tarashi In reply to Universeofdreams [2008-02-18 20:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Hooked on GIA?

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Universeofdreams In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-18 23:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Yep. It interesting how Gaara would react living somewhere different. He is revealing so many different sides that you wouldn't expect plus some of his old ones.

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Tarashi In reply to Universeofdreams [2008-02-21 02:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I always thought people would complain about the teacher thing..

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Universeofdreams In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-21 05:07:34 +0000 UTC]

How she seems kind of flirty? Maybe she's just protective but not in a fan girl kind of way? I usually wait to see how characters respond to each other before making a bitch attack.

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Tarashi In reply to Universeofdreams [2008-02-23 18:37:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. The two may like each other, but I'm sure there isn't gonna be any annoying love stuff going on. X3 Rest assured. XD

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Universeofdreams In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-24 00:33:41 +0000 UTC]

*Dances around happy.* The changes you made a good. I plan on fixing on of mine completely since I killed it. I skipped way too many details and that's why I just decided to write a new one.

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Tarashi In reply to Universeofdreams [2008-02-24 02:07:02 +0000 UTC]

I haven't read any of your stuff yet.. *is swamped by 60+ deviations*

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Universeofdreams In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-24 05:21:42 +0000 UTC]

No problems. I still practing my writing skills anyway and I know what it's like to be off a few days. Messages and deviations galore. I don't what to know what it's like to be off longer then that.

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Tarashi In reply to Universeofdreams [2008-02-24 22:08:54 +0000 UTC]

I do, and it sucks, believe me. XD Don't allow them to pile up if possible. XDDD

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Hindari [2008-02-17 06:00:18 +0000 UTC]

DDD: im sorry for not commenting sooner!! the devs are pileing up on me!! and i try to look at everyone at lease =w=
anyways i love this!! and i shall track down that guy and kill him.. X3 you should try out some more scenes like that! it was very interesting.. if you need help with plot twists you could ask some of your other friends who like writing too! =3 .. just a thought though it's still awsm =w=

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-17 21:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm swamped by deviations and now COMMMENTS Urg! 70+comments to read and 40 devs.. TTwTT

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-17 21:39:22 +0000 UTC]

wow!! X3 the most ive gotten was 60 comments! 8D

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-18 22:31:19 +0000 UTC]

I've had 80 deviations before. Now THAT was a pain. And comments. XD

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-18 23:52:10 +0000 UTC]

XDD when i got on i had 70 messages!! DD: i got scared...

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-21 02:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Phear teh 70+!!!

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-21 02:21:36 +0000 UTC]

yesh!! ;_;

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Tarashi In reply to Hindari [2008-02-23 18:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Now I have that number in deviations.. *cries*

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Hindari In reply to Tarashi [2008-02-23 22:39:06 +0000 UTC]

D: OMG!! THATS WORSE!!

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gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-02-16 01:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Ohh! Poor baby! Lucky h he has shukaku, now! damn the old man!

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Tarashi In reply to gaara-iz-my-rabu [2008-02-16 03:34:00 +0000 UTC]

I lanned that little scene since I first THOUGHT of the old man. XD I've been itching to write that little thing for a looong time now. XDD

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