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Published: 2012-09-30 14:20:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 34968; Favourites: 493; Downloads: 398
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Part 4: You're looking at it

Aaaaand part 4.

If there were any real jokes in this comic this is where they would probably be. I dunno..

Either way, this is a weird comic, and I'm now wondering why I didn't call this "The Twilight zone"

But then I remember that its because human brains can't repel cheese of that magnitude...
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TheDisgusticifiedOne [2013-05-12 18:53:57 +0000 UTC]

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Ingredients:
-Enough pickling cucumbers to fill the jar
-Three to five cloves of garlic
-Three tablespoons of salt
-half of an onion, chopped
-One cup of water
-One cayenne pepper
-One or two bunches of dill

Equipment:
-Spoon
-Medium jar
-Knife
-Cutting board
-Hands with which to use all of this stuff

1- Chop onions and garlic, and optionally cut the cucumbers.
2- Put dill, garlic, and onions on bottom of jar.
3- Put in peppers and cucumbers next.
4- Put more garlic and onions in the gaps, and then put more dill on top
5- Put enough salt water in to fill to the top.
6- Put lid on jar.
7- Shake any air bubbles to the top.
8- Take lid off and add more salt water if necessary and then put lid back on.
9- Let sit for two to five weeks, depending on the strength desired.

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mlplover12321 In reply to TheDisgusticifiedOne [2013-08-10 15:26:40 +0000 UTC]

uhh is this a recipe?why did you post for a critic?!?

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TheDisgusticifiedOne In reply to mlplover12321 [2013-08-10 18:27:46 +0000 UTC]

Because, there's a recipe in every critique for this series, but there wasn't on this one so I posted it.

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mlplover12321 In reply to TheDisgusticifiedOne [2013-08-11 15:41:38 +0000 UTC]

oh ok thxs for letting me know

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TheDisgusticifiedOne In reply to mlplover12321 [2013-08-11 16:45:15 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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KDF-Stigro [2013-02-02 22:43:08 +0000 UTC]

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Loved the comic, lots of laughs, with perfect capturing of character personality, especially with Pinkie's random moments, like Microsoft Power-point, and Twilight's very awkward flirting with the guard, whom turned out to be just a wood decoy. Facial expressions were pretty spot on, like others have said. Got a good laugh on the last page of this comic. Hoping to see more of your work, keep it up! It definitely seems like something Pinkie would do. I really feel a 'Twilight Zone' aura coming from this comic, shipped with ponies, implemented with other spontaneous themes. I'd really love to see more of your work, and I think I'm gonna do so now.

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ManaSparks [2012-11-06 09:38:38 +0000 UTC]

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In four submissions you managed to do these things:
Pinkie's "forever!" becomes "ruse!" (I love imagining her saying them in a similar way.)
Twilight is has become more confused by Pinkie than the Pinkie Keen episode
Create well detailed facial expressions of both Pinkie and Twilight
Use a running gag of the decoys with good timing (near the end of the comic)
Using the black suits and the flirting Twilight scene was a great idea
You've expanded the range of Pinkie's powers from just 4th wall breaking to something unexpected
You've inspired me to get back to work on my own project.

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thehellbinder In reply to ManaSparks [2013-02-12 21:55:12 +0000 UTC]

i personally think it was very original

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devifan2 [2012-10-04 01:29:51 +0000 UTC]

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I was amazed, very amazed at this entire comic! I laughed at it and enjoyed it. Very good "Twilight Zone" feeling because I watch some of that marathon on scifi last year... Very strange but I loved how strange the twilight zone show was... And yes there is a book on those stories. I am mighty proud of ya! I hope you make more awesome comics in the future! Sometimes creepy and unusual stuff doesn't have to be "Adult" to be good. Trust me I watched the 40's and the 50's episodes (maybe a few 60's). This is such oustanding mystery and the white room reminds me of that spongebob episode. This was a "Twilight Zone" 20% cooler

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brony78 [2012-10-01 00:02:14 +0000 UTC]

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Plain Mindf*ck. Thats why I love it!
First the design and drawing are so good. The shades and the vectors are so perfect, and the idea of everything beingn a fake is something I would have never thought of myself. This and all this series is so funny and expresses the "Cheese" (the character from Foster's Home) inside Pinkie Pie's personality.
I suggest to keep doing comics, and a little bit of artwork, and try to intergrate the rest of the main 6, or even other background ponies.
This is one of my favorite comics, and thats saying something.

Peace

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Neutronicsoup [2012-09-30 23:26:49 +0000 UTC]

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Ingredients
Serves: 6
200g (8 oz) plain flour
1/2 teaspoon salt
2 teaspoons baking powder
75g (3 oz) butter
75g (3 oz) sugar
50g (2 oz) desiccated coconut
1/2 teaspoon grated lime zest
1 egg
125ml milk
1 teaspoon vanilla extract
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Preparation method
Prep: 20 mins | Cook: 40 mins | Extra time: 40 mins

1. Sift flour, salt and baking powder together into a bowl. Rub in the butter until mixture looks like fine breadcrumbs. Add sugar, coconut and lime zest.

2. In a separate bowl, beat egg and add 100ml of the milk and vanilla.

3. Make a well in centre of flour mixture. Add liquid and mix well to form a stiff consistency, adding the additional milk if necessary.

4. Place in a greased 15cm (6 inch) cake tin and bake at 180 C / Gas 4 for 40 minutes, or until a knife inserted in the middle comes out clean.

Icing ideas...
Try this Coconut cream cheese icing or try a simple buttercream, then sprinkle with more coconut. For an especially pretty presentation, toast the coconut in a dry frying pan for a few minutes over medium heat.

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WildLightsStudio [2015-11-29 14:19:29 +0000 UTC]

pleas make a part 5. this ending has no cohesion. there are to many loose ends. my mined can't accept this as a real ending.

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ebtrain-bronyboy In reply to WildLightsStudio [2019-12-02 02:18:14 +0000 UTC]

I completely agree

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RedRidingWolf1365 In reply to WildLightsStudio [2015-12-09 04:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Black Swan: Ruuuuuuuuussssse...

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mistingwolfandpony [2015-02-10 06:46:09 +0000 UTC]

ruuuuuuuuuuuse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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mlp-and-smLunaLover [2014-07-20 00:49:49 +0000 UTC]

What the?

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derpyrage117 [2014-01-15 04:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Mental breakdown for me and twilight so fare well WITH  XXX HFFHGDHGDYFDHFDHFUYFHGGXHVXHHHGDHGDFFGUFJVHGFFGUFHGHGCHGFHGCHGCHFXFDGRHGEQAD F2FOKKL N HF I

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DigidestinedofTrust [2013-12-04 04:53:17 +0000 UTC]

I think the 1st law of thermodynamics applies here. A body in motion tends to stay in motion. Somehow....Pinkie's managed to break that and shatter min and Twilight's brain

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mlpfim456 [2013-11-24 02:02:32 +0000 UTC]

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alexwarlorn [2013-11-18 07:12:41 +0000 UTC]

What's supposed to happen next? 

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Fierce-Dities-Link [2013-11-15 16:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Then she wakes up and decides never to drink a mug of cider before bed.

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sonicgail [2013-11-13 17:17:16 +0000 UTC]

I don't get it

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nuke1007 [2013-10-23 00:53:34 +0000 UTC]

and then, twilight became a cardboard cut out

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princessprt [2013-09-11 20:26:13 +0000 UTC]

only with pinkie *epic face*

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Sparxish [2013-07-15 06:37:03 +0000 UTC]

XD ITS ALL A DREAM!!!

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W0nderbolts [2013-05-05 01:03:29 +0000 UTC]

i dont understand second last panel with that thought of hers

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wetaxel123 [2013-05-04 00:11:45 +0000 UTC]

RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSE

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CapnChryssalid [2013-04-26 20:24:22 +0000 UTC]

You're losing your mind Twilight. Do not resist it. This is how it must end.
In madness.

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MsKillerwolf [2013-04-25 10:08:53 +0000 UTC]

All we need is another panel and this time twilight falls over and is a cardboard cut out.

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lkz665 In reply to MsKillerwolf [2013-09-27 00:08:25 +0000 UTC]

thats what i thought would happen!

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MsKillerwolf In reply to lkz665 [2013-09-27 00:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Lol xD yay i'm not alone. 

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axelfirekirby [2013-03-29 00:32:03 +0000 UTC]

only someone who is isane can understand this

i did
more then you will ever know

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rainbowdashed344 [2013-03-28 01:44:22 +0000 UTC]

twilight pinkie told you ruse remember?

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Zarcan [2013-03-15 10:45:29 +0000 UTC]

bonus ending is twilight falling like a ruse pannel while screaming NOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooo

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HiveLordLusa [2013-02-22 22:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Why does this make so much and yet so little sense all at the same time... WHY!?

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pokebulba In reply to HiveLordLusa [2013-03-28 16:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Because it makes it seem like the whole pony world is a 2d cut out, which it is, just on a computer.
While still keeping the characters in character.
And cause this is the sort of thing we can all see Pinky actually doing.

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Shanenator777 [2013-02-22 09:31:33 +0000 UTC]

This was beautiful.

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thehellbinder [2013-02-12 21:53:36 +0000 UTC]

this was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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timstro59 [2013-02-05 22:18:43 +0000 UTC]

You broke Twilight.

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Darkraimare [2013-02-04 03:11:28 +0000 UTC]

OH MER GURD!!! THIS COMIC IS AMAZING~!!!

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TheDemonOfSloth [2013-02-02 06:59:31 +0000 UTC]

okay now this is really wierd

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TheBluebird27 [2013-01-25 16:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Ha Wehell my mind has been fucked so i'll be on my way.

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sunblaze32 [2013-01-22 18:47:45 +0000 UTC]

RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Zetuliini [2012-12-22 21:11:11 +0000 UTC]

RUUUUSE

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TheNerdyPony [2012-12-14 13:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Ummmmmm... what exactly is umm... happening? ME NO GET IT!

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pinkeshyrose [2012-11-27 22:32:25 +0000 UTC]

you make me question who is the true ruler of chaos discord or pinkiepie or loki loki cant get left out

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axelfirekirby In reply to pinkeshyrose [2013-03-29 00:29:22 +0000 UTC]

pinkie mentions loki alot

chould it be that she got her powers of caos from loki?

now it all makes sense

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Emperordaniel [2012-11-12 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]

My brain has melted.

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ManaSparks [2012-11-06 09:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Was this a Ed, Edd, & Eddy episode? Cause those planks were everywhere! lol
Also, I really enjoyed the subtlety of this comic. It twists humor together with confusion. It makes you think and thinking makes me a happy pony.

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MASF123 [2012-11-05 04:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Damn you, brain can't broken it is now think! D: *Smoke comes out ears*

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