Fangfingers [2008-08-31 06:38:22 +0000 UTC]
Has a nice old European fairy tale, folksy quality to it ...and yet a seemingly very modern moral hidden underneath .. It has some grammer flaws as far as english goes ...mostly "tense" ....But dont get me wrong, ... i am not critizing that. I am always in awe of anyone who can master more than one language --i think i'm addicted to electricity. i use it everyday...i like to be around it ...at night i always use lights. i think i need help ~Fangfingers
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NellyAsher In reply to Fangfingers [2008-08-31 12:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Yes, actually, tenses are my Achilles' hill I've been practicing English for years, but still don't quite get them. Anyway, thanks for pointing this out, I'll try to correct the mistakes.Literature is different from everyday speech; simplification won't do, you have to be precise. Writing novels is a kind of experience that stands on it's own. I realize my lack of this experience in English, but I'll try to do my best
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