Comments: 49
KlonoaFan21 [2019-03-08 04:36:55 +0000 UTC]
Aaight, now onto this page:
The first panel pretty well details Klonoa's shock, you know that he knows what's about to unfold.
The second panel is a little iffy. Again, it does it's job but I dunno. I'm not a big fan of how the onomatopoeia is kind of just... placed there instead of being worked more into the flow of the picture (that goes for all onomatopoeia in the doujin actually)
I don't know that "BANG!!!" is the best fit for when Lolo haphazardly swings the door open (right into Klonoa and Huepow) but it does work.
Other than that, I find nothing else to poke and prod at in this page.
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Irengard [2011-05-22 00:18:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow! The work here is really good!
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CBen2010 [2011-04-05 22:07:14 +0000 UTC]
cute
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IntoTheSunset2022 [2011-03-29 07:05:02 +0000 UTC]
When will the 3rd page release?
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PhuiJL In reply to IntoTheSunset2022 [2011-03-30 08:32:17 +0000 UTC]
Plz do not rush me. I finished it but I just don't feel like submitting it now :C
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VividThought [2011-03-15 02:24:04 +0000 UTC]
funy how women these days can get really strong. It is like being smacked by a giant door.... oh wait, that just happened to Klonoa and Hewpoe. :3
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zwataketa In reply to VividThought [2012-10-17 02:20:19 +0000 UTC]
Good thing that nose bleed isnt from "something else"
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zender16 In reply to VividThought [2011-06-24 22:57:56 +0000 UTC]
Dats funny m-m *bursts out laughin'*
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Wrriter [2011-03-08 22:37:06 +0000 UTC]
<3
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wdragoon [2011-03-08 03:42:02 +0000 UTC]
Its funny and cool lol !
i like it(hope klonoa and hewpoe be fine soon).
n_n
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VividThought [2011-03-08 01:53:47 +0000 UTC]
LOL that made me laugh for a while!
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xXPitsLittleAngelXx [2011-03-08 01:33:47 +0000 UTC]
OOC is why I loved the original Klonoa manga, until the fans complained about it being too OOC :C Can't wait to see more~
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PhuiJL In reply to cynder-1-2-3 [2011-03-05 08:35:10 +0000 UTC]
I can't tell you who's going to appear, this will spoil everyone DX
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cynder-1-2-3 In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-08 09:38:18 +0000 UTC]
Can you send me a note at least???
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Eriika97 [2011-03-03 19:05:29 +0000 UTC]
awesome!! >w<
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abeiramar [2011-03-02 18:37:55 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to see more! I want to know why Klanoe is frightened!
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DreamerAwaken [2011-03-02 15:14:25 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful!! XD
Poor Klonoa and Huepow XDDD
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ZaneTruesdale99 [2011-03-02 13:19:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm really liking it so far. I don't mind that it's OOC; it's more enjoyable that way. XD
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Smileymoo [2011-03-02 07:05:02 +0000 UTC]
loooool nice!^^
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EchotheDog In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-04 13:13:54 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm.....maybe they don't either have a sense of humor, or they had no childhood to cherish.
If they read this, tell them I didn't mean to mess with them or offend them and that I am sorry.
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Createss [2011-03-02 06:39:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh yay! You posted the next page. =^w^=
LOL. Another excellent piece I must say.
I greatly enjoyed this one just as much as the last.
Please post the next page. =^w^=
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ZymonasYH [2011-03-02 06:31:51 +0000 UTC]
uh... Lolo banging the door? o.0"
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Eternal-Flower [2011-03-02 04:56:32 +0000 UTC]
OMG XD
Lolo looks so cute X3
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Yuaikai8 [2011-03-02 04:43:29 +0000 UTC]
lolz xD
they're in trouble....
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Yuaikai8 In reply to PhuiJL [2011-03-03 08:43:37 +0000 UTC]
lol xD
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DNote-er [2011-03-02 03:25:17 +0000 UTC]
i love it!
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