Comments: 19
bokunocartman [2014-07-22 19:33:37 +0000 UTC]
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Alright, this is a pretty cool character, but I have a few little suggestions, should you choose to accept them.
The good:
The body is pretty well-drawn, and the shading is fantastic. I like the hair and eyebrows as well. The mouth and beard are okay, but I'd move up his mouth just a bit.
Tweaks you could make to improve:
His nose is long. Like, really long. It's a bit too long. I'd suggest making it about half as long.
The eyes are on his forehead. He has no forehead, in fact. If I were you, I'd move the eyes down-start them just below where they end here, and halfway down between the new eyes, start the nose.
Please don't take this as an insult, you are a good artist and have a great amount of potential!
Overall: I'm enthralled with the colouring, again, and most of it is great.
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Oljum In reply to bokunocartman [2014-07-23 21:22:47 +0000 UTC]
Really thank for suggestion. Yeah, Stan's nose was from begin to became long (family feature- all has long or big nose), cause I wanted to experiment with style more somewhere between manga and western style. Looks alike I overdo
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Solannia [2014-09-15 10:22:11 +0000 UTC]
The lineart is nice and I especially love the way you shaded this drawing !
btw your art is amazing (well, i won't bother to repeat it on the other pieces so i'm saying it here kdjfsdf)
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Oljum In reply to Solannia [2015-03-04 12:02:57 +0000 UTC]
:3
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SenescentWolf [2014-08-06 14:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Loving that coat!
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Oljum In reply to Joyy1245 [2013-05-26 11:30:51 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean?
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Joyy1245 In reply to Oljum [2013-05-26 13:48:45 +0000 UTC]
Well... I wanted to add that comment to another picture...
But cause of this nose he looks different?
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Oljum In reply to Joyy1245 [2013-05-26 14:47:41 +0000 UTC]
Okay.
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Joyy1245 [2013-05-26 11:16:03 +0000 UTC]
Why he's nose is so big?
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Oljum In reply to Joyy1245 [2013-05-26 11:31:55 +0000 UTC]
I tryed to make him any different then others characters. And to looks more European?
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GrayComputer [2013-05-19 14:28:53 +0000 UTC]
looks nice.
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