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This was a really sweet picture. C:

I hope you can read my handwriting! O: It's very messy. I didn't use a font like last time...

And this time, I covered everything... XD;; It took me a few hours and then another hour to put it together because I had so many layers and sections...


Let's see.. lemme think...

Oh, yes, the skirt. I commonly see the method of "oh I'll just draw lines on the skirt and it's now pleated". That doesn't work. You have to DEFINE the pleats, because they're 3D. Lines are the basis for drawings, but they have to used right! :C Though, I will admit that I'm not very good at drawing skirts myself. They ARE difficult.

Good clothes tutorials: [link] [link] [link]

...XD;; I'm sorry, I'm not very good at drawing, but I hope I helped a little bit..?






Oh, yeah, the whole thing about Miku and her lovely... umm... bust.

It really annoys me when I see images of Miku where she's got the OBVIOUS cleavage and her tie falls through... But that really doesn't happen unless someone pushes their breasts together and the tie is in the right place. I:
But that doesn't happen often, and Miku's shirt is drawn like it's one of the sturdier fabrics, the kind that isn't very soft... It's like a thicker kind of blouse, and that kind of shirt makes that happen less often...

=w=
But I don't really care right now, lol. I just want to make sure that people know that the whole "tie/ribbon/etc between the cleavage" thing really isn't that common...




I am not an expert in anatomy nor am I any good at drawing backgrounds. All things that I correct are just general things that will make the anatomy at LEAST look a little better. I am not a miracle worker, and not everything I know about the body is correct. So please don't kill me.
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Comments: 34

OhJolly [2011-05-26 21:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work!

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Rhyshian In reply to OhJolly [2011-05-26 22:33:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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OhJolly In reply to Rhyshian [2011-05-27 12:24:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! ^^

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Stutieboom [2011-02-13 03:36:44 +0000 UTC]

cool!
i like the way you correct this picture \(^^)/

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Rhyshian In reply to Stutieboom [2011-02-13 20:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Nayina [2011-02-01 03:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Very nice :3

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Rhyshian In reply to Nayina [2011-02-01 04:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Na~ <3

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Silver-Solace [2011-01-31 05:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice correction!

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Rhyshian In reply to Silver-Solace [2011-02-01 04:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! C:

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NeedsMoreColor [2011-01-31 03:57:12 +0000 UTC]

*mouth drops*

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Rhyshian In reply to NeedsMoreColor [2011-02-01 04:23:24 +0000 UTC]

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Arachnider [2011-01-30 17:37:53 +0000 UTC]

T_T somehow after I saw these comments, I feel like both being pushed down to hell and flew to the heaven.. hahah

thx for the detail correcting.. about the body, I know about the strange jaw myself >_< but I've already line it with a drawing pen.. hahhaa.. about the facts of the shirts.. that's interesting, since I don't realize so many mistakes I made with her clothing and her bust T_T

and your hair correction is really helpful in many ways 0_0' nice... I should learn from it... the skirts.. hahah.. I wanted to make it like "seifuku" but both you and my friend said that it was a big mistake... maybe I should put more effort in it.. haha

well, thx for your helps ^^ I hope I can learn many things from your corrections!! thx a lot ^^
btw, can I watch you?

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Rhyshian In reply to Arachnider [2011-02-01 04:20:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, I made you feel bad... D: I didn't mean to do that...


Yeah, most of the things I pointed out, I pretty much assumed that you knew already. People usually already know their mistakes, just have no idea how to fix them, and that's just where the correctors come in. :3
But I helped you with drawing, and that makes me happy

To tell you the truth, I am really bad at drawing seifuku.. I have a really hard time following the "fold" pattern.. so I feel like a hypocrite, going around and correcting people's skirts.

You're welcome! C: I'm glad that I could be of assistance with your art. You have really good ideas, and you can pull them off pretty well. The only thing that I really think I need to say to you is that you should always practice. You're already so far and you draw very well! I'd love to see your art improve.

Watch me? Please, go ahead! You don't need to ask me.

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Arachnider In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-01 17:01:24 +0000 UTC]

hahhahah ^^ thanks a lot!! can you give some corrections to my other pics too? I find your comments and corrections are easy to understand and straight to the point ^^

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Rhyshian In reply to Arachnider [2011-02-02 14:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sure! I had actually chosen to correct [link] Your Shana for February. I will find other ones that you've submitted and I'll see if I can't put them on my list too! Okay? C:

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Arachnider In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-05 18:39:14 +0000 UTC]

ok ^^ thx for the big help!!
your comments will always be appreciated.. haha

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Torheit-Skadi [2011-01-30 14:01:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow, a wonderfully detailed correction You gave some very nice tips, especially on the clothes. Really well done

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Rhyshian In reply to Torheit-Skadi [2011-02-01 04:10:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I never want to leave any information out that might be helpful, so I just put in everything I can think of.. then it turns out to be all cluttered but I still can't bring myself to get rid of anything. But if people can still read it, then I guess I'm fine with it.

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Torheit-Skadi In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-01 10:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I think it's better to keep as much information in a correction as possible. The artists can search for their most helpful parts theirselves

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SRLAC [2011-01-30 11:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Hurrrr I like how you improve on a piece of art that was already quite good to begin with! ;w; I wouldn't have spotted half of those things. >u>

YOU SO COOL *pats*

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Rhyshian In reply to SRLAC [2011-02-01 04:09:24 +0000 UTC]

I know that's a lie. You would have spotted just as many things as I did. There may be such a thing as being an anatomy expert, but nothing can beat the human eye and the odd ability to point out things that look weird. ;D

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SRLAC In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-01 07:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Nahh, I probably wouldn't have...apart from that legs thing which you taught me! 8D

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Sneakyyy [2011-01-30 04:25:29 +0000 UTC]

What's the mic on her "headset" for?

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Rhyshian In reply to Sneakyyy [2011-01-30 05:03:36 +0000 UTC]

She's a mascot for a "singing" program, so she's like... an "idol", sort of. XD;;


(Uhh, read the introductory paragraph of this: [link] )

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Sneakyyy In reply to Sneakyyy [2011-01-30 04:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Hold up, wrong image lol... Looks good, great job isabella

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Creativegreenbeans [2011-01-30 04:20:10 +0000 UTC]

omg i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur so amazing TT,TT i iz envious of ur ability to make things cute TTT,TTT i make everything i draw look shonen >3< which is not a problem, but i wanna draw shojo toooooo Q3Q

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Rhyshian In reply to Creativegreenbeans [2011-01-30 05:12:25 +0000 UTC]

WHOA DERE MA'AM COOL IT WIT DA "!"s XD;;

Well, maybe I can help you? XD;; Send me a link to a picture you wanted to be shoujo and then I'll go through and make changes to make it "shoujo"-like, and maybe you can learn from that..? Though [link] looks shoujo great to me.. XD;;

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Creativegreenbeans In reply to Rhyshian [2011-01-30 05:18:48 +0000 UTC]

lol XDDDD

if u could, that'd b great! >,< altho, im not sure what the picture would be. if i find one, or make one, then i'll send u the pic.
thx, thats like one of the only ones TTT^TTT sadly i epicly fail at making things like that for some reason.

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Rhyshian In reply to Creativegreenbeans [2011-02-01 04:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Please do! I'm here to help you, man.
If you find you need help, I'll help you with anything. C:
Just let me know. You know, post a comment on my page or something.

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Creativegreenbeans In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-01 12:47:45 +0000 UTC]

uwaahhh thankies so much!!! once i find something, i'll post a comment ^^

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Rhyshian In reply to Creativegreenbeans [2011-02-13 21:24:50 +0000 UTC]

I'll be waiting.

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Creativegreenbeans In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-13 23:11:23 +0000 UTC]

hehe at the moment im not sure what could b "shojo-ified", but if u could look at the big pile of uploads i posted yesterday and find something that looked like a failed attempt that could really help me out XDDDD

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Rhyshian In reply to Creativegreenbeans [2011-02-13 23:51:14 +0000 UTC]

... I will do right now! XD

-is totally NOT slacking off on the Valentine's Day picture she was planning to do-

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Creativegreenbeans In reply to Rhyshian [2011-02-14 01:10:28 +0000 UTC]

yay! XDDD


oh i kno how u feel i have so many drawings i want and NEED to do and finish but no timeee TT^TT

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