Comments: 30
rocqua [2009-04-02 12:17:03 +0000 UTC]
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i really like this shot, and i do for a couple of reasons:
the most obvious and best park of this picture is the very well done B&W, the contrast, especially on the fence here is just perfect, the pure white on nigh pure black. and it doesn't come with a loss of detail.
the composition also appeals to me, there seems to be a very nice balance, and there is a lot of detail in the shot, without the shot being cluttered or distracting. there is a very clear subject (the walkway/fence), which looks great, but it does more that that, it guides the eye to some of the detail, but most importantly, it offsets the centered position of the church, which is a secondary subject. and that object is again accentuated by the streaks in the clouds.
just as the walkway balances the scene, so does the negative space on the left, it gives a sense of space to the shot, focuses the attention on the detail, and again ofsets the centered position of the church.
in conclusion i really do like the shot. if i'd have to give some negative points (it is a critique after all, not just a praise) i'd mention how the church is kinda dark, the two wed walkwayboards being so dark, and there might be a bit to much clutter on the right with the detail of the walkway intersecting the already busy cityscape.
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rayamo [2009-04-03 11:57:50 +0000 UTC]
wow
awesome shot
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rayamo In reply to Svision [2009-04-10 12:07:26 +0000 UTC]
ur welcome
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Svision In reply to Cunday [2009-04-01 12:19:37 +0000 UTC]
Dankjewel!!
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fecklesslytrying [2009-03-31 03:17:01 +0000 UTC]
I totally need/want some nd grads, and maybe a regular nd filter too. Especially with warm weather on its way.
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Svision In reply to fecklesslytrying [2009-04-01 12:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. I am going to place the order this weekend I think.
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Svision In reply to Pfundner [2009-03-30 19:04:54 +0000 UTC]
I like that too. The light gets broken by the blades of the diaphragm.
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notcontrolfreaky [2009-03-30 18:20:46 +0000 UTC]
Professioneel gedaan man! Leuk om te lezen hoe het zit. Al vind ik de foto ietwat minder! Mooi, mooie lucht, dramatisch .. maar misschien te veel ruimte links ..
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Svision In reply to notcontrolfreaky [2009-03-30 19:05:34 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...ik zou eerder zeggen te veel drukte rechts. Die ruimte zorgt wel dat alles richting het vuurtorentje gaat.
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PlayBoots [2009-03-30 17:26:02 +0000 UTC]
great work mate!
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Svision In reply to PlayBoots [2009-03-30 17:52:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot my friend!!
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justeline [2009-03-30 16:41:32 +0000 UTC]
The contrast in this shot is just amazing Martijn! You got the movement of the clouds just right, they add such depth to the shot! Very difficult composition, I can totally see your point but to be honest it doesn't bother me. It's such a beautiful BW!
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TheDevilWearsSkirts [2009-03-30 16:29:34 +0000 UTC]
Very nice exposure and lighting but the composition isn't very pleasing. My eye cant seem to move from the pillar in the middle of the screen
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TheDevilWearsSkirts In reply to Svision [2009-03-31 17:22:24 +0000 UTC]
Ooops sorry! I only read some of it this morning before school. I didn't have much time!
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Svision In reply to TheDevilWearsSkirts [2009-03-31 17:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Nvm, I don't like reading so I also read a lot of artist's comments for only 50%
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Svision In reply to JeRReZ [2009-03-30 17:15:16 +0000 UTC]
Dankjewel!! Het was een leuke ervaring hoor.
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JeRReZ In reply to Svision [2009-03-30 22:12:12 +0000 UTC]
ja kan het mij voorstellen :d
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Jannette92 In reply to Svision [2009-03-31 15:19:54 +0000 UTC]
no problemo! ^^
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