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Saruteku — MARY SUE!? Not on my watch

Published: 2012-09-18 04:05:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description I did a Mary Sue checklist meme, and almost all of my characters (Tech, Max, Wolf, Jess, Rose, Maria) were Borderline Mary Sue, the only exceptions are Jess who is balanced and Tech, who is a Mary Sue >.< So I decided to put Tehc threw this. Wasn't as hard as when I put Rose threw it though.

My god, It's hard thinking of Tech's secrets without making him sound like a total perv, but I guess he is a pervert. Max was one of his first sexual experiences and after Rai calms down Tech and Rai get quite close >.<

Some of it may seem forced but these are all ideas I've had before, Maybe the fact I keep adding them is the problem, to many ideas for one character.
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Kapuchino157 [2012-09-18 08:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Main Characters ALWAYS end up looking like Sues.
Cause they're the main characters, so the focus stays on them.
You can NEVER have a Main Character who's not at least a little Sueish. Trust me. :3

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Saruteku In reply to Kapuchino157 [2012-09-18 10:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm not really worried about it because yes, my main characters have alot of unique powers and abilities but they have just as many limiters and my main character ends up losing. I don't think Mary Sue ever looses for to long, mine stays down for a good part of the story. It's also how my world is set up. EVERYONE has an element and animal attached to them, Light beings are considered angelic, dark beings are considered Demonic, and my main characters parents are the Main Light and Dark guy, who every life time end up getting together. It's kinda the constant thing across all my stories, trying to balance Light and Dark, at least I gave them personalities XD

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Kapuchino157 In reply to Saruteku [2012-09-18 10:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Well then I don't see HOW you can call your main character a Sue :3

The test you've taken gives you plus points for the "super powers" question due the 100/1 possibility the OC that's taking the test is the only one in it's universe with "super powers". Since everyone in your fic's universe has powers thou, then your characters pretty much average IMO

Besides, Sue tests are stupid XD

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Saruteku In reply to Kapuchino157 [2012-09-18 10:43:30 +0000 UTC]

I was just bored and wanted to see how it would turn out. I tested 6 characters and my main main one (Sense Max Tech, and Wolf are all mains) is the only one with Sue status with the others being borderline XD (An some of those questions were just Duh)

I was surprised Wolf wasn't the one that got Sue status because he's basically god

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K0uya [2012-09-18 04:53:49 +0000 UTC]

that grammar.....it gave me cancer

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Saruteku In reply to K0uya [2012-09-18 05:34:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to choke you out >3>

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K0uya In reply to Saruteku [2012-09-18 05:56:00 +0000 UTC]

with what if I may know? >:3

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