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Here is part 2, it contains my attempts at backgrounds. Its weird..

Also, I have no idea how to draw anime type faces, especially from memory, just saying...


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DiscordLexia [2014-12-31 07:51:28 +0000 UTC]

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Critique by Neutronicsoup Oct 1, 2012, 9:30:44 AM
Ingredients
Serves: 10
125g butter
150g caster sugar
1 tsp vanilla extract
1 egg, beaten
2 very ripe bananas, mashed
190g self raising flour
60ml milk


Preparation method
Prep: 10 mins | Cook: 35 mins

1. Grease and line a 2lb loaf tin. Melt butter, sugar and vanilla in a saucepan over a medium heat.

2. Remove from heat and add the mashed bananas, mix well.

3. Add the egg, mix well.

4. Stir in the flour and the milk.

5. Pour into the prepared tin, sprinkle with a tablespoon of demerara sugar to give a crunch topping if liked.

6. Bake at 150 C fan oven (or 170 C regular, Gas mark 3) for 35 mins, until a skewer comes out clean. Leave to cool and enjoy!

Editor's note
This recipe has been edited by Allrecipes staff to include measurements familiar to UK and Irish cooks.
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Neutronicsoup [2012-09-30 23:30:44 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Ingredients
Serves: 10
125g butter
150g caster sugar
1 tsp vanilla extract
1 egg, beaten
2 very ripe bananas, mashed
190g self raising flour
60ml milk


Preparation method
Prep: 10 mins | Cook: 35 mins

1. Grease and line a 2lb loaf tin. Melt butter, sugar and vanilla in a saucepan over a medium heat.

2. Remove from heat and add the mashed bananas, mix well.

3. Add the egg, mix well.

4. Stir in the flour and the milk.

5. Pour into the prepared tin, sprinkle with a tablespoon of demerara sugar to give a crunch topping if liked.

6. Bake at 150 C fan oven (or 170 C regular, Gas mark 3) for 35 mins, until a skewer comes out clean. Leave to cool and enjoy!

Editor's note
This recipe has been edited by Allrecipes staff to include measurements familiar to UK and Irish cooks.

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LilllyEevee In reply to Neutronicsoup [2016-07-25 18:41:23 +0000 UTC]

What the heck is this pony talking about?

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TheDisgusticifiedOne In reply to Neutronicsoup [2013-01-27 17:37:40 +0000 UTC]

You're a genius! A recipe for banana bread is perfect for a critique!

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Pinkeepiper In reply to Neutronicsoup [2012-10-07 01:09:57 +0000 UTC]

The comic was by Photonicsoup, and this review is by Neutronicsoup. Are you two related or best friends or something?

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Neutronicsoup In reply to Pinkeepiper [2012-10-07 13:33:16 +0000 UTC]

yes me and Photonicsoup are actually IRL friends.

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Pinkeepiper In reply to Neutronicsoup [2012-10-07 13:44:59 +0000 UTC]

makes sense.

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Photonicsoup In reply to Pinkeepiper [2012-10-10 23:28:36 +0000 UTC]

quite!...

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pachi1945 In reply to Neutronicsoup [2012-10-01 00:02:41 +0000 UTC]

wat

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useraccount In reply to Neutronicsoup [2012-09-30 23:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it's because I'm a logical pony like Twilight Sparkle, but...it's a recipe for banana bread.

I don't get how this is a review.

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MillennialDan In reply to useraccount [2012-10-01 16:22:49 +0000 UTC]

That's the joke. It makes about as much sense as Pinkie's "solution" to the laser problem.

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useraccount In reply to MillennialDan [2012-10-02 01:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh! Okay.

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ZombieFX [2016-07-16 12:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Logic.............

also... TWILIGHT... you got teleportation.

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Robotponytron [2016-01-22 00:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Are they getting the dark spark

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MadOvid [2014-10-23 10:22:01 +0000 UTC]

In another life Pinkie Pie was Roberta Williams. That there is Sierra Logic.

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1cosmiconsciousness [2014-06-22 16:39:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, every one knows that.xD

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Crayann [2014-06-05 01:26:40 +0000 UTC]

OH GOSH YOU DID THE FACE THE FAAACCEEE

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ZDForrest [2013-11-26 06:31:59 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

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Kingpin4682 [2013-11-19 03:25:15 +0000 UTC]

PUNS!!!!!!

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princessprt [2013-09-11 20:24:19 +0000 UTC]

only with pinkie *epic face*

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iKittehs [2013-08-26 15:50:19 +0000 UTC]

He, he! Nice foot notes!

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JamesKaret [2013-08-25 01:00:55 +0000 UTC]

oh snap...!!!

clever pinkie

XDXDXDXD

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kuronekoking [2013-08-13 15:29:35 +0000 UTC]

what in sam hill is that?! (look down!)

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Deviantartfan0xxxx [2013-07-24 23:07:37 +0000 UTC]

part 2 is my favorite

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coolboysweet [2013-06-22 21:15:41 +0000 UTC]

i saw that small little text so here let my say it " Lol i had no idea how to draw anima faces " your welcome

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kitsinu [2013-06-06 06:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Only Pinkie could get away with that. Great idea!

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DracoDei [2013-05-26 21:40:54 +0000 UTC]

I also have to point out that that is easily within Twilight's teleport distance... of course, logically, the whole building would be sealed against that sort of thing.

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DracoDei [2013-05-26 21:33:33 +0000 UTC]

That is an awesome bit of Pinkie-Effectiveness. Maybe a bit too meta, but I laughed.

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CapnChryssalid [2013-04-26 20:22:21 +0000 UTC]

lasers love powerpoint...

I just...

It would work. With Pinkie Pie, it would work. Good god.

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TheDisgusticifiedOne [2013-01-27 17:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Love the PowerPoint joke!

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ZetaRESP [2013-01-26 19:56:26 +0000 UTC]

So, we had a skimming glimps to pinkie logic... and a critic that was probably made by Derpy.

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TheBluebird27 [2013-01-25 15:03:42 +0000 UTC]

ok what the fucks is ups with the critique. and 2 i think the last panel looks wierd because she has a more human nose than a g4 pony style muzzle or snout,or something... fuck if i know im just a dickhead.

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kiwifingers [2013-01-11 06:16:01 +0000 UTC]

I love how Twilight's line is so close to the Failure/Success song that came out later xD

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jchavez3628 [2012-12-09 23:48:40 +0000 UTC]

First off this comic made me laugh my ass off,

and did i read it correctly next to the shocked Twilight face, "Lol, I have no idea how to draw anime faces"?

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keaton-furman-prower [2012-12-01 00:24:46 +0000 UTC]

"Lasers love powerpoint, silly!"

I just learned how to foil high-tech laser security systems! Thank you Pinkie Pie!

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Blazinjake [2012-10-31 21:46:23 +0000 UTC]

silleh twilight! EVERYPONY knows that!

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RaenBoow [2012-10-20 19:37:11 +0000 UTC]

OH GUYS! POWERPOINT!
SHIT FOR REAL?
YEAH!
OMG!
YES!
YEEEES!
YES YES!
LOOK AT THAT THING!
YEAH!
OH YEAH!
FUCK YEAH!
YEAH!

I want voiceacted lazers next time ok? XD

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Evil-DeC0Y [2012-10-10 22:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha I love the last panel

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Marliska [2012-10-10 12:21:19 +0000 UTC]

what what what?

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ParaPups [2012-10-09 00:36:14 +0000 UTC]

As you can see, the number of staff decreases dramatically every time we are activated. Are you getting this horsehead army?

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freelancerraiko [2012-10-07 00:04:04 +0000 UTC]

....huh.....

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garciarael [2012-10-06 05:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Were you talking about laser pointers when Pinkie said lasers love PowerPoint?

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Shawnay631 [2012-10-05 07:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Dat Twilight face.

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Buckykatt42 [2012-10-05 05:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Sure why not?

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devifan2 [2012-10-04 01:23:10 +0000 UTC]

thats why pinkie is best pony

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MGlitch [2012-10-03 12:41:02 +0000 UTC]

Every pony knows that lasers love power points! Why didn't Twilight know that? She must behind in her studies again.

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PrivateWitt [2012-10-03 02:56:11 +0000 UTC]

This is hilarious!

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Samadar0 [2012-10-01 19:24:59 +0000 UTC]

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Aisling-Beanrua [2012-10-01 18:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Throw some Powerpoint at them.
Lasers love Powerpoint.

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ScottWolf [2012-10-01 17:20:53 +0000 UTC]

Twilight's face is awesome in that second-to-last panel!

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