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RabidNARUTO — Breath
Published: 2012-10-06 02:56:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1217; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description I see nothing in your eyes;

The more I ask, the more you lie.


The fire's burnt out and it's getting colder.


Sacrifice your heart, tell me what's left.

Now you know how it feels to be out of breath.


The air is frozen and I can't breathe.


I struck a match to hear the fire in your voice,

It went up in flames, now you're mute by choice.

Whisper in my ear, invade my sleep,

I hear you screaming in my dreams.


[Chorus:]

You kicked the soul right out of me.

You stole my breath, you ignored my plea.

You beat me down 'till I was black and blue,

But I will never give in to you.


I really hope you'll stop this soon.

It's like pouring salt into an open wound.

Sacrifice your heart, tell me what's left.

Now you know how it feels to be out of breath.


You got what you wanted, but your wasting your time.


I struck a match to see the fire in your eyes.

All I found was excuses and well-told lies.

Screaming at the sky with nothing to say.

How dare you even ask me if I'm "okay".




I'm all alone inside, but I still hear your voice.

I'd put a bullet in my mouth if it would stop your noise.

Come on, I know you hear the cue.

It's your mind, giving you someone to talk to.


[Chorus:]

You kicked the soul right out of me.

You stole my breath, you ignored my plea.

You beat me down 'till I was black and blue,

But I will never give in to you.


The fire's burnt out and it's getting colder.

The air is frozen and I can't breathe.


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Comments: 14

FairyDustEveryWhere [2016-09-20 13:40:17 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this, beautiful and amazing; this song is something I really hope to hear on the radio some day.

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CarmineDevian [2012-10-06 21:28:49 +0000 UTC]

very lovely piece

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gavinfree [2012-10-06 02:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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RabidNARUTO In reply to gavinfree [2012-10-06 13:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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gavinfree In reply to RabidNARUTO [2012-10-06 18:53:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you didn't intend to steal anything. I'm not accusing you of anything; I can just see the resemblance in Ben's and your pieces.

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RabidNARUTO In reply to gavinfree [2012-10-07 00:19:48 +0000 UTC]

And, someone else had also accused me of stealing and ripping it off, so I just copied and pasted my reply to their comment to everyone else that had mentioned breaking benjamin, because I didn't feel like explaining over and over that the resemblance between the two songs was an accident. So sorry if I came off as an asshole, I wasn't trying to be

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gavinfree In reply to RabidNARUTO [2012-10-07 01:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it!

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RabidNARUTO In reply to gavinfree [2012-10-07 00:06:33 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think you were, it's just that now that I also see the resemblance, it's kinda bugging me. I'm going to change it up a bit, so that the song still tells the same story, but it doesn't hold such a close resemblance. But thanks for pointing it out, constructive criticism helps

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gavinfree In reply to RabidNARUTO [2012-10-07 01:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Some tips: You could start with an outline next time, then make a Rough Draft, and then get somebody to edit it for you next time. That always helps me when I'm writing, anyway.

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psycostu3 [2012-10-06 02:49:43 +0000 UTC]

nice work

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Annie1289 [2012-10-06 02:48:17 +0000 UTC]

I like this, seems like a place Ive been once..

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HazeReality [2012-10-06 02:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice lyrics.

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tevinrice123 [2012-10-06 02:47:23 +0000 UTC]

This...is...AMAZING!

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PiggyPotter [2012-10-06 02:44:04 +0000 UTC]

I LOOOOOVE this... I can almost imagine how it sounds in my head as well... (: <3

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infinitelove143 In reply to PiggyPotter [2012-10-06 02:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Same here

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juliap17 [2012-10-06 02:43:20 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful!

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