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Published: 2009-03-17 17:09:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1909; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 9
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Description EDIT 3/12/12 : updating the profile now that I've FINALLY started the story!!!
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Character Story:
The youngest of Tenten's four older brothers
HE'S A BOY!!!
He looks sweet innocent, but in reality is anything but sweet and innocent.
He looks like a middle school kids, but is actually a 20 year old adult.
He's a bit sensitive about people confusing him for a child (as well as for a girl), but often uses his child-like appearance to get his way.
Despite his innocent look, he's actually a huge pervert! though not as obvious as his play boy brother Fuezi; his perviness is more subtle.
His name means PUNISHMENT (but add a "Ten" in front of it, and it means "WRATH OF GOD"... ), and he definitely lives up to it.
His nickname among the brothers, who know his true personality, is "Demon"
He HATE Neji!!!
His specialty is explosives!

(Story-line is still in development. I'm open to any suggestions/ideas for these characters personality and plot)
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Comments: 49

TroublesomeDream [2012-08-10 01:40:49 +0000 UTC]

i got to say he might be my fav. hehe!!!

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SerenEvy In reply to TroublesomeDream [2012-08-10 01:43:04 +0000 UTC]

heheh he is a fun one.

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TroublesomeDream In reply to SerenEvy [2012-08-10 01:59:25 +0000 UTC]

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Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-20 20:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Kawaii! XD He is similar to hunny. XD Love it!

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-20 20:08:47 +0000 UTC]

i hadn't really noticed that... but i can see it.

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-23 21:46:45 +0000 UTC]

I ment similar in personality. X3

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-23 21:53:03 +0000 UTC]

i don't know... I think bunny is genuinely nice, while the Batsu I've been imagining is quite evil in his own way... but you know what, maybe... i might take it into consideration when I write the story, to make Batsu ask a little like Bunny... in my head though the closest character i can see him resembling in personality would be a bit more like Kyoya... but not quite either... interesting idea though... i'll have to think on it. XD

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-23 22:00:21 +0000 UTC]

XD Hunny was nice but, if you got on his bad side, like waking him up, wouldn't be so pretty. XD Hunny is mainly nice though. Kyoya is sneaky XD. You go ahead and think on that, and your doing terrific so far. X3

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-23 22:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's how I see Hunny too... Batsu though I see as more of acting like a hunny, but being more like kyoya.

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-23 22:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Ohh I see what your saying. So his Hunny side isn't the real him, but the Kyoya side is real?

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-23 22:56:48 +0000 UTC]

exactly
only tenten only knows the hunny side (or at least that's probably what i'm going to make people think, in actually i think she'll know the whole time what he's really like)

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-23 23:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she should know the real him, and her other brothers should too. They are all family.

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-23 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

oh the other brothers definitely do, they just play along.

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-23 23:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah..Excellent. XD I was thinking of it that way.

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-07-23 23:33:16 +0000 UTC]

*nod* i probably won't reveal that Tenten knew all along until the end, but throughout the story it'll be obvious that the other brothers known, especially Tetsu, who i'm considering making Batsu's twin (i might even make Tetsu the younger twin )

btw thanks for the watch

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-08-06 18:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome for the watch. And you should make them twins and Tetsu the younger twin. XD

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-08-06 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]

i actually did decide to make them twins and Tetsu is the younger twin

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Ninjagirl9 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-08-10 03:06:03 +0000 UTC]

XD Go for it!

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SerenEvy In reply to Ninjagirl9 [2010-08-10 03:14:32 +0000 UTC]

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Waterbender129 [2010-07-09 02:49:07 +0000 UTC]

tenten:batsu
batsu: (hanging in tree) huh
tenten:what the hell are u doing?
batsu: sleeping
tenten: okay...why r u in the tree?
batsu: (cartman voice) DONT QUESTION MY ATHUROTIES
tenten: whatever
neji walks in
batsu: ITS THE HIPPIE!!! DIE FATASS(pulls out lazer and hits neji in slow motion, while naruto flies by wearing a cow suit still in slow motion)
tenten: omg u killed neji
hinata: u b********
luv the pic

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SerenEvy In reply to Waterbender129 [2010-07-09 02:59:59 +0000 UTC]

i can't imagine batsu hanging from a tree... so not his personality at all... but messing with Neji, definitely it.
thanks

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Waterbender129 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-09 04:14:03 +0000 UTC]

srry for the tree thing, its the first time i ever heard of him and the others. but hating neji is the #1 thing i heard he loves 2 do!

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SerenEvy In reply to Waterbender129 [2010-07-09 05:02:06 +0000 UTC]

no worries. heheh not surprised, i still haven't writing the story up so at the moment the only one who really knows these characters personality is me, but yeah... i imagine him a little like hitsugaya from bleach.

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Waterbender129 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-09 12:46:16 +0000 UTC]

cool, hes really cool and u r a great drawer

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SerenEvy In reply to Waterbender129 [2010-07-09 16:58:27 +0000 UTC]

XD thank you

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Waterbender129 In reply to SerenEvy [2010-07-09 18:02:18 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome!!!!!

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Bellette [2010-02-26 20:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Heck, does this 4 are all in love with Tenten? lol

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SerenEvy In reply to Bellette [2010-02-26 20:40:43 +0000 UTC]

they're her older brothers.

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Bellette In reply to SerenEvy [2010-02-26 20:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Now I get it XDDDDD

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SerenEvy In reply to Bellette [2010-02-26 20:43:59 +0000 UTC]

yeah... thanks for pointing that i forgot to mention they were all Tenten's brothers

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RikkiluvsGaara1 [2009-03-18 19:36:46 +0000 UTC]

how did you like make the little boxy thing for the name and age and everything...did you make it up or is there a site or link or anyrhing?

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SerenEvy In reply to RikkiluvsGaara1 [2009-03-18 19:51:26 +0000 UTC]

I made it myself. Just on paint... that's why it's all just boxes, nothing special.

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RikkiluvsGaara1 In reply to SerenEvy [2009-03-18 20:36:30 +0000 UTC]

ahh...kk...

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Cathiegirl16 [2009-03-18 19:07:31 +0000 UTC]

he's so cute! the name doesn't fit but still it's like hunny from host club
because he is the cutest thing ever! plus he only will get all bad and mean on you if you deserve it, or steal his cake xD

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SerenEvy In reply to Cathiegirl16 [2009-03-18 19:55:14 +0000 UTC]

no... his name is actually very appropriate... he's a demon. and he'll be the worst brother for Neji to overcome...

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goldfishes101 [2009-03-18 02:09:25 +0000 UTC]

wonderful

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SerenEvy In reply to goldfishes101 [2009-03-18 02:53:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you isn't he cute?... i'm going to have so much fun making him into a little innocent devil...

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goldfishes101 In reply to SerenEvy [2009-03-18 03:00:31 +0000 UTC]

lol i imagined an evil laugh after reading that...

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SerenEvy In reply to goldfishes101 [2009-03-18 06:23:25 +0000 UTC]

lol...

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Rontra [2009-03-17 17:33:51 +0000 UTC]

uh... random thought: he kinda reminds me of Light on that pic... O_O"

and... urgh, he scares me. xD I mean... he's like one of those adorable little girls in Elfen Lied who suddenly go... apeshit ad start to rip people in half... O.O;;;
uh, wierd associations. *has no comment, but likes to ramble*
so yeah... Tenten has plenty of brothers, allright... (okay, not that many, but anyway... xD)

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SerenEvy In reply to Rontra [2009-03-17 20:14:01 +0000 UTC]

it's the hair... i LOVE Light and L's hair...

i'm actually very happy he creeps you out... that's very much my intent... he's supposed to look incredibly sweet and innocent, but he's a demon! i was almost tempted to make him the oldest... but still look like the youngest

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Rontra In reply to SerenEvy [2009-03-17 20:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I managed to find out that was it after a while of... immense staring. XD
And me lurves L too bad he... y'know... ded.

xD wow, that sounded kinda... evil. 'I'm very happy he creeps you out'...
He's a demon... RAWR. XDD Oh dear, I'd better just go do somehting else... XD
I think he'd be better as the youngest, but hey. It's your story
Uh... off to save myself from the temptations of PMS nao~ bai.

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SerenEvy In reply to Rontra [2009-03-17 22:35:15 +0000 UTC]

could have saved yourself a lot trouble if you'd just read my artist's note

yeah LOVE L... in the deathnotes movies, they actually change that a little... still does... but i kind of like how it happens in the movie... though the manga was still awesome

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Rontra In reply to SerenEvy [2009-03-18 06:21:39 +0000 UTC]

I do read those, I just rarely pay attention to what they say...

Hmm, I wanna see some DN movies... Hurr. like L: Change the worLd :3 (because it has L in the title? Uh, no.... maybe... )
indeed the manga was awesome, but kinda... uh tragic. Didn't about all of them die? Well, all of the ones I liked, anyways... exept for Near. Hmm... Ah well. XD

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SerenEvy In reply to Rontra [2009-03-18 06:37:20 +0000 UTC]

lol

oh yeah... i was going to buy L: Change the world at comic con last year, but... sadly when i get to the video stand they were already sold out... ... so going to buy it this year though.

and yes, they all died... except for Near and Matsuda.

Oh, btw, I wouldn't recommend watching L change the world until you see the two other deathnote movies because it would ruin the second movie's ending for you...

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Rontra In reply to SerenEvy [2009-03-18 16:53:27 +0000 UTC]

aw, too bad
but gonna get it this year? That's great

bah... I liked Near [my friend got me to like him... by trickery ], but I didn't care for Matsuda much...

...spoilers, you say? naw, that's ok. I knew the end of deathnote before finishing the first manga book. lol~

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SerenEvy In reply to Rontra [2009-03-18 19:56:41 +0000 UTC]

yeah... but the movie ends differently

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Rontra In reply to SerenEvy [2009-03-18 20:57:40 +0000 UTC]

I know. XD [dunno how, but I know. O_o]
I was using the manga as an example. Now that I'm at it, I'd seen the ending to FFX while I was... uh, not even halfway through the game. [I was stuck... XD with an easy-ass boss.]
Plus, my best friend's hobby is giving out spoilers... I'm sure that if she were to see it, I'd know all of it by the end of the schoolday.

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SerenEvy In reply to Rontra [2009-03-18 23:14:40 +0000 UTC]

ah, nice friend

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