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Tajii-chan β Dreaming of Tomorrow
Published: 2009-12-27 15:35:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1621; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 62
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Contest Prize for ~!
For my before previous contest, where she placed first place along with her sister in a collab ^__^
She wanted me to draw her gorgeous character, but since I didn't have any reference with an outfit, I just made my own ^^' I hope you don't mind! <3
This is my first all-out traditional complete with a traditional background in a while XD; It's been fun <3
Art (c) =Tajii-chan
Character (c) *Hieyizar
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Thank you so much, Esther~!! <33
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Aw Tajii this is really adorable :Llove: <3. The background is really abstract and surreal, I like it makes the whole picture more interesting. The details are pretty much amazing 
The girl is cuttttte >;3. I love her expression; really friendly - the wink is cute and adds to her posture.
The outfit is nice and suits her well ^_^. She has pretty hair
I think her body looks out of proportioned though, like her arm is a little short and her legs look a bit too bent (they need to have more roundness to them) and not round but other than that she looks great 
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Thank you so much~!! 
And thank you for the critique; I'll definitely work on it
And I'm so sorry I haven't been commenting on your artwork lately! ;u; My inbox is flooded with lots of deviations D;
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No problem hun!
Aw you're welcome 
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-w- It's because of all of the clubs~~
I think the guidelines for submissions should be handled a bit better; but even with them it's hard to keep peoples' inboxes from overflowing >w>''
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I agree 
Thanks for faving anyway hun ^^.
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Nya, so cute and colorful
But I don't really like her legs ;-; Right one is too slim... Or the left one is too fat? I dunno
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Thank you~
XD It's the shape; it's a bit weird >w>'
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Yes, you're right
Happy new year, my dear!
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oooh çvç such a wonderful gift >v<
I really love the background *O*!! compliments
Her hair are very wonderful çç
you are so cute >v<
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wow!
your backgrounds are always so amazing
i suck at BG's OTL
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OwO I need to make less random bgs in the future though D;
Thank you though~!
D: Nooo~!! I'm sure you could make an awesome bg~!
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random bgs are good! 8D
its better than no background which most of my piece have
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Aw, she looks adorable. <3
The colours in your pictures always seem so lively, I envy you.
I seem to be stuck with rather toned down colours.
Anyway, looking at the picture one can see that your really know how to use your pencil.
But may I give you an advice or two?
You seem to be very dedicated to your drawing, which is a great thing, so I hope your take this as support to improve further.
Looking at your picture I can not really make out a light source.
In some parts it appears the light is coming from straight ahead, in other parts it comes from the right.
When you start to colour your piece think of the light first and make a note on the paper on where your want your light source to be. (Now, that's a fucked up sentence.
Your lineart is very clear and clean, really good!
Also you seem to have no problem to develop new characters (one of the hardest things imao).
One last thing that strikes me:
You might want to work a little bit on anatomy and proportion.
Her head appears to be too big compared to the rest of her body and her legs are angled in a very unnatural way.
I hope you don't take this the wrong way, I really enjoy your drawing, but I also think, that you are able to do better.
(Apologies for the fucked up English.)
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Aww~ Thank you!
Of course not, advice really helps me <3
I'll definitely work on light source; it's so hard for me to stick with one angle XD But I will try my best!! <33
Anyways, thanks for all of the critique and for your kinds words! ^^
And your english is fine!! ;w; Thank you so much once again~!
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Aww, she is so cute! I really like her pose and that she is winking~ Also her long hair is so pretty
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Γ§/////////////////////Γ§ waaaaaa 
I love all details that you've put in this amazing artwork çç!!<333
My Marì is beautiful drawed by you ;;!!!I'm very very happy
Her outfit is super wonderful thank you çvç!!!<333333 I adore her hair *__*!!!So soft <3 and the background is perfect!
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I'm really glad you like it~!!
I loved drawing your character~~ She's so beautiful ;w; <333
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Thank you çvç!!!
Happy new year dear <333
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To you as well~!! ^o^ <3
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Aww~~ Thank you~!!
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I really like her hair, the flow, the movement.. I like the background, it's so detailed..
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Thank you~!!
O.O I know.. but I can't figure out what it is
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Your backgrounds are always so inventive!!
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It's gorgeous
She looks beautiful. The outfit you gave is also really amazing, I love the details of it! And the coloring looks so good! Especially the clothing on her right leg, the blue and red go so well together
And te background is amazing
How do you come up with so many ideas to put in the background? It always looks so good!
I really love your detailed drawings with a traditional background
The rainbowy thing with swirls is so pretty
And you always have such nice 'touches'. Like the dots ^_^
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Aww~~ Thanks so much~!!
You're the first to notice the blends on her leg too 
o3o I just do random backgrounds ;^; I should do something a bit more creative and well thought out one day ^^'
Thank youuu~!!
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You're very welcome
ow really?
I'm sure Other did notice it to, it's one of the first things that caught my attention
You're really dont have to worry about it, it turned out great
But your backgrounds are very creative! I wish I could draw 'random' backgrounds. I like the randomness about it
Me to ~
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Aww~~ Thank you~!!! ;u; <333
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The colours are good but you can learn anatomical structure more
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Wahh, I love how colourful this picture is, Tajii~ *O* I can never use so many colours and make them blend together like you do! I love her outfit, and her wavy hair~ Her expression is extremely cute too!
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Aww~~ Thank you so much~!
Of course you can! ;w; You use colors very well too! ^_^
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Colorfulness~
Yay for traditional BGs..you did a good job, indeed!
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I love them~! <33
And thank you!
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