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Published: 2009-04-01 18:49:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 505; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 6
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Description i.

You are-
you are my world.
No matter
the amount of scars
you give me,
I always come running back
(your arms wide open).
Because I be(lie)ve
that you can change.

ii.

when we met i
remember seeing the
sunset in your eyes
and i remember immediately
giving myself away
(to you).

iii.

Your hands
run along my spine
and I hear you murmur,
"You're mine;
only mine."
And I know it's true;
because I've known you,
loved you,
I'll never be able to love another.
I gave you my heart and soul
(why haven't you given me yours?)

iv.

i feel my heart getting
heavy as we’re tangled
under sheets. you’re the sex
and the music.
as your stone-cold heart beats
those familiarly follow beats
i carefully listen.
and it's scenes like this that
will be the death of us.

v.

I should know better,
I should walk (run) away from you
and the hurt and the lies and
the damn inconsistences
but
I guess I'm a sucker for pain
so keep dishing it,
darling;
I love it when you
tear me apart.

vi.

i wonder if i’ll
ever get tired of this
bitter-sweet symphony.
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Comments: 34

Foreststone [2013-02-24 05:07:10 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutley beautiful

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losingmyfaith In reply to Foreststone [2013-03-22 23:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! (:

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simplysamwise [2009-05-05 16:27:18 +0000 UTC]

love this.
you guys are such great writers!

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losingmyfaith In reply to simplysamwise [2009-05-06 00:39:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks from both of us!

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simplysamwise In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-05-06 14:24:26 +0000 UTC]

I have a piece of prose titled this, actually.
and when I went through ~the-chemical-factory 's gallery, I felt like a total thief.
and I felt the same when I went through yours. xD
but like, I eventually realised that I wrote and posted mine as my very first deviation. so like, I couldn't have been influenced.
so that made me go "whew."
urm. yes. long, unimportant rant.
whooops.

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losingmyfaith In reply to simplysamwise [2009-05-06 18:52:19 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah it's hard trying to come up with like...totally original titles sometimes XD

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simplysamwise In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-05-07 00:48:52 +0000 UTC]

totally.

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dead-neon-light [2009-04-14 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]

it feels so very real.

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losingmyfaith In reply to dead-neon-light [2009-04-15 00:59:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

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hush-lullaby [2009-04-03 23:01:12 +0000 UTC]

la-la-lovely

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losingmyfaith In reply to hush-lullaby [2009-04-04 01:11:42 +0000 UTC]

so glad you think so (:

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Unbiased--Opinion [2009-04-03 21:08:56 +0000 UTC]

This is perfect... it all fits so well together. Your two work really well together!

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losingmyfaith In reply to Unbiased--Opinion [2009-04-04 01:12:38 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks! i'm so glad you liked it (:

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Unbiased--Opinion In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-04 19:20:00 +0000 UTC]

I do.

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offbyzero [2009-04-03 07:55:57 +0000 UTC]

The parentheses parts were subtle and wonderful. And the whole thing was, gah, yes.

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losingmyfaith In reply to offbyzero [2009-04-04 01:15:06 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks (: so glad you liked it!

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bilious-green-clouds [2009-04-02 17:28:08 +0000 UTC]



I guess I'm a sucker for pain
so keep dishing it,
darling;
I love it when you
tear me apart.


i shuddered~

<3

you two should write more. :]

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losingmyfaith In reply to bilious-green-clouds [2009-04-03 01:39:09 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks i definitey might ask her if she'd like to do another collab in the future (: so glad you like it!

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bilious-green-clouds In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-09 02:35:32 +0000 UTC]


aw! alright. :3

no problem!

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losingmyfaith In reply to bilious-green-clouds [2009-04-09 02:47:36 +0000 UTC]

i totally meant to type definitely. sigh.

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ViolentConfectionary [2009-04-02 11:09:45 +0000 UTC]

"I gave you my heart and soul
(why haven't you given me yours?)"

i'll bet that so so many people have asked themselves that before

i love this <3

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losingmyfaith In reply to ViolentConfectionary [2009-04-03 01:37:36 +0000 UTC]

aw, i'm glad. yeah...i've definitely asked it myself a couple times. thanks so much (:

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ViolentConfectionary In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-03 05:41:14 +0000 UTC]

it's never nice to have to ask it ):

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losingmyfaith In reply to ViolentConfectionary [2009-04-04 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]

yeah, it sucks

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TheAfterWhys [2009-04-02 06:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Its perfect.
And so true.

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losingmyfaith In reply to TheAfterWhys [2009-04-03 01:38:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much (:

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TheAfterWhys In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-03 03:51:13 +0000 UTC]

very very welcome ^^

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paperheartsyndrome [2009-04-02 06:17:49 +0000 UTC]

This is incredibly beautiful.
It fits together so seamlessly.
Brilliant work for the both of you.

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losingmyfaith In reply to paperheartsyndrome [2009-04-03 01:38:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much, i'm really glad you liked it (:

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ItsxMagik [2009-04-02 00:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Gah, this is incredible!
I love all the things inside the brackets.
Great work, both of you


I think it would be even better if it ended at v :]

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losingmyfaith In reply to ItsxMagik [2009-04-02 01:22:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much, i'm really glad you liked it! and, i wanted both of you to have an equal amount of stanzas, lol. but thanks for the input!!

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ItsxMagik In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-02 19:49:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SubstituteSadist [2009-04-01 20:06:30 +0000 UTC]

"so keep dishing it,
darling;
i love it when you
tear me apart."

totally made the poem for me.

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losingmyfaith In reply to SubstituteSadist [2009-04-02 01:22:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much! i'm so glad you liked it (:

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