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Published: 2005-12-13 01:02:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3567; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 171
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This was something of an experiment, so be brutal.Related content
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Very cool work , I like the movie and wish she was in it instead of him . Would love to see you do a scene from the movie where he sliding in yo the quicksand and sinks in . That would be so cool.
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ok this is the typ of ccomment you mean right if not im sorry if i upset you in anyway.
ok first her hair doesnt look real and her ear should be a bit lowwer with a little of the back hair flowing infront of it a little the head band is a nice touch too .
thats a griffen in her left pouch right? though the cat with the tan fur's ear looks a little off.
the grip she has on the dog looks more like she isnt really holding it though were you trying to go for a gental grab? and it doesnt really look like the cat in her bossom is really there it looks more like a
accecery you should open the cleave a bit more to give it the effect that the cat is in there and maybe add some detail that its body is pressing up agaist her chest supporter.
her head's a little flat compared to your other drawings i saw before coming to this one and her neck could be a bit thinner makeing like she has a coller bone which i cant really see .
her right breast should be more close to her left armpit the shadowing effect you gave her looks a bit off like she's not 2d but more on a 1d radious though i like how you got the detail shadowing for her neck muscles her belly button could use a little more curve like make it look more deep or give it some darker shadowing to make it look like that. now her butt .
it doesnt look like its sticking back but on the side i think it was the way you made the cloth on her rear it doesnt have a curve to make it look like underwear and the cloth infront doesnt have detail like folds or wrinkles and lastly her calves dont look like they can bend and and you should give more folds over her knee's she's missing some ankle ditail like make it look more like an anke use to be where you have the fat covering it up now the right side of her foot's ankle you should give it the effect its sticking out more by making a hill like bump were the ank;es should be .
other then all the the proportions of her body are good and the coloring is too but it lacks detail even if it should be a little other then all that i really like the concept you were getting at.
i hope this was helpful. panoply if not then i myself need to improve more before i give any critticuel info.
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lol i tried playing it, but it nearly made my crappy cpu crash XD
though i saw some pics in the other files
they didnt look 3d though
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They're 2d, but the environment is 3d.
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and im sure as many veiwer as you got for that game.
the magerity down loaded it
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hmm maybe when i get my new cpu i'll try it again to see if it works,
though in the mean time i'll be watching you , your art looks like its gonna go a long ways in the future as you improve over time and i wanna be there to see it XD though i like your art thus far and not just cause their bbw's its your drawing style . i think i added you already
if not then i'll try again XD
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Looks like she's been very successful in catching beasts.
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Hard to be brutal when I like it so much! 
Still a 
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This looks pretty cool,well done! I like the colouring,you've done a great job
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I love her thighs and I am envious of the grey cat.
If you were experiementing with the shading on the face then I think you should apply more of that to the pic.
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So, I should try more anatomical detail. Maybe a crease on he side and more pronounced joints.
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You could if you want too. You could add a soft shadow on the back of her legs and belly.
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I don't think I understand.
The back of her legs and belly are behind her so
Brilliant!
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I meant you can shade the back of her legs with a softer brush. So it looks similar to the shading on her face.
But you do have a good idea with a butt shot
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