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LusoSkav — Shadows of Darkness page 3
Published: 2005-04-13 00:23:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1580; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 87
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So um.. yeah.. page 3 o_o ive been procrastinanting too damn much, so sorry for the delay (im pretty sure hardly anyone really cares about this comic but anywho >.> *cough*)So anywho, one may not notice it due to bad scan or resizing or whatever but i was trying a diferent style of inking in this one, using a crap load of diferent lines thickness to try and give this a somewhat more dinamic look or something, eventho my inability to draw cool poses/expressions trhows the hole effort out the door >.>
aaanywho any crits/sugestions comic wise on how to make things more dinamic/angles/pannels placement/just about anything to make this thing look cooler would be greatly appreacitated
and dont worry, you wont be seeing pages full of this dam girl's face/eyes again, i confess that these first pages were awfully repetivie because the girl's face was all over 70% of the page >_> but that will stop right now, i promise...
I wasted god knows how many hours of my life on this page, something between 5-10 hours i reckon o_o
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Comments: 18
reminds me of grade school... I like the angry mood and i've been following the story. Personally I think you're doing a good job
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o_O That must've been a crazy grade school o_o
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oh yeah! full plate and anthros abound i'll ya what. LOL
ok, I gotta ask one question I ask everyone I meet... what kind of music ya into?
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what kind of metal?
Thrash, Industrial... what kind of bands?
I'm into Megadeth and Korn (to a lesser degree these days) and of course Iron Maiden
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Pretty much almost all kinds.. new, industrial, gothic, black, ,metalcore.. o.O
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yes you are awesome! now the game will begin... it could start in the middle of the night or even when you're at school... or whatever's best for you!
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o.O um... game? what are you talking about? o.o
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THE GAME! didn't The Queen Dictator tell you?
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Awww!
But it was a good waste of time, wasn't it?
And besides, we finally get to see Selena in the next page!
Which means soon I get to see Mitch!
Anywho, I really like it. And don't worry about repetitivness. I do it all the time too.
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i think you've done a good job of putting together a dynamic layout and you're right, the variance in line thickness helps. good job.
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