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Saruteku In reply to jtk564 [2015-08-03 06:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Malo isn't an opposite, just doesn't hide things. Max's spirit was meant to be a follower, but he ended up having to be in charge, Malo's spirit is a lot kinder due to how Max grew and when he let go of all his fears. Max and Rick were best friends. It seems Rick dies first so he gives Max his Gem which is the gem of the Gatekeeper of Water. It made sure Max wouldn't die young due to his Spiritual overdrive and it also gave Max some of Rick's spiritual preferance so technically Malo is a Mix of Rick and Max, the reason why Malo controls Metal and Water. When Max died Rick's Gem was left, it's not allowed to go to the land of the dead because it would be absorbed by it, so Blue who was Rick's animal spirit in my world became the Guardian of the Gem of Oceans, and Blue went looking for Rick or Max when they were born, so when he found Malo he followed him around, basically his pet.

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jtk564 In reply to Saruteku [2015-08-04 00:47:34 +0000 UTC]

When I read that he had a polar bear I actually thought of Blue but I didn't think it was gonna be him lol. Also I impressed, even though Malo is a new character it seems you really have him fleshed out already, even to the point that you can say how things in his past life (Max and Rick) effected him.

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Saruteku In reply to jtk564 [2015-08-04 01:08:09 +0000 UTC]

That's how I am, I think I'm more of a writer than an artist because this is rather second nature to me.

New guy, Lets say he's a Warrior of Order because Max is the only one at the moment. from the Savannah, a place with high rules and expectations meaning his hair has to be a warm color and he has yellow eyes so lets give him blood red hair. Men in the Savannah are proud womanizers by nature but since Order would choose people that can think all ways lets make him uninterested in his region's stereotypes. The people blessed by the gods all get known and Order's Trigger is you must have moments where you have No Biases in your discussions (When Max gets very mad he doesn't think about good or bad, friend or foe, just what needs to be done). So he would raise to the royal advisor, but because the Royalty work heavily in mind control he is constantly manipulated, causing him to loose control over his powers, but just being a known Light makes his words hold significant weight. He doesn't realize he's being manipulated and just looses days out of his life without remembering. He is heavily loyal to the Queen since in the Savannah women are meant to have the power and hopes to guide her in a way that would not give power to a King, but, that didn't work out to well which is how King Sahara (The current king) Raised in power. This would have happened years before Max received his blessing so this man would be the only Warrior of Order around and Oren (Being of Order) does not take to kindly to his warrior being used so shortly after King Sahara used him to gain power Order took away his Warrior's voice so he can no longer speak on his behalf. The Savannah uses Arabian and Egyptian names for the most part names so I'll name him Huda which seems to mean "Right Guidance," and last names are usually Japanese (Or sounding hahah) or a mix of elements and animals so I'll use Sandwalker just because it sounds right. Huda Sandwalker, the Mute Warrior of Order, unknowingly being used as a pawn and probably thrown out after he looses his voice, maybe found out the treachery of the new King and wants to atone by aiding the Queen any way he can and becoming the Silent Judge of the Savannah.

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K0uya In reply to Saruteku [2015-08-09 16:43:09 +0000 UTC]

*Jaws theme song playing as a tiger tail roams around* so he's golden Batman?

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Saruteku In reply to K0uya [2015-08-09 17:08:59 +0000 UTC]

No. After I rered the description I thought about the guy with the Millinium scale from Yu-Gi-Oh, and the Red head race from Magi. He also prefers to kill people like AMond did from Korra I think, Not sure what element needs characters

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Saruteku In reply to Saruteku [2015-08-04 01:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Oops, Huda is a Girl's name (SHould have noticed) So I'll go with Hadi instead. Same meaning except Leader was added. Leader, Guide

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jtk564 In reply to Saruteku [2015-08-04 03:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Damn, this all came of the top of your head...and so fast. It sounds like this is a guy you have been working on for a little while,but you just made him up right now. You even have a whole name and title for him (Hadi Sandwalker the Silent Judge of the Savannah, sounds epic!) Don't sell yourself short on the artist part though, you really are good at that too.
If you think otherwise I have one thing to say...

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Saruteku In reply to jtk564 [2015-08-04 04:13:52 +0000 UTC]

The reason I said I am lacking as an artist is because I know exactly what everything looks like, I know what emotion to convey, and I know how things fit. Granted, even as a writer I limit myself. My vocabulary and spelling is not that great leading me to change a lot of sentences, even whole paragraphs because I can't get a few words right, and I have a really bad habit of censoring myself, To be a Master was suppose to be a lot darker since the story was based around work from Tagame (Hardcore BDSM Bara artist) as well as really breaking Mannez (I know how the story was suppost to go, but I guess I baby my OCs a bit to much. I can't make them suffer to much ^-^") But as an artist I can't even dream about drawing what I'm suppost to. Every time I drew Chaz I had a clear image in my head that just vanished as soon as I drew a line. I feel most of my work has no feeling other than the obvious "This character is smiling, so it's happy"

Not saying I'm bad at it, I just know some of my flaws, but if I can be completely honest I've been feeling a lot better recently seeing you comment. hahah, I got to a point I thought I was flat out ignored. not a good feeling for a creator.

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jtk564 In reply to Saruteku [2015-08-04 06:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Hey no one is a master of spelling and vocabulary, I have to go over my comments a bunch so I don't sound like an idiot and everyone has a good old brain fart every once in a while XD. You obviously get past it because you have drawings of Chaz, one that is pretty recent. Also I think of your drawings as more than smiles=happiness. Even if other people think this way you write so much more under the picture. Who they are, why they look the way they do, how they connect to your other characters, ect... that adds to the feeling of the drawing too.

I'm glad your feeling better and honestly you and Kouya were the first artists that I ever commented on. Both of your gallerys really brighten my days your happy/funny drawings make me smile uncontrollably and I like the darker ones to because of all the emotion that you both send through them. I had wanted to say stuff on a lot of older drawings you did but I thought they where to old a drawing for my comments to be relevant. But "Rather Big Shadow" was the first one I saw the day you put it up and I couldn't not say something, you sounded like you where on the verge of just giving up.  I didn't want that to happen because I liked your characters and how much back story and life they had in them and you and Kouya made/make really good stuff together too. I also could just relate to how you felt, feeling alone is bad enough but to feel that your being ignored and their just watching you squirm fucking sucks. I really didn't think I would make a difference or that you would even respond but, I just wanted you to know that there was at least one person out there that wanted to see more of your stuff and to not be so damn hard on yourself.

One last thing that I've been meaning to ask, do you or Kouya still play League of Legends my name on there is jtkeane13(I'm so creative with names) even if you just wanna talk, cause sometimes people just need someone to talk to. I almost always have League open when my laptops on, which is usually on all day XD.

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jtk564 In reply to jtk564 [2015-08-07 00:04:30 +0000 UTC]

One thing I forgot to mention is that I haven't read To be a Master yet, I've been meaning to but haven't had the time, that why I didn't mention it above but I'm sure it's really good even though you censored it. Babying you OC's just mean you really care for them and that they really do mean something to you that you hold close. Anyway I'm gonna go read it right now since I have the time. Sorry I'm adding this little bit two days later just to say I haven't read it still but, I felt it needed to be said. I'll edit this or something when I'm done with it!

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