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Published: 2010-12-21 17:31:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 3462; Favourites: 196; Downloads: 0
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Commission for =izka197 ^w^Her OC, Alyssa.
She's a sorceress, but it doesn't look like it in my drawing lol xD
Sorry for the wait! >,<
I hope you like it, dear~ :3
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The way you coloured her hair looks really amazing! ;A;
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Beautiful! I really like your coloring style, especially her hair.
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thank you x3 <33
im still practising though ^o^;
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Y-o-u~A-r-e~W-e-l-c-o-m-e~! ^3^<3<3
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This is just so beautiful! You did a wonderful job on this, as always! Her hair is really pretty!
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wah thank you so much isika-sama ;w; <33
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Impressive.
+ The boobs are large
+ The hair is detailed
+ Jewelry and painted nails are present.
+ The face is attractive and symmetrical. Many artists cannot pull both off (for some reason...)
However....
- The physique is far too simple. She looks like a doll, not a woman.
- A generic rule of digital art is to take advantage of flowy hair or clothing by making it dynamic, as seen here....
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Take note of how everything seems to be moving on that comic page... since the artist put movable things in there on purpose!
- If she's a sorceress, then ridiculous super powers (abstract art, or one of those "power circles" that appear underfoot) should have been used. Ridiculous super powers are commonplace in the best (or at least in mainstream) art.
Yeh...
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Thank you so much for the critique !
I'll try my best to improve and remember what you told me.
Again, thanks ! <3
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No need to remember; just copy paste.
I have a growing list of critiques off of this site.
Even so, you're welcome.
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GREAT commission!
The pic looks amazing! The sorceress looks really beautiful, specially with that big smile of hers ^w^
Love the hair too! 
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*le gasp* freaking amazing! Wish I had your inking skills! 
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wah thank you so much, dear ~ ! <3 <3
bad and messy inking skills are bad and messy.
lol they're really messy, seriously.
and anything but accurate xD
you'd be surprised what a flat brush with pressure
denisty can do :'D
yup , all done in sai c:
cuz im too stupid to understand any other software,
like photoshop and such ;w;
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This is beautiful, the girl is very pretty and the coloration is awesome
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wah thanks a lot 'w' <33
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Congratulations! Your entry has been level up to amazing gallery at keep up the good work!
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aww thank you ;w; <333
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nuthin to be jealous of ;___; <3
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LOTS to be jeluz of, silly billy >:I
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What's with that sun symbol on her body? XD
Great overall, I really like her flaming red hair! Keep it up. :3
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haha actually i have no clue xD
it wasnt me who designed her ^.^;
and thank you dear <333
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