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Published: 2005-07-26 21:04:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 5333; Favourites: 217; Downloads: 34
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Description Rave

The pulsing beat of the music hums, caressing each body, lulling each thought. The colored lights flash, making the sweat shine and the glitter sparkle. The throng sways from side to side, each body perfectly in tune with the whole. A sweet escape, filled with techno and glow sticks.

Standing in the middle of the crowd, she found her peace. Crushed in the mass of life and light, she found her reason.  Surrounded by fake grins and giggles, she found her release. She’s found everything she wanted, and lost what she never had.

No one knows her name. No one knows her life. No one knows why scars line each milky white arm. No one knows why her neck is covered with finger tip shaped bruises. No one knows why she’s crying. They don’t ask either. And she likes it that way.

For now, she doesn’t remember. She doesn’t remember the pain, the blood. She doesn’t remember his face, his name. She doesn’t remember their sneers, their hatred. She doesn’t remember dying inside, over and over. She doesn’t remember herself.

The pulsing beat of the music hums. The colored lights flash. The throng sways from side to side. A sweet escape.

Covered in sweat, glitter, and tears.

She’s lost herself again.
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Comments: 82

hero08 [2012-06-29 17:46:45 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful!

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catlove64 [2012-01-26 05:25:03 +0000 UTC]

That is so amazing. It's so true, and I just kinda sat there after reading it, I was so touched. Thank you for writing that and sharing it.

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Nephele73 [2011-12-21 21:01:16 +0000 UTC]

The ONLY things that's wrong from my personal experience is that not everyone is dancing :/
it's actually pretty lame. haha. So not everyone goes to the beat.
But I love this so it doesn't matter. haha

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Nephele73 [2011-12-21 21:00:24 +0000 UTC]

amazing :]

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Cecilia-Schmitt [2011-11-21 15:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This really spoke to me deeply. I can relate to this story on many levels. Thanks for posting this!

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Catsofanime123 [2011-06-26 22:16:26 +0000 UTC]

I like this. It truely explains rave. The story was powerful, giving me a new perspective on it, but also bringing back memories of what's been done at raves. Memories that caused pain, but some that caused happiness

I like this, keep up the good work

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NauticallyDelicious [2011-06-25 17:58:08 +0000 UTC]

bravo. Very nice.

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purple-grey-fox [2010-12-31 18:29:05 +0000 UTC]

i love this! it's so sad yet it shows raves as something good instead of bad. its amazing!

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xDark-Stormx [2010-12-27 06:32:04 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't have put it better. I know I feel the same way, I go to raves to forget about the world and the stress consuming my daily life and just let go.

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XTanooki [2010-12-20 20:56:26 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful

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Emaniku [2010-11-15 02:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Simply. Amazing. I myself find my own escape in music. <3

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A2ianpride [2010-10-27 03:16:01 +0000 UTC]

I am a raver and Yes, raves are about freedom, about music, about dancing, and about the now. I love your piece, the only thing that sorta got me was the "fake grins and giggles" Generally if their fake... you aren't at the right rave. That feeling of freedom, of letting your worrys go and just dancing, the grins are real. Raves are a place where you can be you and everyone will love you for it, everyone is one, one massive body linked to the music. again though, I love your work, makes me smile and proud to be apart of my culture and makes me sad, because this is a story for alot of people that go to raves. Thumbs up!

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iiRunWithSkizzors [2010-06-24 01:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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silvercookiegirl [2010-05-30 20:01:59 +0000 UTC]

luuuuuuuuuv! ^^ never been to a rave either but my friens say everyones on ecstacy X_X besides that i think youve captured it beautifully really makes me want to go!

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Neko-Neko-Chann [2010-04-20 00:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Just...amazing. Love it! ^^

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XmaikaxkyuubiX [2010-04-08 21:04:49 +0000 UTC]

wow this tugs at my heartstrings. well done. it sounds amazing

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XmaikaxkyuubiX [2010-04-08 21:04:34 +0000 UTC]

wow this tugs at my heartstrings. well done. it sounds amazing

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Devour-My-Insanity [2010-03-10 03:47:10 +0000 UTC]

great work. i can relate myself to this. your a very nice writer ^_^

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sunshinephotographyy [2010-01-31 18:27:08 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this ^-^
I rave and, that's exactly how I feel when I go raving It's a place where you can escape from reality :]

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Bimmy-chan [2009-12-21 02:26:35 +0000 UTC]

That just.. made my day <3

It's like everything put in the right words, AWESOME JOB ♥

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Lluks-Bones [2009-11-18 23:34:29 +0000 UTC]

I also think you captured perfectly! Simply amazing! I live to look for literature and music that make me move, physically and spiritually. I applaud you and your work.

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DariDariKashi [2009-07-28 23:48:49 +0000 UTC]

<3 U srs u have never gone? It sounds rly good! Its kinda bittersweet but to the truth.

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915Raver [2009-07-21 02:04:37 +0000 UTC]

this is great

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Kyun3 [2009-07-16 08:00:17 +0000 UTC]

It's wonderful. And bitter-sweetly beautiful. You got the feeling of the rave to this.Great!

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lifeISaDRAG [2009-06-26 11:11:51 +0000 UTC]

oh......my.......god....... that is so good! and u say u never rave? thts impressive preety accurate. sweet stuff ur real good

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ArtemisAesthetic [2009-06-26 06:54:14 +0000 UTC]

What happened to this "girl"?

your dead on what raves are at their potential, one just has to allow that freeing stimulation to enter, now only if life could be like that on the outside.

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FireDylan [2009-06-17 16:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Yea! Lets go ravin, forget the pain.

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insightful-artista [2009-05-09 17:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely Amazing.

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Memrur [2009-05-01 19:23:17 +0000 UTC]

This captured my heart! Rave is amazing but this truely explains it. Even the most emotional of people can be swayed by music, or other forms of dance, music, or art.
Faved!

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Stevthezombiehunter [2009-04-27 23:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This really does capture what to me music is in general. Being a glowstringer/glowsticker, dancing is the easiest way for me to completely lose myself and just do whatever I feel at the moment. And as some others said, those who live in the music take others in without really questioning them, so long as they share that common bond. Kudos.

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RenegadePineapple [2009-04-08 15:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! I tried to capture the same feeling in one of my pieces, but I don't think I did so hot compared to you, XD

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Vampriss217 [2009-03-08 07:23:17 +0000 UTC]

sounds perfect and right on to me. But in the rave community we don't care what your story is we only care about you now. We won't ask questions and will welcome you with open arms

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MoonlyteFoxx In reply to Vampriss217 [2009-03-21 01:01:38 +0000 UTC]

i agree...i am the same way...this reminds me of the song "face down" by red jumpsuit apparatus

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yummyfangs483 [2009-02-27 06:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Hoe.
Lee.
Shit.
x_x
This is... Probably better than Poe.

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Philohugist [2009-02-16 11:04:50 +0000 UTC]

This is a great piece of writing.

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s4mple-IN4-j4r [2009-02-14 01:45:56 +0000 UTC]

i really like this..and can relate as well.

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s4mple-IN4-j4r [2009-02-14 01:45:00 +0000 UTC]

i love this and can relate to it as well

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Lyn-Zo [2008-11-08 02:42:04 +0000 UTC]

You should have incorporated something about drugs in there, as this seems like a very serious and interesting piece of prose.

You could have added E and made it even more detailed ya know.

And it's pretty common for ravers to try out E, as the sensations it gives are simply perfect for raving.

And no I don't do drugs. lol

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Larky-Lark [2008-08-30 12:16:45 +0000 UTC]

I LOOOOOOOOVE IT XD *adds to faves, sorry, a bit on the drunk side tonight* xD

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RavenForever In reply to Larky-Lark [2008-08-30 15:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks! (: And thanks for the fave!

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Larky-Lark In reply to RavenForever [2008-08-30 19:59:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem, it was really good.

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Thiefofsecrets [2008-08-29 21:25:03 +0000 UTC]

o.0 wow that's cool I love how you use the raving thing

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RavenForever In reply to Thiefofsecrets [2008-08-29 23:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. And thanks for the fave too!

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Thiefofsecrets In reply to RavenForever [2008-08-30 00:54:11 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome

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shaz-bot-master [2008-08-20 01:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice...

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RavenForever In reply to shaz-bot-master [2008-08-20 03:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. (:

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shaz-bot-master In reply to RavenForever [2008-08-20 04:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Anytime, this kindof relates to me...In a way I guess, I'm not that bad off, but Raves are still a wonderful release for me.

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DarthPooky [2008-08-20 00:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing. I like it a lot!

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RavenForever In reply to DarthPooky [2008-08-20 02:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks for the fave too!

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agenda666 [2008-07-10 19:30:16 +0000 UTC]

i really loved
colorfull and sad
its a bit short but sum the story well
keep the good work

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