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Published: 2013-02-03 03:43:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 304; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 3
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Worked hard, changed eye style. c:Please critique.
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Let me just say, your style is fine the way it has always been. I love your art so much, but theres just a pang of unease when I notice the anatomy...
The head is in proportion, The ears need a little tweeking, the fron legs and paws are good. Torso is fine, but the back legs.
I'v noticed that alot of artist struggle with hind legs on any animal. So im not trying to pin you out or anything ;u;
The thigh of the hind leg isn't the big or long. Usually artists get this wrong cause of how they shape the spine. The way you drew the back is how most people draw it, but an anotomy of an animal (in this case cat) Their backs do not bend upwards.
Their spins are straight, and their torso is a little wider.
The legs need to be shorter, which is another reason for the anatomy error. If you shorten the legs of your animals, the anotomy corrects itself.
The thigh of the back leg should only go down 2/3 of how you drew it. The lower section of the leg shouldn't curve back like that, since it creates an acward leg pose.
Just cut the leg length, adjust the thigh and lower leg shapes and lengths, and your anatomy should get better in no time!
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I like it all, except the weird scratchy lines
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Oh my goodness, neon! I think this is my favorite piece of your art. I can see you worked rather hard on it, which is clearly visible in the shading, eyes and background. Stunning work.
......I really like the eyes~
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Thank you! Hey how do you get that font?
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Okay, does this look right?
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I like the new eye-style :3
It will go perfect on our art trade...
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