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PhuiJL — Klonoa Doujin Pg 2

Published: 2011-03-02 03:21:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 10806; Favourites: 107; Downloads: 383
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Description Since most of the comments I received on page 1 want me to continue... so here's page 2

God... this is why I said this doujin is OOC >___>; Hope you enjoy *__*

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Here's are some things you need to know:
1. I use Anime style for this doujin
2. I work really slow on this doujin
3. I will continue to submit next page depending on how many comments I receive on each pages, no spam plz
4. Do no rush me to finish it, this will make me even slower D:
5. All of Klonoa charaters are OOC (out of character) If you hate it, just comment & I won't submit it again... I make them OOC cuz I hope that each page will make you laugh
^^
6. This is a fan comic, doesn't follow the actual storyline...

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Comments: 49

KlonoaFan21 [2019-03-08 04:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Aaight, now onto this page:

The first panel pretty well details Klonoa's shock, you know that he knows what's about to unfold.

The second panel is a little iffy. Again, it does it's job but I dunno. I'm not a big fan of how the onomatopoeia is kind of just... placed there instead of being worked more into the flow of the picture (that goes for all onomatopoeia in the doujin actually)


I don't know that "BANG!!!" is the best fit for when Lolo haphazardly swings the door open (right into Klonoa and Huepow) but it does work.

Other than that, I find nothing else to poke and prod at in this page.

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Fierce-Dities-Link [2015-08-24 18:06:26 +0000 UTC]

This kids, is one of the reasons doors should not be opened inwardly. Not the main reason, but an important one.

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Battledroidunit047 [2014-10-16 05:06:59 +0000 UTC]

OH, THAT'S GOTTA HURT!

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Irengard [2011-05-22 00:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow! The work here is really good!

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CBen2010 [2011-04-05 22:07:14 +0000 UTC]

cute

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IntoTheSunset2022 [2011-03-29 07:05:02 +0000 UTC]

When will the 3rd page release?

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PhuiJL In reply to IntoTheSunset2022 [2011-03-30 08:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Plz do not rush me. I finished it but I just don't feel like submitting it now :C

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VividThought [2011-03-15 02:24:04 +0000 UTC]

funy how women these days can get really strong. It is like being smacked by a giant door.... oh wait, that just happened to Klonoa and Hewpoe. :3

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zwataketa In reply to VividThought [2012-10-17 02:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Good thing that nose bleed isnt from "something else"

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zender16 In reply to VividThought [2011-06-24 22:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Dats funny m-m *bursts out laughin'*

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DisgaeaDragoon [2011-03-09 01:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Ohly snap, he's in a pickle this time. Worst news is, his ring won't save his hide this time around! XD
Good luck, Dream Travler!

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echoicandroid [2011-03-09 01:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Love it!! Can't wait until you make the next page!!! It was actually one of your pics that introduced me to Klonoa

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Wrriter [2011-03-08 22:37:06 +0000 UTC]

<3

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wdragoon [2011-03-08 03:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Its funny and cool lol !

i like it(hope klonoa and hewpoe be fine soon).

n_n

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VividThought [2011-03-08 01:53:47 +0000 UTC]

LOL that made me laugh for a while!

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xDarkSonicx [2011-03-08 01:38:13 +0000 UTC]

... PFFT!!!

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xXPitsLittleAngelXx [2011-03-08 01:33:47 +0000 UTC]

OOC is why I loved the original Klonoa manga, until the fans complained about it being too OOC :C Can't wait to see more~

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PhuiJL In reply to xXPitsLittleAngelXx [2011-03-08 02:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like OOC too ^____^

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cynder-1-2-3 [2011-03-04 16:13:27 +0000 UTC]

Is KOS going to be in here too? That'd be great

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PhuiJL In reply to cynder-1-2-3 [2011-03-05 08:35:10 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell you who's going to appear, this will spoil everyone DX

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cynder-1-2-3 In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-05 17:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Did I guess?

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PhuiJL In reply to cynder-1-2-3 [2011-03-08 02:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Still can't tell you

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cynder-1-2-3 In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-08 09:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Can you send me a note at least???

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PhuiJL In reply to cynder-1-2-3 [2011-03-09 02:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, no

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cynder-1-2-3 In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-09 10:22:08 +0000 UTC]

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cynder-1-2-3 [2011-03-04 16:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Looks great! Can't wait to se the next page

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Eriika97 [2011-03-03 19:05:29 +0000 UTC]

awesome!! >w<

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abeiramar [2011-03-02 18:37:55 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see more! I want to know why Klanoe is frightened!

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PhuiJL In reply to abeiramar [2011-03-03 08:23:11 +0000 UTC]

I guarantee you, the reason in the next few page is very very OOC

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DreamerAwaken [2011-03-02 15:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!! XD

Poor Klonoa and Huepow XDDD

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ZaneTruesdale99 [2011-03-02 13:19:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm really liking it so far. I don't mind that it's OOC; it's more enjoyable that way. XD

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PhuiJL In reply to ZaneTruesdale99 [2011-03-03 08:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Glad someone like OOC like I do

I know lots of ppl hate that >____>;

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IntoTheSunset2022 [2011-03-02 07:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Lolo looks so cute

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Smileymoo [2011-03-02 07:05:02 +0000 UTC]

loooool nice!^^

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EchotheDog [2011-03-02 06:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Your expressions on all of the panels for eah of the characters are really funny!^^ Keep up the good work!

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PhuiJL In reply to EchotheDog [2011-03-03 08:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you I love making silly expressions like that It's more fun XP

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EchotheDog In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-03 09:30:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Doesn't every artist love making silly expressions?^^

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PhuiJL In reply to EchotheDog [2011-03-04 11:45:13 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so Most of the artists I know are kinda serious with their art, sadly...

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EchotheDog In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-04 13:13:54 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm.....maybe they don't either have a sense of humor, or they had no childhood to cherish.

If they read this, tell them I didn't mean to mess with them or offend them and that I am sorry.

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Createss [2011-03-02 06:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh yay! You posted the next page. =^w^=
LOL. Another excellent piece I must say.
I greatly enjoyed this one just as much as the last.
Please post the next page. =^w^=

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PhuiJL In reply to Createss [2011-03-03 08:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

I'll post the next page depending on the comments as usual

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ZymonasYH [2011-03-02 06:31:51 +0000 UTC]

uh... Lolo banging the door? o.0"

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PhuiJL In reply to ZymonasYH [2011-03-03 08:22:04 +0000 UTC]

I watched way too much cartoons Forgive me... TAT;

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Eternal-Flower [2011-03-02 04:56:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG XD
Lolo looks so cute X3

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Yuaikai8 [2011-03-02 04:43:29 +0000 UTC]

lolz xD
they're in trouble....

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PhuiJL In reply to Yuaikai8 [2011-03-03 08:21:10 +0000 UTC]



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Yuaikai8 In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-03 08:43:37 +0000 UTC]

lol xD

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RuneKerianDrake [2011-03-02 03:47:45 +0000 UTC]

So hilarious....

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DNote-er [2011-03-02 03:25:17 +0000 UTC]

i love it!

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