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Mellime — Beleg and Nellas: WIP
Published: 2010-06-11 12:18:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2006; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 44
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Work in Progress! I started this drawing a good while back, when I decided to create a group dedicated to these two
Here is the group:
I've been busy and a bit too far away from DA... I guess this new version scared me away a bit.
PLEASE HELP ME OUT WITH HIS LEG, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO ABOUT IT!!!
all critiques are important now, so shoot!
I hope you like it so far ^^
(by the way, characters belong to Tolkien)
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Comments: 22
I'm glad to say the finished one will be in my gallery next week
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This is simply BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! um, what's wrong with his leg??? it looks fine to me...
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that the leg's OK. I'm really not sure about that sort of thing
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Ha ha, I'm not that great myself. but the leg was good.
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The poses, clothes, the hair and everyting else is very good!
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This is wonderful! I've always wanted to see more fanart of Nellas and Beleg is one of my favourite characters ever. You depict them both wonderfully.
Can't see how the rest of this turns out, because I do love it so far.
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thank you very much! I draw them and doodle them, mostly because I, too, feel the lack of artwork about them. I'm glad you like it so far.
I'm sending you an invitation to my group,
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The knee should be higher, because it doesn't look as if he's blending it.
And the hands, at least his, should be bigger.
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the hands will receive more work (all of them). I'll try to work his knee again, let's see if it gets right
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His leg seems to be quite ok, but hers are a bit too short in the lower part...
All in all it's nice
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thank you for your comment! about her legs, you think it would be corrected if I showed her feet?
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Yes, then her legs would look more natural and proportional! Or I'd advice to rise the knees a bit, but it would mean changing the whole picture.
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This illustration looks really good so far! I like how you did the detailing of her dress that she's wearing and her hair looks wonderful!
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thank you
I like your new avatar, btw
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You're welcome! My new avatar existed for over a month now.
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