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Published: 2009-03-17 17:06:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1705; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 37
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EDIT 3/12/12 : updating the profile now that I've FINALLY started the story!!!Chapter one --> [link]
Character story:
The oldest of Tenten's four older brothers.He is the strong, silent type.Often mistaken for being slow, cos he doesn't talk much and is mostly the "muscle" in the squad, he's actually very observant and not at all stupid.He's large and intimidating, and has piercing gaze which* often makes him seem as if he's always angry.He doesn't initially appear to care either way about Neji and Tenten's relationship, but he's not about to make things easy for the Hyuga either.His specialty is taijutsu and weapons wielding. Tenten learned her craft from this brother, so she's the closest to him.(Story-line is still in development. I'm open to any suggestions/ideas for these characters personality and plot)
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tenten:hikyuu
hikyuu:yes tenten
tenten:when are you going to exersise?
hikyuu:wait, what?
tenten: dont play dume with me hikyuu, that tussie of yours aint gonna get smaller by u just sitting around, 1000 laps around the village
hikyuu: what, i am not-
tenten: DO IT NOW (angry glare) hikyuu: alright, alright ill do it
tenten: good
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hehe yes, she is likely to be the boss of her brothers XP
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totally, i have this friend that has a older brother and she bosses him aroundXD i luv the pic though!
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i have 4 bros... i'm the boss XP
thanks XD
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no problem! good luck with your story XP
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I knew i had seen those names somewhere 
anyway, they look good ^^, i'll be looking forward this story too 
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well Batsu's the only name i'd come up with when i was talking to you about it.. but yeah... that's who they are 
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really? well, i probably imagined the others names then
I admit i have no thoughts on Batsu yet *brain ded*, i need to re-check his profile...*does so* ok, so the design make me think of the "cutie-guy" in the wallflower, what's his name again? eer, Yuki? i think that's it. So yeah, the design reminded me of him.
The personality 
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oh, he's going to hate Neji... i'm considering making him very clingy... or at least have the appearance of being very clingy; kind of baby-ish, to go with his look... but really he's just doing that to keep guy's away, because unlike his 3 other brother's who look strong and can be intimidating, he can't, so he uses what he's got (and it works better than the 3 others because anyone who "fights back" looks like they're picking on a little kid). Not sure if i'm going have tenten see through the act, or if she doesn't, but later realizes it or something...
oh and yes, Wallflower cutie is Yuki
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oh, i can see that going very well in the story.
I think it would be great if Tenten only realised it after a little while and then explodes and kill him ded.
yay! i'm so bad at names it's sad, i'm glad i remembered this one...(and now i want to re-read this manga)
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yeah, it's a good manga... i love it...
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i'm going to especially enjoy Tenten's reaction and action afterwards...will she explode and 'kill' her baby-big brother? will she just kiss neji in front of him and tell him to fuck off because he is the man she chose? 
it's crazily funny, i always crack up at every chapter and i really love Sunako
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i'm not sure... i think she might definitely punish him (or at least try)... yeah she should punish him... bit definitely will be having a "my man so back off!" attitude... she may love her brothers, but they're not going to be telling her what to do...
oh yeah, i LOVE her... and Kyohei... they're so cute together... and the rest of the guy's are awesome too... so very girlie at times, but in a good way
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ARGH, of course you HAVE to update the moment i decide to go to bed! seriously i was shutting my other windows and everything and here it is, new chapter...
you do it on purpose don't you?
She should, no brother should mess up with his sister love life (he can tease and do whatever but the ultimate choice would be hers) and i think she could punish more for the fact that he played with her overprotective side rather than him hating neji
they are amazing
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it's ok, i know you do it on purpose to drive your european watchers crazy
btw, it was fun, i like shikaneji friendship
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yeah, i saw that, i still haven't read it even though it's tempting...i want to finish typing my journal first!
and it was definitely early enough so that i can read it before bed and not go to bed at random hours
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and it's not that long... i'm a little curious about the reaction to this one though cos it seemed to step back from the story a little... but i'm still in the early chapters, so i guess it's fine... i need to get to the action now though... i'm thinking Team Gai's going to tget a mission somewhere... and H and I will volunteer to go or something, cos it's a little close to where they're going... or maybe even exactly where they're going... i'm still wondering about the sisterhood of the moon though...
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true, it's not that long, and i like it
or you could have the sisterhood send a spy but the spy would be a double agent of some sort sent out to kill tenten? (my brain is on crack i don't even know if this would fit the story as i'm mixing everything up tonight). anyway, the sisterhood could send a spy to check if Tenten really is Tenten (i mean the heir of her clan)
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were you the one that has suggested the double agent before?... idk, i'm not sure i want to make the sisterhood completely evil... ok, here's what i'm thinking
team gai gets a mission to where H and T came from... I. tries to convince H to tell the hokage that tenten can't go... but H says she can't do that... if she does, she'd have to tell the hokage, and no one, not even the 4th was ever told about it... also, if tsunade knew, and the "fake-lord" decided to "order" tsunade to send tenten back, then, for political reasons, the hokage couldn't do anything about it... so in the long run, it would be better if she didn't know... she wouldn't have to lie about not knowing this way either. Then i'm going to have I. tell H that maybe it's time to tell tenten, which H will consider, but eventually decide against, believing that there might still be a chance that Tenten would never have to know the tragedy of that night when their families died... I., of course, will support H in whatever she decides (and she'll make him swear to it). but then he'll ask if she could keep Tenten back by some other way, but that won't be possible since the client (who may or may not be the fake-lord) specifically asked for team gai (maybe heard about them from their previous mission). so H won't know for sure if they want team gai because they know about T, or because they suspect T, or because of some other reason... either way, the fake-lord won't know much about T because anyone who knew about her (other than the sisterhood of the moon) would have died that night... so i'm not sure when or how to do it, but when they come to face the fake-lord, H is going to say she's the lord's daughter... OMG!!! i just thought of something... what if the fake-lord *does* know how old Tenten was...one of the sister's might betray H. and tell the fake-lord, after H says it's her, that it's really T (could be they don't want to give the lord the high priestess's daughter; knowing she could make things worst for the people because she'd be too powerful an asset for the fake-lord... but H won't care... it's all about "saving tenten" ... The lord will figure our that T is the rightful heir, but H will say she's the Lord's daughter too (daughter of the lord and the high priestess, which makes her better then T; and that will all go back to play into Tenten's insecurities and such... ), it'll be a lie though, or at least that's what H will think, i might still make it true at the end of the story... The fake-lord wil then make them both stay in the castle until he can determine which one to marry (and might decide to kill the other, though he wouldn't let them know of course)... the Sisterhood would help at some point... out of loyalty to the former high priestess (who i'm thinking won't be be alive afterall)... so far, this is all I have planned... what do you think?
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the first time i read this i had just woken up and decided it was too early to think
anyway, i admit i don't remember if i was the one who gave the idea of a double agent. it sounds like something i would say but i'm really not sure, we talked about soooo much stuff
and niiiice, i like the idea. Playing with Tenten's insecurities is really interesting (even though it shouldn't become the main thing) and well everything you planned seems to work out nicely. Where are N and I. during all this? Are they trying to get them out? Going crazy? How H pregnancy will infer on the Lord's decision (after all he might think she has been "claimed" and "defiled" by another)
I'm currently waiting for some nejiten fluff and i haven't read chap 8 yet though.
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well, first, Nejiten will come up in ch 9... N and I will probably be with the rebel faction trying to break the girl's out... i haven't really planned that out too well yet... but... they're definitely going to be separated for a while.. as for H's pregnancy, she's not showing yet, and the Lord is probably not going to really notice this... it's still very much in the early stages so it's not going to be that big of an interference...
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well, i'm here to make you think of every single detail that you haven't quite planned yet
And if T knows that H is pregnant, there could be protective tendencies there too
and N could learn about i when I. is going crazy outside and nearly destroy N who wants him to calm down?
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well... technically i've decided that H doesn't know... so T won't know either... and N... umm... that actually sounds pretty fun... him figuring it out... plus with the byakugan, it's be kind of hard for him not to... he's never used it on her yet but... once he does, he'll know...
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so then, when is H going to learn about her condition? Will Tenten know before her thanks to N (or to I. being worried)? T's reaction would be awesome i think
and H's reaction? if she is the last to learn?
(i'm having a lot of fun with your OC's)
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lol... me too... i love OCs... you can play with them so much
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