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Moon-Tribe — Final Fall
Published: 2012-03-11 04:06:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 284; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description Falling.


Falling.


This lucid path
we all must follow.


Trickling down the sides,
Like an overflowing goblet.

Slowly
Desperately slowly,
I am
Falling.

Falling.


But what approaches?
a shimmering sound?
Full of aquatic echoes
and vibrating dissonance?
Do you understand it's beauty?

Even though I'm falling,
It is
Comforting.


Could it be described?
It's haunting elegance?
It's fufilling resolve?
Does it satisfy you?


While this fall may be
my last action,
It shall be the most graceful
Of all actions.
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Comments: 6

InTheStarryNightSky [2012-03-11 06:51:19 +0000 UTC]

A beautiful piece. Wonderful job.

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Moon-Tribe In reply to InTheStarryNightSky [2012-03-11 12:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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InTheStarryNightSky In reply to Moon-Tribe [2012-03-11 23:37:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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blackest-Angel [2012-03-11 05:28:36 +0000 UTC]

so greatly writing and goes to the heart fo rme...made me cry. great job!

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Moon-Tribe In reply to blackest-Angel [2012-03-11 12:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks!

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blackest-Angel In reply to Moon-Tribe [2012-03-11 13:49:24 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome hon!

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