HOME | DD

neon247 — ...
Published: 2006-08-08 14:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
Redirect to original
Description You wont see a light when i fly away, but a shadow so sharp it cuts the sky. For this boy of un-worded sorrow will take every heart with him, in order to patch the worlds night, day, joy and saddness within each one of our lives. No cracked black broken core will freeze this moment, only reflect in it a picture of truth and hope. It is now when tomorrow is a time that will never come we prepare for today, and take flight like heroes of an age forgotten, because every human knows that the tear in their soul is the hole left by a boy in the blind night sky.
Related content
Comments: 4

aurora-drifts [2006-08-20 07:28:31 +0000 UTC]

amazing stuff, takes you away

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

neon247 In reply to aurora-drifts [2006-08-20 18:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! I hope it took you some place nice

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Mnightarrow [2006-08-16 22:38:47 +0000 UTC]

intersting imagery. Nice alliteration through most of it and this line "No cracked black broken core " especially pops out.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

neon247 In reply to Mnightarrow [2006-08-17 12:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

I was mostly going on the imagery when i wrote it, i kinda wanted a picture with words.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0