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Published: 2009-11-17 01:39:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 544; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 30
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Description Suggestions? I am very pleased with this picture at the moment. I've worked hard at it
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Comments: 15

To-Whom-It-May [2009-11-17 01:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I would bring the bottom hem of the bodice section of the dress up higher sos he does not look like she has an unusually long torso and short legs. o.o

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revois In reply to To-Whom-It-May [2009-11-17 01:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you That is very much appreciated. I have a terrible habit of making disproportionate people...I will get right on that! Thanks!

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To-Whom-It-May In reply to revois [2009-11-17 01:57:46 +0000 UTC]

^.^ No worries. e.e you should see what happens when I try to draw arms. Good lord.

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revois In reply to To-Whom-It-May [2009-11-17 02:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Haha I know what you mean ^^ It's very difficult, especially because I'm too stubborn to make someone pose or anything But I make it work. Thanks for pointing out the disproportions, though, because I doubt I would've noticed, otherwise.

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To-Whom-It-May In reply to revois [2009-11-17 02:03:54 +0000 UTC]

I kinda felt bad for pointing them out..xD but it'd look so bomb with your coloring when it was finished! I couldn't help it.

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revois In reply to To-Whom-It-May [2009-11-17 02:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Thats ok, I prefer to have them pointed out so that I can know what to fix Have to improve somehow! I appreciate the compliments

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To-Whom-It-May In reply to revois [2009-11-17 02:08:10 +0000 UTC]

^.^; Glad it didn't bother you--and no worries!

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revois In reply to To-Whom-It-May [2009-11-17 20:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, not much bothers me, so don't worry about that!

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BalanceSplashRhyme [2009-11-17 01:48:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... *thinks*
Well here's one suggestion I could make...
You could make the background dark, so it's like at night and all spooky-looking. It would look like she just formed out of white smoke or something.
That help? Or were you already going to do that?...

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revois In reply to BalanceSplashRhyme [2009-11-17 01:52:21 +0000 UTC]

I can try that
Thanks for suggesting, thats more than I can usually get out of my watchers
I'll try it. I honestly had no clue where to take it from there, it's been a fun piece to work on so far.

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BalanceSplashRhyme In reply to revois [2009-11-17 02:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Well like I said, I can't wait to see it when it's finished.

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revois In reply to BalanceSplashRhyme [2009-11-17 20:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Me either

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BalanceSplashRhyme In reply to BalanceSplashRhyme [2009-11-17 01:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Whoops, meant to make that a reply to what you said...
Oh well.

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BalanceSplashRhyme [2009-11-17 01:41:25 +0000 UTC]

This is cool. I can't wait to see it finished.
*adds you to watch list so I'll know when the finished picture is posted*

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revois In reply to BalanceSplashRhyme [2009-11-17 01:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you very much That's appreciated quite a bit Would you care to suggest something, so that I can figure out what to do with the rest of it? That would be very helpful...

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