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AuraSauna [2015-01-10 20:59:09 +0000 UTC]
NinjaScribe, you tear my heart with reckless abandon, but you're still amazing. Thanks for the above, it was captivating.
P.S. I think a quick re-read on your part would help with cleaning up a few of those type-o's ^-^
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NinjaScribe In reply to AuraSauna [2015-01-10 21:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I'm glad you like it!
and yeh I read through AFTER subission and winced at all the mistakes!
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AuraSauna In reply to NinjaScribe [2015-01-10 21:35:20 +0000 UTC]
Well, you can edit the text.
Too be honest, I didn't think I was all that into Vampire stories, but somehow I really enjoyed this one. Kudos ^-^
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NinjaScribe In reply to AuraSauna [2015-01-10 21:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I was a little surprised at how much I enjoyed it. I tried to do it from a different angle and I think the fact that I'm not a huge vampire fiction fan helped me find ways to keep it fresh.
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AuraSauna In reply to NinjaScribe [2015-01-11 07:40:52 +0000 UTC]
An outsider's perspective is always helpful. Maybe you should do something like that again.
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NinjaScribe In reply to AuraSauna [2015-01-11 20:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Any suggestions? I'm always open to trying new story ideas!
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AuraSauna In reply to NinjaScribe [2015-01-25 00:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm. It's weird, but this is the first ting that popped into mind. heh *rubs back of head*
So what about two brothers gets stranded on an island and all the animals on the island are sentient, but because their animals, they live this totally war filled existence, and so you get to deal with the subject of war, and maybe by the time the guys get off the island (maybe they're rescued) all the animals have wiped each other out.
Maybe it's a bit H.G.Wells, but there you have it. heh.
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NinjaScribe In reply to AuraSauna [2015-01-31 05:17:40 +0000 UTC]
hmm now war WOULD be something that I have little writing in... maybe tweak it so that a couple animals survive and begin to understand how to not be so war focused...
Your description actually made me think of Lord of the Flies. If you haven't read it, basically elementary boys go nuts and kill each-other tribal style because they get stranded for a few days.
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AuraSauna In reply to NinjaScribe [2015-02-03 20:37:14 +0000 UTC]
That's the best summation I've heard so far. No, I haven't read it, but it seems like everyone I know has. And they all felt it was very cynical, but none of them made that cynicism seem as silly as you. My mother, in particular, seemed to think the plot quite feasible, and the discussion of human desperation quite convicting. And you're right. I would much rather read a story that explained that some of us, at least, can rise above what seems to be eternal conflict. I even like the idea that some of us can survive it.
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NinjaScribe In reply to AuraSauna [2015-02-04 15:02:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! There was also hallucinating involving a pig's head.. strange book, lol! Anyway here's hoping I can find the free time! might need to be done in slow chunks here and there, but could be worth it! Thanks for the suggestions!
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