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emzyhob-oed — Heartbroken
Published: 2009-12-19 22:02:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 592; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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Description Tears roll down my cheeks
Drop by drop
One by one

When they reach my shivering lips
I taste the bitter sweet of my pain
A flavour i had never once tried

My chest heavy with despair
My breathing ragged
From the effort of holding in my sorrows

My whole frame shaking

Small noises escape my lips
The sound of the lost
The Heartbroken
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Comments: 19

RandomApplePie [2009-12-27 19:13:09 +0000 UTC]

This is really good Emma :'D X

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emzyhob-oed In reply to RandomApplePie [2009-12-27 19:31:14 +0000 UTC]

woo..thnx XD

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johndee77 [2009-12-27 15:56:09 +0000 UTC]

wow thats.. awesome!!

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emzyhob-oed In reply to johndee77 [2009-12-27 16:25:54 +0000 UTC]

hehe thankyou

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Hitomigreen15 [2009-12-21 11:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!
This is beautiful!!
I can totally imagine someone crying with tears falling onto their lips and face!! Love it!!

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emzyhob-oed In reply to Hitomigreen15 [2009-12-21 12:36:21 +0000 UTC]

thankyouuuu <3
i sorta wanted to get across that image, and the emotions going on ^^

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Hitomigreen15 In reply to emzyhob-oed [2009-12-21 12:41:42 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome! ^^
Yah you did an amazing job!

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darkentheabsol [2009-12-20 04:26:52 +0000 UTC]

wow...this is deep

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emzyhob-oed In reply to darkentheabsol [2009-12-20 07:35:40 +0000 UTC]

thankyou i just wrote down wat i wassorta feeling ^^

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lucy4taylorXXXXX [2009-12-19 22:42:42 +0000 UTC]

awesome!!!

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emzyhob-oed In reply to lucy4taylorXXXXX [2009-12-20 07:54:45 +0000 UTC]

obviously i wouldn't settle for anything less ^^ rodl gol

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lucy4taylorXXXXX In reply to emzyhob-oed [2009-12-20 08:04:32 +0000 UTC]

lol x] xx

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emzyhob-oed In reply to lucy4taylorXXXXX [2009-12-20 08:09:42 +0000 UTC]

go onto ~jeniscool100 page and read the story Humanoid, it is totally wicked >_<

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lucy4taylorXXXXX In reply to emzyhob-oed [2009-12-20 09:08:00 +0000 UTC]

okiee lol, ermm does 'any1' have DA ?? ... jw

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emzyhob-oed In reply to lucy4taylorXXXXX [2009-12-20 09:11:11 +0000 UTC]

:/ not that i know of lol

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lucy4taylorXXXXX In reply to emzyhob-oed [2009-12-20 09:15:26 +0000 UTC]

oh :/ okiee lol omg ur online too woo lol how r u??

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emzyhob-oed In reply to lucy4taylorXXXXX [2009-12-20 09:39:46 +0000 UTC]

lol im good ^^ going out shopping soon for crimbo stuff \^o^/

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lucy4taylorXXXXX In reply to emzyhob-oed [2009-12-20 09:45:56 +0000 UTC]

niice , what time can u come on the computer 2day? x

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BernardWolf [2009-12-19 22:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Pretty nice

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