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Published: 2009-04-02 02:31:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 914; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 5
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Description your eyelids were like a map of the milky way and I kept finding  myself lost. every time we kissed and you close your eyes, the milky way sucked me into a pool of unknown planets and beauty.

you make stars jealous.

your lips were like the ring orbiting a planet.
mine were the planet.
but your arms became a protective halo, wrapping me in a gorgeous glow.

you deserve the sun, so bright you have to look away, and a book on 100 ways to make you happy, and a voice to sing you a sugary lullaby with a melody made of your dreams.
but you’ve settled for me, who can give you a silent cold moon, and a book on 100 theories for evolution, and a voice to never lie.
and I hope that’s enough because
do you know how many times I’ve told you I love you?

I find myself studying the peaks and mountains of your feet and toes and I couldn’t be any happier; tracing your feet just makes me feel like we’ve bonded.
and your little pigs just make me smile.

before you, I was the shadow that everyone feared but you’ve changed me.
for the better.
now I see the sun reflecting off my skin and diamonds shining under your halo.

and you’re like the whole galaxy to me.
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Comments: 56

Death-in-Crimson [2009-05-03 18:20:37 +0000 UTC]

beautiful and perfect and amazing!! i love it

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to Death-in-Crimson [2009-05-03 18:23:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you. and thanks for the favorites<3

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Death-in-Crimson In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-05-03 18:29:50 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome ... it's a pleasure to read something as pure and simple as your work

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to Death-in-Crimson [2009-05-06 00:55:15 +0000 UTC]

I've never heard my writing as 'ure and simple', thank you!

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Death-in-Crimson In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-05-06 07:43:36 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure ... you're an amazing writer and it is a pleasure to read your work...

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platinummyr [2009-04-14 23:17:24 +0000 UTC]

You use wonderful enough words as it is

You'd make stars jealous,
Except they can't be.
Stars shine brighter
In the radiance they see.

Always pointing saying
"Look at her! Not me!"

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to platinummyr [2009-04-14 23:42:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you.<3

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platinummyr In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-15 00:08:10 +0000 UTC]

<3

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ohsostarryeyed [2009-04-07 18:16:51 +0000 UTC]

quite beautiful.

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to ohsostarryeyed [2009-04-07 21:08:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dear.<3

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i-watch-people [2009-04-06 23:56:18 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! It's really adorable, like, really. <3

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to i-watch-people [2009-04-06 23:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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i-watch-people In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-07 00:03:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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EsotericHeart [2009-04-04 21:59:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad you joined the chain!

You can't use pretty words, my butt. This is absolutely amazing and it has fantastic imagery.

"you make stars jealous"
I wish I could make stars jealous.

Lovely job, dear.

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to EsotericHeart [2009-04-05 01:22:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you did too!

Awh, thanks so much.

I'm sure you can.:]

Thanks.
<3

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carala [2009-04-04 21:09:44 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to carala [2009-04-05 01:20:51 +0000 UTC]

THANKYOUUU!
<3

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carala In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-05 21:49:44 +0000 UTC]

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x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-03 05:18:48 +0000 UTC]

who said you couldn't use pretty words? Every word is beautiful. You just have to know when to use it at it's best, and here you've succeeded.

I would copy a little portion and put it here in italics and say I love it best, but this is a true fantastic piece, any one separate part means nothing without the others, I love it all

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-04 18:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much. That means so much to me.
and I say I can't use pretty words. their's are prettier.

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-04 18:52:15 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, just don't g reading dictionaries just to find "pretty" words alright? your writing is fantastic the way it is

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-04 18:56:45 +0000 UTC]

I can't make any promises. I want to use big unique words like them.

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-05 01:34:10 +0000 UTC]

alright, just remember, knowledge comes with experience, my vocabulary increased most from sixth grade to freshman year in high school. Being treated more like an adult can't hurt either

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-05 02:17:07 +0000 UTC]

eh, you're right. then I guess I'm not treated like an adult much.:/

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-05 05:47:48 +0000 UTC]

you will be, just give it a year or two, as soon as you hit high school everything changes

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-05 15:38:02 +0000 UTC]

well gosh, that sounds dramatic.
[besides, I don't have much patience]

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-05 17:42:46 +0000 UTC]

I guess it mostly depends on how you handle it, some people crack under the pressure, others thrive.

Don't worry I don't have any patience either, right now I have to attempt to patiently wait 3 months just to see my girlfriend in person again. Yeah it sucks, but I will wait, because I know that she's worth the wait. She's worth the whole year I've gone since I've been with her

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-06 21:22:48 +0000 UTC]

well I'm a real cracker.

that's beautiful. I bet you're getting uber antsy waiting for her. tell me how it goes when she comes.<3

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-06 21:30:23 +0000 UTC]

haha, she's not coming, I'm going, I just have to wait for summer so that we have plenty of free time to be with each other. I do miss her, alot, but soon I'll at least be able to see her smile again, damn US postal service, delivering that webcam slow oh well, I suppose it can't be helped.

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-06 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]

oh, still great, eh? have you guys seen each other in person before? [I'm slight confused, is this online relationship or she move?]

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-06 22:28:44 +0000 UTC]

haha, no, we met on vacation last summer (early june) and when we parted we kept in touch and things grew from there. now we talk almost every day through texting and calling, and whenever I see her on Facebook we talk. it's not fantastic I'd say, but it's better than never hearing from her again. She's really great, and I feel lucky just to know her.

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-08 00:59:53 +0000 UTC]

OHHHHSUMMERLOVE! that's really great. GOODLUCKBUDDY!

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-08 03:25:46 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah, right now in my metal tech/jeweling class in school I'm making her a piece, when I finish it I'll put some photos on my DA page, it's really pretty, it's a layered silver ring but right now it's not very "ring-shaped" it's flat (well it's kinda bent, but I'll flatten it xD) I have to file, skim, and sand the edges of the top, then flatten it and solder it to the bottom after I cut the blank, then I have to design, cut, file, skim, and sand the edges, then I have to round and solder the seam, then I have to file, skim, and sand the whole thing to get the fire scale off, next I have to clear out the channel, after that I get to buff it and polish it, when that's done it'll look all prtty-ful and will be ready to give to her.

it sounds like a huge amount of work, and it is, but it goes by fast, I did a good channel cut so I won't need to shape it much with the file, the sanding is just to polish it up, flattening makes it solder correctly, and any filing and sanding after will go by quickly, just have to get that nasty fire scale off, the rest is just finishing up and making it ready to be worn without being dangerous or sharp

so... all in all it'll take a few weeks, maybe a month, hopefully it'll go without as many hitches as my last piece had... flattening that thing was a nightmare! I just hope it'll fit her finger, I'm counting on her hands being my size or slightly smaller

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-13 21:27:16 +0000 UTC]

awh, that's so sweet of you! so much work, but something so beautiful. please tell me when you upload it, how hard she screams or cries when she sees it and so on.

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-13 21:54:52 +0000 UTC]

oh I'll put the photo here, it IS art you know I've got it flat, tomorrow is the soldering demo for the tops/bottom so after that's done the rest will fall smoothly and quickly into place I hope

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to x-Guardian-Angel-x [2009-04-14 15:00:35 +0000 UTC]

it most definitely is art! tell me when it is finished!:]

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x-Guardian-Angel-x In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-14 22:04:53 +0000 UTC]

alright, I'm soldering tomorrow, apparently the firescale doesn't stick to silver nearly as well as it does to nickel and brass (the metals for my last project), so as soon as I give it a once over with 400 grit sand paper it'll be ready for rounding, soon after that I solder the seam, then do a quick re round and 400-800 sandpaper, then I can buff it and it'll be done, I should be starting to round it by the end of tomorrow, it only takes about 5-10 mins to solder, plus 15 mins in the pickle acid, most of my time tomorrow and friday will be downtime because of pickle haha

I should take some photos of my last project and put them up here, I'll do that in a few mins

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SamanthaSkellington [2009-04-02 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]

I really love this piece

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to SamanthaSkellington [2009-04-02 23:05:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you.<3

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d00dbiteme [2009-04-02 07:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Really detailed. I love it!
Why did you title it so?

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to d00dbiteme [2009-04-02 23:06:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.:]
hmm, I dunno. just cause I love the feets part.
^___^

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paperheartsyndrome [2009-04-02 06:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Awwww. Yes!
I'm so glad you wrote this. And it's wonderful.
(plus you said it wouldn't be happy but I'm pretty sure this is)
I love the idea of making stars jealous. That's pretty magnificent. I want to make stars jealous. =]

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to paperheartsyndrome [2009-04-02 23:07:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
well, my original plan wasn't so happy.
I think you do.:]

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paperheartsyndrome In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-03 02:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Either way, it turned out nicely

(and I think you make the stars jealous as well)

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to paperheartsyndrome [2009-04-04 18:33:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you much.<3

we both do.;D

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TheAfterWhys [2009-04-02 06:51:13 +0000 UTC]

Drat. FAQ #81: How can I make links to other deviants, deviations, or websites? ......that g was supposed to be a q. What in the world??? I have a sick sick mind apparently. Forgive me for my transgression.

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to TheAfterWhys [2009-04-02 23:07:43 +0000 UTC]

LOLS!
I have a sick mind too, dear.

anyways. thanks for that.

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TheAfterWhys In reply to SoUpRRmaN [2009-04-03 03:53:37 +0000 UTC]

very welcome. =]

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TheAfterWhys [2009-04-02 06:47:58 +0000 UTC]

This made me so incredibly happy I wanted to hug someone. I really did.

For the links try here :fag81: under UserName (near the top) linking and Pop Up Descriptions (near the bottom).

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SoUpRRmaN In reply to TheAfterWhys [2009-04-02 23:08:17 +0000 UTC]

awh, thanks! I'm open for hugs any time.:]



and yeh. thanks for the link!

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