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Description I MAY BE WRITING A FAN FICTION ABOUT THIS AND I WANT PLOT IDEAS!!! PLEASE COMMENT WITH SUGGESTIONS!

Okay so I saw this picture of a mermaid yesterday [link] (it's pretty gory, so don't click if you're sensative to lots of blood and guts and a poor little mermaid girl getting chopped into pieces)

and anyway, it got me looking at other pictures of mermaids and stuff (much less gory) of course, you know, just lookin for some nice pictures of bewbs etc. So in my search, I realized that there are a lot of really pretty fin designs and stuff, like they're not all just the steriotypical "The Little Mermaid" style, so it got me thinking...

I'd also like to credit ~AkatsukiMemberWoolfy for some of my inspiration for having written a fan fiction (SasoDei) lately where Deidara was a goldfish that turned human by touching human skin [link] .

Also I would like to credit my big brother ~AlexKingOfTheDamned for his cosplay design [link] with the beautiful spotted koi fish.

I took these three ideas into consideration as I came up with this idea and a kind of back story to go with it...

Who knows? I may end up writing a short fanfiction about this… any takers?

So Deidara is a merman (that much is obvious ne?) he’s got the pretty spotted koi fish thing going on, but he’s still an ocean merman. So he likes to swim close to shore and listen to the waves crashing against the beach because he thinks it’s the most beautiful sight and sound in the world, beauty for an instant, then the waves recede… art… you know the drill. So one day, one of the other merfolk, Hidan no less, decides to pull a prank on Deidara and ties his tailfin to an anchor he pulled off of a sunken ship. Of course merfolk can only breathe underwater, so it’s no problem that Deidara sinks right to the bottom, the problem is that so far towards the shore, he gets caught in the undertow and a huge wave carries him ashore where he is beached over a rock and can’t reach his tail to undo the anchor. He is stranded there for a long while, the rock being half-submerged so that hardly anyone on the beach can see him, but too close to the shore for any of the merfolk to dare trying to rescue him. Finally the tide goes all the way out, leaving Deidara totally beached, baking in the sun and unable to breathe (note the gills on his neck, he can’t breathe air). Now Inuyasha’s spending a day at the beach with his best friend Miroku who is trying to get the hanyou’s mind off of his recent breakup with his longtime girlfriend Kagome. They’re just bumming around, looking at all the hot chicks in bikinis and walking up the beach when Inuyasha spots the gigantic tail fin draped over the rock thinking that some big fish got washed up on shore. Of course when he runs over to investigate what does he find? Deidara of course!

I’ll let you think about the rest of the story, I already have a clichéd plot in mind, but I actually want to ask you for suggestions!!!

[EDIT] I decided to go with an original universe theme (for Inuyasha at least) instead of AU. Prologue here. I did a lot of research on geography and mythology to put it together, I hope you love it!

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Comments: 84

deidaraobito In reply to ??? [2011-02-05 21:56:54 +0000 UTC]

xDDD omg. . . . you should like make someone be chasing him like kisame or something and then he should like mget hit with kisames sward and get stuck on the beach by that xDDD
._. yes. . . . i know it fails .. . .
and make inuyasha go down there cause hes being chased by bumblebees xDD

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-05 21:57:51 +0000 UTC]

please read the discription, I have the first part of the fic (up to the point of the picture) all figured out already

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-05 21:59:40 +0000 UTC]

i didnt wanna read it cause it looked like alot of words xDDD do something where itachi sends a bunch of bumblebees

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-05 22:11:26 +0000 UTC]

ffffff Itachi is a sea-otter in this XDDD HAHA! mermaid friends XDDD no, Inuyasha went to the beach with Miroku to help him get over his recent break up with Kagome. Deidara likes watching the waves break on the shore (ocean version of explosions) but Hidan ties an anchor to his tailfin and he gets caught in the undertow and carried ashore by a huge wave.

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-05 23:27:23 +0000 UTC]

xDD omg hidan, that bitch!
just make soneone be chased by bumble bees xDDDD

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-05 23:30:09 +0000 UTC]

what's the sudden obsession with bees?

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 00:26:38 +0000 UTC]

[link]
these cosplayers from new-zeland !!! XDDDDDD they were talking aout killing pein!! XDD omg. . .. just watch that it'll explane the bumblebee thing xDD

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 00:38:59 +0000 UTC]

what the fuck dude... we're not doing bumble bees! they don't even sting! XDDD

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 00:41:24 +0000 UTC]

xDD maby they do! xDD i bet we could get enough bumble bees!

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 01:14:33 +0000 UTC]

ffffffffffffffffffffffffff

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 01:15:47 +0000 UTC]

xD or we could get roxas to strip randomly for axel on the beach and then that turns deidara into a person instead of a fishy!! O:

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 02:13:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm thinking it has something to do with eating human food.

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 02:21:02 +0000 UTC]

i fed my fish part of a hamburger once and he didnt turn into a person my dad got mad tho ._.

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 05:34:49 +0000 UTC]

XD you probably shouldn't feed actual fish people food XDDD

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 07:57:02 +0000 UTC]

see you just dissagreed with yourself D: if you feed deidara people food hes gonna die!!

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 08:03:38 +0000 UTC]

nu uh! cause he's not a fish, he's a ningyo!

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 08:13:47 +0000 UTC]

pft. . . . . same thing >.>

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 08:18:40 +0000 UTC]

very different... upon consuming the flesh of the ningyo, one takes on an unnatural longevity that can appear as immortality. But capturing them was said to cause great storms and one washing up on the beach was said to be an omen or war or disaster.

you can't say that about a fish. XDDD

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 08:20:43 +0000 UTC]

pft. . .. >.> maby you can if your an R-tard like me. . . .

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 08:36:08 +0000 UTC]

XDDD so you gonna read the prologue or not? XDDD

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 08:42:35 +0000 UTC]

i read like 3 sentances and then i was like D: this is boreing words!!!
xD sowwie i fail!

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 08:46:52 +0000 UTC]

~sigh~ glad to know I'm boring...

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 09:01:58 +0000 UTC]

xDD sorry! i thought i told you that you shouldnt expect big things from a FAIL
um. . . . i've read about 20 pages of one book this whole skool year so ya' think imma read a bunch of words randomly in my free time? XD

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-06 18:33:51 +0000 UTC]

you poor baby! You should read more often! it's like TV inside your head!

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-08 06:00:25 +0000 UTC]

TV IS BOREING TOO! D:<

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-08 06:05:21 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOD YOU ARE DOOOOOOOOOOOMED!!!

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-09 01:59:26 +0000 UTC]

IKR! O: cause im probably gonna fall off a building!!even tho. . . . i dont go on top of buldings ._. i'll probably just fall off a door

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-09 05:07:24 +0000 UTC]

DDDDDDDDDDDD8 that's not good!!!

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deidaraobito In reply to Stelera [2011-02-10 02:56:22 +0000 UTC]

ikr! O:

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itachis-twin In reply to ??? [2011-02-05 19:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww! You are excellent! When I saw your work, just shine a happy smile! You're a miracle! *jumping on the couch*
Deidara so cool! He was after the storm passed to the bank? You wrote a lot of comments, and I was so hard to read a lot! But I read it, the devil's sake! >зD

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Stelera In reply to itachis-twin [2011-02-05 20:03:37 +0000 UTC]

it wasn't a srotm. Hidan tied his tail to an anchor and he got caught in the undertoe and washed up in a big wave. I felt like a storm would be too cliche.

let me try something!

позвольте мне пробовать кое-что!

это не был шторм. Hidan связывал его хвост с якорем, и он был пойман в undertoe и выбросил на берег в большой волне. Я чувствовал, что шторм будет также клише.

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itachis-twin In reply to Stelera [2011-02-05 20:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the translation, I have tried to read your comment! 8D

Warning too late to read. I saw the picture, I was sick, I realized that is not yet guro .. хЪ
It is a pity that English is not my native language. I would love to read fanfic about Goldfish. :З
Pretty kimono with Deidara, who drew your brother.
Oh, did not see the gills on his neck, pointed out that thanks!. I liked the sketch to the fanfic! Very! I want romance! Great idea to interpret art explosion in the breaking waves on the beach! You're done!

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Stelera In reply to itachis-twin [2011-02-05 20:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Большое спасибо! Я настолько рад, что Вы любите идею заговора, которую я имел. Конечно должен быть роман! Поцелуи рыбы! XDDD я хотел бы взять любые предложения, чтобы Вы имели. Я хочу сделать заговор меньшим количеством клише, потому что в настоящее время - чувства слишком много как "Небольшая Русалка" заговор. Вы понимаете? Я не знаю, переводилось ли то кино когда-либо на русский язык.

Так или иначе, спасибо всегда для ваших комментариев! Я люблю получить известие от Вас. Вы - один из моих лучших наблюдателей.

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