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Densetsu1000 [2013-05-05 18:48:08 +0000 UTC]

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This picture is really good. Why? I'll explain to you why it is really good then! First of all, the background. The background of the picture is highly interesting to look at (Some of it reminds me slightly of the Super Smash Bros logo) because it primarily uses lines and colours primarily related to the colour red. While the tow orange lines stand out in the picture along with Aura, the red lines stay in the white background and are overshadowed by Aura and the fact that to make them stand out less so Aura and the orange lines can then stand out more, have been toned down darker a little bit, almost as if one huge shadow is covering the entire amount of area. This is a brilliant idea as not only does it allow Aura to stand out but also creates contrast with her. It odes this because a good majority of Aura's body is bright white and shines out to the viewer over the shadowy background below. In fact, all of her colours do this because each and every one of them are so bright so they correspond to the darkness below them. I also like the smile on the back of her tail and grey star on her cheek, next to her vivid, bright purple eyes. Her arms and legs aren't perfectly straight but that might be slightly picky of me trying to criticise that. All and all, it is an excellent deviation and among some of the best I've ever seen in my life. Well done Neon-frappe. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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typhoonlagun [2013-05-05 17:50:40 +0000 UTC]

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I know, what do I know, a fail artist? Well..Dogs. I'm Faith, and Ima critique this.

Good work stuff!-

When I looked at this, I was pretty amazed. You added fur, and correct shading. The eyes have much detail., and the ears are pretty good.

Murr stuff:

The tail is ok, but at the base, it's a lot more plump, and I couldn't tell if it was the fluff or just plump. next, the legs are super long, right at the neck, so try to make it a little lower.
The hind leg is ok, but same with the front legs. It's a little high, and could be a bit lowers. Next, you should try and add the other hind leg. And the other ear, is ok, but could be a bit wider.

That's it! The tail is overall good to me, and so are the paws and all. The face is gorgeous. I didn't go easy on ye, though! c:

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Lillytehcat [2012-10-28 17:50:40 +0000 UTC]

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Hello there , Im lilly.. and im going to critique now uWu.
I always love your work...>W<
I love the tail ish so cute. ^^
Aura Looks so fluffy too!
derpy face ;W;.
I love how u did the shading its like popping out the picture! oWo'.
The legs are really long.Try making them smaller?mmk , and the back legs are tall too.I can't see the other leg half though.The Background is unique.( i use that word alot XD )It looks really colorful, as well! Keep up the work Neon ! Oh and the smooth lines are Really super amazing.^^ ;W;

- by Lillytehcat ;W;

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Polka-tac [2012-10-17 19:51:47 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! I am Polka. .3. Anyways, since you'll be reading this, nice to meet you Neon. Okay, here I go...

I always have loved your artwork. The way you shade just makes stuff pop up. I've always wanted to do that. And your fur in this picture seems fluffy. Personally, I like fluff.

Now, for the meh stuff..

The legs seem really really long. The front legs, especially. And the left ear in the back seems kindof taller than the other one. Oh, wait, nevermind.

I also love the way you drew the background. It looks really colorful, too. Keep up the good work!

~ Polka-Tacs

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Eiffi [2012-10-17 11:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Gaaah, it looks adORable! >3<
And again... you got some nice shadings there!

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MapleSyrupMonster [2012-10-17 02:55:40 +0000 UTC]

You mean

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Nekotiating [2012-10-17 02:10:22 +0000 UTC]

-le cuddle- x3 It's adorable

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EpicTwizzy [2012-10-17 01:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Cute! ^^ This looks great!

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celiest [2012-10-17 01:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Neon! Sorry that I rushed you. This is so worth 15. A hundred times, thank you!

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