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nancy0039 — I have a glass heart

Published: 2009-05-03 16:09:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 5600; Favourites: 232; Downloads: 114
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Description (I write this poem.If there is any mistake about grammar,please help me correct them,thank you~)


I have a heart,it is made of glass.

This heart is very fragile,

So I hold it carefully,

walk discreetly on the tightwire.

The end is undiscovered.

I have a heart,it is made of glass.

This heart is very fragile,

So I just lift it up lightly.

I am scared that it will break to pieces if I put more my strength,

guard my pimping happiness prudently.

Overpass this step,hold out the next step.

The end is undiscovered .

I have a heart,it is made of glass.

This heart is very fragile.

So I cuddle it softly,

enjoying this happiness.

I would rather select this kind of painful but sweet feeling

than have endless and fragmentized loneliness after a fall from the tightwire
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Comments: 13

mcell-chan [2010-08-10 14:00:08 +0000 UTC]

absolutely beautiful

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glassheart10 [2010-08-02 04:45:48 +0000 UTC]

its a beautiful piece and the poetry is lovely! and i utterly love your work.
i am very very joyful that your piece has completely described the meaning of my da name.

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tonysandoval [2009-12-04 12:18:07 +0000 UTC]

how beautifull style you have,saludos!!

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tainaktis [2009-09-18 18:36:17 +0000 UTC]

This is so soft and touching, you should really write more poems.

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K-Positive [2009-05-04 15:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Illustration is nice, thus it's little bit 'raw'.
Poem is neat.

I found few, minor mistakes & corrected them, as you wished.

"I have a heart, it it's made of glass.
This heart is very fragile,
So I hold it carefully,
walk discreetly on the tight wire.
The end is undiscovered.

I have a heart,it it's made of glass.
This heart is very fragile,
So I just lift it up lightly.

I am scared that it will break to pieces if I put more my strength,
guard my pimping happiness prudently.

Overpass this step, hold out the next step.
The end is undiscovered .

I have a heart,it it's made of glass.
This heart is very fragile.
So I cuddle it softly,
enjoying this happiness.

I would rather select this kind of painful but sweet feeling
than have endless and fragmented loneliness after a fall from the tight wire."

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SRaffa [2009-05-03 22:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Graceful, fragile, gossamer and lovely; lyrically and movingly accomplished...

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shtl [2009-05-03 20:28:29 +0000 UTC]

So sweet

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Amaya-Zorifuki [2009-05-03 18:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Such a lovely poem complimented by a pretty picture.

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blotangel [2009-05-03 16:35:07 +0000 UTC]

really wonderful poem... i like it

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yakkingyetis [2009-05-03 16:17:03 +0000 UTC]

i love the poen
maybe the word pimping is wrong??
it seems so sad... did someone break your heart ??

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nancy0039 In reply to yakkingyetis [2009-05-03 16:24:07 +0000 UTC]

no,haha,just...chatted with my best friend yesterday~~

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yakkingyetis In reply to nancy0039 [2009-05-03 16:30:57 +0000 UTC]

haha be happy

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Pixel-Spotlight [2009-05-03 16:11:54 +0000 UTC]

A really moving piece, especially with that poem. <3

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