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Zi-Joy [2019-08-21 04:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Awesome
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Tinselfire [2018-02-27 21:51:07 +0000 UTC]
Been coming back to this for days, and seem to find something new every time - even moreso than in much of your most detailed work, looking closer really makes a huge difference. From a distance, with the large blocky shapes and flat shading, the motorbike could have come right out of contemporary WH40k, but on closer inspection the "breadbox Meccano" aesthetics take over. Rough and stout components wrapped in thin riveted sheet metal with festive enamel colours; the very finest post-war design had to offer.
There are a few peculiarities, such as the skewed wheels and the lack of foot pedals, but could very well see this motorcycle being built as an experimental speedster in the early 1950's; a road-legal descendant of the 1930's record chasers. The only thing that marks it as a sci-fi vehicle seems to be the headlight - absolutely love this monstrous apparatus! Find it very fitting how the transparent components have a distinguishing colour, as the goggles seem there to protect against more than headwind: The headlight looks to have not so much an output rated in Candela, but a yield rated in tons.
(On a side note, may be a period-appropriate pun there for Swedish speakers: In 1950-1980 slang, bike lights are known as "cat eyes".)
The description sheds a lot of light on a well-rounded character - find it especially noteworthy how she has some interests that complicate her character, and with which she is not immediately associated by her surroundings. There are also some thoughtworthy details: While it makes sense linguistically for anthropomorphic cats to have litters, does this mean that she is one of six siblings, or of a sextuplet birth?
While I am uncertain if - in the today relatively open market of religions - there is a correlation between certain professions and beliefs, find it a nice touch how she follows the Egyptian tradition (bonus points for this not simply being ascribed to her being a cat). After all, almost all the Egyptian gods are described in detail as being artisans or inventors - even the thoroughly destructive Set makes an ill-conceived attempt at nautical engineering in his struggle with Horus - so this feels very appropriate for a mechanic.
religion is like a penis. You can be proud of it but you probably shouldn't shove it in someone's face.
Okay, I snickered.
Wise words, though, and seemingly with a subtler practicality in it. Coming from a feline and assuming anthros have reproductive anatomy resembling their base animals, doing the latter could probably lacerate someone.
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SouthpawLynx In reply to Tinselfire [2018-02-28 23:30:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to hear your thoughts. I'm not good at drawing mechanical things and it took quite a lot of effort. Cant believe I didn't think of foot pedals.
I am not a writer so it is a relief to hear I made a decent character in the details. I took term litter quite literal and say it was a sextuplet birth (poor mama). Since I had already given her an ankh previously, I did actually take deliberate steps to avoid the stereotype that could have been ascribed to her being a cat. I'm not surprised you noticed something like that.
I'm not sure where I picked up that phrase about religion, but it is a favorite of mine. I would rather not think about the implications with barbed feline anatomy, haha.
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SouthpawLynx In reply to Andibi [2018-02-17 07:33:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. This was actually pretty fun. I tried my best to avoid making a "Mary Sue" and tried make an interesting and balanced character instead. I hope I succeeded.
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SouthpawLynx In reply to Cambion-Hunter [2018-02-17 05:32:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah kinda but before any sort of apocalypse happened.
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