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Description I MAY BE WRITING A FAN FICTION ABOUT THIS AND I WANT PLOT IDEAS!!! PLEASE COMMENT WITH SUGGESTIONS!

Okay so I saw this picture of a mermaid yesterday [link] (it's pretty gory, so don't click if you're sensative to lots of blood and guts and a poor little mermaid girl getting chopped into pieces)

and anyway, it got me looking at other pictures of mermaids and stuff (much less gory) of course, you know, just lookin for some nice pictures of bewbs etc. So in my search, I realized that there are a lot of really pretty fin designs and stuff, like they're not all just the steriotypical "The Little Mermaid" style, so it got me thinking...

I'd also like to credit ~AkatsukiMemberWoolfy for some of my inspiration for having written a fan fiction (SasoDei) lately where Deidara was a goldfish that turned human by touching human skin [link] .

Also I would like to credit my big brother ~AlexKingOfTheDamned for his cosplay design [link] with the beautiful spotted koi fish.

I took these three ideas into consideration as I came up with this idea and a kind of back story to go with it...

Who knows? I may end up writing a short fanfiction about this… any takers?

So Deidara is a merman (that much is obvious ne?) he’s got the pretty spotted koi fish thing going on, but he’s still an ocean merman. So he likes to swim close to shore and listen to the waves crashing against the beach because he thinks it’s the most beautiful sight and sound in the world, beauty for an instant, then the waves recede… art… you know the drill. So one day, one of the other merfolk, Hidan no less, decides to pull a prank on Deidara and ties his tailfin to an anchor he pulled off of a sunken ship. Of course merfolk can only breathe underwater, so it’s no problem that Deidara sinks right to the bottom, the problem is that so far towards the shore, he gets caught in the undertow and a huge wave carries him ashore where he is beached over a rock and can’t reach his tail to undo the anchor. He is stranded there for a long while, the rock being half-submerged so that hardly anyone on the beach can see him, but too close to the shore for any of the merfolk to dare trying to rescue him. Finally the tide goes all the way out, leaving Deidara totally beached, baking in the sun and unable to breathe (note the gills on his neck, he can’t breathe air). Now Inuyasha’s spending a day at the beach with his best friend Miroku who is trying to get the hanyou’s mind off of his recent breakup with his longtime girlfriend Kagome. They’re just bumming around, looking at all the hot chicks in bikinis and walking up the beach when Inuyasha spots the gigantic tail fin draped over the rock thinking that some big fish got washed up on shore. Of course when he runs over to investigate what does he find? Deidara of course!

I’ll let you think about the rest of the story, I already have a clichéd plot in mind, but I actually want to ask you for suggestions!!!

[EDIT] I decided to go with an original universe theme (for Inuyasha at least) instead of AU. Prologue here. I did a lot of research on geography and mythology to put it together, I hope you love it!

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Comments: 84

Freaknweird65 [2011-07-22 01:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Poor little coi-merman! I hope Inuyasha helps, but he'll probably just poke it with a stick for a while before doing anything about it.

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Stelera In reply to Freaknweird65 [2011-07-22 02:04:10 +0000 UTC]

There's a whole fan fiction based on this one picture if you want to find out what really happens!

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Freaknweird65 In reply to Stelera [2011-07-22 03:46:54 +0000 UTC]

is there a link to it?

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Stelera In reply to Freaknweird65 [2011-07-22 04:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Sure is. [link] It's a little heavy on the details and it is a shonen ai... just a heads up.

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Freaknweird65 In reply to Stelera [2011-08-02 18:25:22 +0000 UTC]

*shrugs
meh, I'll try it anyways ^^

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Stelera In reply to Freaknweird65 [2011-08-07 05:03:03 +0000 UTC]

enjoyed?

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Freaknweird65 In reply to Stelera [2011-08-07 20:33:22 +0000 UTC]

yep ^^

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Stelera In reply to Freaknweird65 [2011-08-08 04:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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Freaknweird65 In reply to Stelera [2011-08-09 01:20:48 +0000 UTC]

yep sure thing!

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EVAUnit4A [2011-02-09 02:15:57 +0000 UTC]

I have a folder in my Favorites dedicated exclusively to non-Disney mermaids, so if you wanna brows through there for ideas...?

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Stelera In reply to EVAUnit4A [2011-02-09 05:06:56 +0000 UTC]

I already have a solid discription for all my characters, but I did look through the folder ^_^ would you mind reading my first couple of chapters? maybe give me some feedback?

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werewolfninja96 [2011-02-06 21:10:35 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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Stelera In reply to werewolfninja96 [2011-02-07 03:58:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks! there is now a fanfiction to go with it too! (or at least the beginnings of one)

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wilberarthur [2011-02-06 15:05:53 +0000 UTC]

YEA GO INU!

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Stelera In reply to wilberarthur [2011-02-06 18:27:05 +0000 UTC]

da dada da! Inuyasha to the rescue!

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bob-brown [2011-02-06 04:40:11 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome~ Can I do a picture of Mermaid Dei? (I probably won't post it)
And yeah, you really should make a story with this >w<

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-06 05:32:39 +0000 UTC]

awsome you totally should! and you should totally post it!

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 06:30:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm currently trying. I have now found out how badly I can't draw guys. Better get practicing I guess^^

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-06 06:44:48 +0000 UTC]

practice makes perfect... well that's not true, there is no such thing as perfect in art XDDD

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 07:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, I agree! There is no such thing as perfect~ That reminds me of the crazy science guy (I forgot who he is) in Bleach.

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-06 07:33:27 +0000 UTC]

I've only watched the Bleach Movie XD

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 07:37:16 +0000 UTC]

I've read a bit of the manga but nothing else. I gave up since I lost my spot

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-06 07:42:11 +0000 UTC]

XD oh, have you seen I posted the prologue to my fanfiction about merman Deidara XD

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 07:49:54 +0000 UTC]

I have now^^
But gosh, it is SO detailed^^

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-06 08:04:12 +0000 UTC]

it's not too detailed D8 it's really short!

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 09:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Well it's small details :3
Like pods and such X3

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-06 18:31:18 +0000 UTC]

XD well I just made most of that stuff up off the top of my head XDDD

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-07 00:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Then you have one hell of a smart head. XP

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-07 04:00:07 +0000 UTC]

XDDD not necessarily smart... just creative XD

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-07 11:49:15 +0000 UTC]

XD Well said! Creative is the new intelligence! XD

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Stelera In reply to bob-brown [2011-02-07 16:05:25 +0000 UTC]

sounds good to me!!! XDDD

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bob-brown In reply to Stelera [2011-02-08 05:25:28 +0000 UTC]

XD
Then it's all good!

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-06 01:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Poor Deidara XD

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Stelera In reply to AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-06 02:00:33 +0000 UTC]

yup, he's suffocating. thanks for the inspiration!!! 8D

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 02:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Indeed XD Lolz No problemo ^O^

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Stelera In reply to AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-06 05:34:19 +0000 UTC]

poor dei, he's not like the little mermaid, he'll die outa water for too long

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 06:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Indeed XD Lolz

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Stelera In reply to AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-06 07:15:39 +0000 UTC]

quite! he be suffering big time! oh but you're good at inventing magic, and merfolk are different from magic fish so I say screw to copying your idea of the saliva or blood thing to let him breathe... I am thinking that eating human food will turn them human... of course I also think that is really lame... would you mind helping me?

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy In reply to Stelera [2011-02-06 09:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I wouldnt reckon human food would be too good an idea cause it has lots of complications, like would eating fish and chips be considered human food or merfood? XD Lolz Maybe he has to have something of human creation touching him, like Inuyasha can give him a necklace, or braclet, or shirt or something XD

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Stelera In reply to AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-06 18:30:49 +0000 UTC]

hm that is an idea... I also had another thought, that perhaps there is a talisman, some sunken treasure that will turn merfolk human on contact, but it rests at the bottom of the bay and Deidara nearly drouns getting the talisman because once he grabs it he immediately starts turning human.

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy In reply to Stelera [2011-02-07 09:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good to me ^O^

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Stelera In reply to AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-07 16:10:05 +0000 UTC]

changed it again... I'm going with sutras. like paper seals?

so someone's gotta write up a sutra and stick it on his back (which must be dry) and then he can't get it wet after that or the ink in the sutra will run and the seal will wear off and he'll turn back into a ningyo

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy In reply to Stelera [2011-02-08 08:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good to me ^-^

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Stelera In reply to AkatsukiMemberWoolfy [2011-02-08 16:27:09 +0000 UTC]

awsome!

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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy In reply to Stelera [2011-02-09 08:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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Gonorrhea-chan [2011-02-05 22:00:19 +0000 UTC]

BRILLIANT!!!!!

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Stelera In reply to Gonorrhea-chan [2011-02-05 22:08:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you... I think

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Gonorrhea-chan In reply to Stelera [2011-02-05 22:12:59 +0000 UTC]

that is good

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deidaraobito [2011-02-05 21:13:34 +0000 UTC]

-decided not to read description cause im lazy-
deidara looks pretty dead ._. . . .

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Stelera In reply to deidaraobito [2011-02-05 21:15:48 +0000 UTC]

he's suffocating, can't breathe out of the water. thinking of writing a fan fiction based on this. any plot suggestions?

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