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Huskeh-h [2015-01-13 14:44:48 +0000 UTC]
Your comics should turn into a major-motion picture! The artwork is amazing, plus the story-line seems to be rolling great! I had an idea: once you finished an issue, you could make it all into one project, like you have the cover page when it starts out, then someone being able to turn to the next page and read! It'd be a lot faster, plus it'd be VERY interesting to read. I love people who pay attention to their artwork skills and their projects.
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EternalUniverse1 [2013-11-22 20:58:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I like this girl. It's like both she and Steban are 2 peas in the same pod.
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Dragonhawk21 [2012-09-09 00:28:27 +0000 UTC]
Are you gonna make her brother?
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BioHermistry [2012-08-04 14:26:10 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwww-some!!!!!!!
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Wolvesl [2012-07-11 16:41:22 +0000 UTC]
OMG I have that kind of dog! two actually! cool!
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lttttt [2012-06-26 23:15:16 +0000 UTC]
nice!
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Falljoydelux [2012-06-25 04:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Tough and rugged, like a boss
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WickedSpecter [2012-06-24 22:51:31 +0000 UTC]
Finally get to see the heart throb. A saluki is a nice choice in breed. Is there any particular reason you chose that one?
She has a very cute design, I love the slight fluff near her feet. I do agree with some of the others though, her muzzle could be slightly thinner. Her legs are superb, and the way you drew the rest of her is very well done. I knew immediately what breed she was without even looking at her info in the artists comments. And I really like the colors of her design. Most saluki's I see are a white-ish color, so it's a nice change from the norm. And a very creative pattern on her collar. It helps give her a feminine look, eventhough she's supposed to be a bounty hunter.^^
Their is one thing about her that I do think needs to be developed a bit more.
After reading about her personality she just seems to...perfect. she's one of the most beautiful ladies in Gold Marrow, she's light-hearted, extremely confident, seems to know the right answer for every problem, very smart, calculating, very good at solving mysteries and puzzles, and hardly ever gets deceived in a case, ect. You get where I'm going with this. And besideds the fire thing she doesn't have any real flaws.
Every character/being has both good qualities and bad. And in a story it's one of the many things that make them real, and their worlds more believable. And without some kind of flaws, a character becomes the dreaded mary sue. D: Oh NOES!!!
And her problems with fire won't really get in her way too much unless everything is constantly on fire. <<
I hope you don't feel like I'm harrasing you or anything. It's obvious you've put alot of time and thought into Faye. *points to artists comments* And I think she is/will be an amazing character in Up and Ahead. These are just some suggestions to help fill her out a bit. :3
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Skailla In reply to WickedSpecter [2012-06-25 00:01:28 +0000 UTC]
oh my goodness that sounded harsh! I'm sorry, I didn't read my reply before posting it! I meant I was very glad that you pointed all that out!! you truly saved my day!!
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WickedSpecter In reply to Skailla [2012-06-25 00:41:42 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it sounded harsh at all. So no worries. :3
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Skailla In reply to WickedSpecter [2012-06-24 23:48:01 +0000 UTC]
nah, it's alright my dear! I'm used to getting criticized over absolutely every step I take! xD
firstly, thank you very much for taking the time to write me such a nice critic!
But that's precisely why I'm a comic maker, and not a writer! xD
I had kept Faye's bad parts hidden, as a surprise factor in the story, but I guess I was way too subtle about them in the description. When I meant she was calculating, I meant it in the really bad way. I just realized that the word in english might not be the direct correspondent to the term we use in portuguese D:<
Faye is a very cold lady. Being way too rational makes her somehow heartless. Her own interests go on top of everything, that's why I mentioned her detached personality. She is a friend one day, and the other, she just vanishes with the enemies. Whatever is more conventional.
I made sure to make her ugly parts more apparent now :3 thank you for pointing that out, my friend! I feel relieved
Nah, and don't worry you know my style, I like creating quirky characters! xD
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Tiber5z [2012-06-24 21:45:29 +0000 UTC]
So THIS is the one all the male's are in love with. :3
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IndigoWolf101 [2012-06-24 20:12:58 +0000 UTC]
YAAY FAYE!! Keep up the awesome work!
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Thesleepywolf [2012-06-24 14:12:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah so this is the girl that all the dogs have a crush on... not what I was excepting, don't really know what I was expecting but not that. So there are humans in this? How does that work exactly, are they like in Lady and the tramp and are just part of the background or do they contribute into the story... don't know how they would.
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Thesleepywolf In reply to Skailla [2012-06-24 23:19:47 +0000 UTC]
I really don't know what I was picturing with her... maybe that dog in Oliver & company, going back to my childhood here, not the posh high maintenance one, the street one. Though Faye is like her so... I didn't have clear image of what she'd look like. Have you looked into comic publishers, just to see what there is?
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SwanLullaby [2012-06-24 11:39:43 +0000 UTC]
The first female character!
I like her story although it's a bit sad.
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ozu95supein [2012-06-24 11:24:42 +0000 UTC]
So there are humans here. What do they do, they just leave the dogs alone in gold marrow or do they live with humans? Also, do the have trains? If so are they made and used by humans? And what do they use for money?
Sorry for all these questions but I like to know the details.
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ozu95supein In reply to Skailla [2012-06-25 17:05:31 +0000 UTC]
are humans aware of the fact that dogs are intelligent? What would Indian and Mexican dogs be like?
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b1k [2012-06-24 10:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Hey my cats name is Faye.
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fredgotshot [2012-06-24 06:38:16 +0000 UTC]
She looks great, nice job on this.
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Truewolfwarriors [2012-06-24 04:37:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh!! What a beautiful looking dog!! I love her past as beign a former pet dog and then turning into a bounty hunter later on!! I'm sure that with her charms, a lot of male dogs get turned in by her becaus they thought a little female like her couldn't do anything to them XD Very nice character~!!
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DBZ-FAN101 [2012-06-24 04:35:24 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING!!
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Ziphora [2012-06-24 04:07:02 +0000 UTC]
I think you should slim her muzzle, it doesn't appear to be very Salukis like in my opinion.
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Kodimarto [2012-06-24 02:29:08 +0000 UTC]
She's beautiful! Very well done!
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auraboreale [2012-06-24 02:04:28 +0000 UTC]
Wonder who she'll pick.... Hank or Lester?
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dinowolf0049056 [2012-06-24 00:32:57 +0000 UTC]
such a beautiful dog!
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D-Rock92 [2012-06-24 00:17:35 +0000 UTC]
Rough childhood, but it's good she's trying to move on to a better future.
BTW, you mean you mean "collapsed" in the background story, and "caring" in the personality story. Sorry, but I think I let typos bother me more than they should.
Anyway, good luck with this story! And was wondering if there were humans here, now I know.
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