ComradeAcerbus [2019-10-02 23:36:52 +0000 UTC]
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I REALLY like the style of this. Overall, it has a pleasant color scheme, and it shows both sides of Spinel, which can be difficult to do, which is why most people resort to the "two-faced art" (I'm sure there's better name for it, but I like my name better lol). That brings me to the point that the concept is fairly overused, buuut I'm not gonna lecture you on that. The lineart is fairly clean, though it is absent in some areas, and the shading and "rebound light" are, for the most part, spot on, but what takes away from this is the style of the shading. In some areas, the shading is soft-cell, but in other areas, it's sharp-cell, which is fine if used knowingly, however it shows very little consistency. This brings me to the hair, which is divided exceptionally well, I won't deny that (hair is tricky), but it isn't properly shaded. It is somewhat inconsistent with the rest of the shading. I think sharp/hard cell shading would work a lot better here rather than soft-cell shading. The background looks fantastic, simple but tasteful, though I might recommend going easy on the saturation of the colors in other situations. Here, I think it works well with Spinel's dual personality, and her use of her abilities here is subtle, but is easily noticable to anyone who has seen the movie.
All in all, this could use some improvement, but I think this looks incredible, despite my own criticisms. Stay cool, mah dude!
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