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Havenhold [2018-04-07 01:56:28 +0000 UTC]

ahaha i absolutely love this expression!

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shvique [2018-04-06 15:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of meΒ when I'm disturbed while reading, or at work, or when I'm writing, or...pretty much anyΒ time!

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Ihashershey270 [2018-04-01 04:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Me in school XD

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shirofluff [2018-03-30 02:59:24 +0000 UTC]

honestly looks like tirek was fored to wear a girly wig and is pissed about it

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Tinyweasels [2018-03-29 10:12:18 +0000 UTC]

She was born a grumpy old spinster.Β  No matter when you return your books, they're always late!

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xPasteque [2018-03-29 10:03:16 +0000 UTC]

mdr my grand pa face is the same this draw is epic

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DWestmoore [2018-03-27 20:24:20 +0000 UTC]

That moment you realize that sometimes shipping goes too far

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MelanieMacbeth86 [2018-03-26 21:27:42 +0000 UTC]

When you try to study for finals and those damn neighbors are blasting death metal from across the street

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Gemsbok-Productions In reply to MelanieMacbeth86 [2018-03-27 17:42:23 +0000 UTC]

Noice

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MelanieMacbeth86 In reply to Gemsbok-Productions [2018-03-28 00:21:38 +0000 UTC]

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Sura-Resch [2018-03-26 21:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this. She came out beautiful! I just want to pinch those cheeks!

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MLPLOVER0711 [2018-03-25 19:54:06 +0000 UTC]

That is cool, I actually ship twilight sparkle and Sombra together...idk why

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QuantumBranching [2018-03-25 05:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Tirek and Twilight? that's the pairing DiscoLight stands next to so it looks normal.

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TheNarrator9000 [2018-03-25 02:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I thought this was Lucy as an old fart, lol

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darthshade245 [2018-03-24 13:41:17 +0000 UTC]

yeesh....an expression like that could scatter entire armies

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CaptainFuz [2018-03-24 00:05:38 +0000 UTC]

I love his expression

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Vanthlia In reply to CaptainFuz [2018-03-24 00:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Apparently its a female XD

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CaptainFuz In reply to Vanthlia [2018-03-24 03:36:26 +0000 UTC]

o of sorry didnt know

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Snow-Brush [2018-03-23 20:57:47 +0000 UTC]

I have seen that somewhereΒ  Β Β Β 

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Haerosis [2018-03-23 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Looks wonderful, I love that grumpy face!

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LeoArcticaa [2018-03-23 18:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Thats a face you see when you know you fucked up XD

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shuzbunny [2018-03-23 18:02:59 +0000 UTC]

A look that screams "BITCH, I AM READING. GTFO!

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VirgoGarg [2018-03-23 17:03:07 +0000 UTC]

I picture him sounding like Alan Rickman.

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androspinxlrk In reply to VirgoGarg [2018-03-24 01:54:00 +0000 UTC]

OhMyGodYes!

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Lets-Rave1 In reply to VirgoGarg [2018-03-24 00:07:30 +0000 UTC]

RIP Alan.Β Β  But I can see how he'd sound like him.Β 

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DecemberBreezee [2018-03-23 16:35:32 +0000 UTC]

Interesting character

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MysticNightVA [2018-03-23 13:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Definantly gives you enough reason to not disturb a bookworm, lol.

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solyent [2018-03-23 13:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Β  Now that is one irked ungulate.Β  Probably of a vexatious disposition.Β  You know the type?!Β  The type with a serious weed up their serious ass.

Β  Oh, I know.Β  She's just finished reading The Three Billy Goats Gruff and was sorely disappointed, finding it banal, hackney and derivative.Β  She's also introspectively debating, as to whether or not the story is subtextually speciest towards goats.

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Patch-of-Heaven In reply to solyent [2018-03-23 16:08:57 +0000 UTC]

i really find this comment funny.

And yes probably debating the possibilities on how to write the review.Or whether to give this a one star and with a very detailed summary of what went wrong and how.

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solyent In reply to Patch-of-Heaven [2018-03-23 18:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Β  Wow.Β  Someone actually found this amusing?!Β  I'm pleasantly surprised; given how frivolous and just plain silly it is.Β  I honestly didn't think anyone would bother to reply.Β  So thank you.

Β  And yes, upon writing an in depth and comprehensive review(as you suggested), she'll follow it up with a final treatise on the subject.Β  It's what any 'good' egghead would do, after all.Β  She'll take a 'crack' at it.

Β  Just being silly.Β  That's me!

Β  I really need to get out more.

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Patch-of-Heaven In reply to solyent [2018-03-23 19:36:34 +0000 UTC]

yes and it will dissect the plot to the bone like a frog in biology class.Talking in very much detail what she likes and what not(a deep accent on disliking,let's be honest,she is hard to please)and will make sour faces at every chapter until the finale.

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templar127 [2018-03-23 13:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Don't wanna mess her morning!

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imakitten [2018-03-23 13:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I love her colors and her mane/tail styles.Β  Also, she's earned some respect for me- one does not interrupt reading time, else they shall be scowled at.

Kinda reminds me of when annoying boys would pester me while reading in high school classes. Pretty sure I got away with hitting one with a book before.

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CrimsonFangX666 [2018-03-23 13:33:58 +0000 UTC]

No offense to Sura-Resch but no. This particular next gen would never work. Even weakened, Tirek is a threat to Equestria and Twilight knows it. He all but threatened to kill her friends when they first met, leading to a knock down, drag out, Dragon Ball Z-esque fight between the two of them. Unless he was only released temporarily, with a collar or something on to block his magic, this particular character would never work. For at least three reasons.Β 

1) The afformentioned attempted killing of Twilight's friends.

2) The wish to take over the entire world and rule with an iron fist.

3) He's at least 50x her size. How would this work sexually? He jerks off and covers her in his baby batter and she just collects as much as she can in a syringe and injects it?

I'm not saying the next gen drawing as done by Lopoddity isn't good, and the art work, as well as potential power Twisted Mind might logically have, is incredible, but physically it would never work. This coming from a guy who has seen porn drawing of Twilight having sex with Adult Spike with Spike being almost as big as former Dragon Lord Torch. Of course, that's also with the thought that Equestrians are far more stretchy than is physically possible.

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Dadjoke-Ness In reply to CrimsonFangX666 [2018-03-23 16:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow someone's rather bitter when people don't ship the same things?

What if it's an alternate universe where Tirek gets reformed instead of blasted? Or Twilight spends months visiting Tartarus and teaching him about friendsip. Or even...he's given magical limits to come out, because the map is pretty strong on the "you at least have to try and reform everyone".

And size? You mean just his huge size after he absorbs all the magic, right? Because you're forgetting he was also smaller than a stallion prior to absorbing all that magic. And if you're going in character, Twi trying to redeem and teaching Tirek is in character, and her not letting him steal magic to become huge is ALSO in character. So guess what? He's small because Twi doesn't let him steal magic.Β 

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CrimsonFangX666 In reply to Dadjoke-Ness [2018-03-23 19:57:09 +0000 UTC]

It's not that I don't ship it, I just don't think it would logically work, considering the threat Tirek poses. I don't even think Celestia would see an attempt at reforming him being successful. You do make good points, but I still don't see them as being a good match.

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Dadjoke-Ness In reply to CrimsonFangX666 [2018-03-23 20:15:16 +0000 UTC]

But you're saying it wouldn't work while not knowing any of the lore around this person's kid and why they exist.

It doesn't matterΒ if the ship itself wouldn't work, you are insulting someone's next gen kid just because you don't want to imagine the large number of scenarios where it would work.

And Celestia might not think it will work, but she might still encourage trying. Especially if, say, the map sent twilight to Tartarus. For any number of reasons. Mending the brotherly relationship? Teaching Tirek that someone willΒ listen to him? Maybe just to go and record his history and study his species since the old records are shit? Building a friendship between Starswirl and Tirek before Starswirl dies (since the old unicorn is one of the few alive who knew Scorpam)?

Celestia doesn't have to approve because Twilight is the princess of Friendship. Not the princess of treating everyone like they're irredeemable. Especially after Stygian and the Changelings, she might be tempted to see if Tirek has good inside of him.


Hell, maybe he isn't redeemed but they messed around anyway, because hate-fucking is a thing that people do. Or he raped her. Or she made herself pregnant with magic because being related to someone evil doesn't make the child evil, and the amount of power Tirek possesses would (most likely) interest her immensely, especially if she can "redeem" him slightly by raising a good kid.

Your list is just attacking someone because you don't think it would work as a healthy relationship, when the person never posted or implied the relationship was healthy. Just that there's a kid that resulted from said relationship.

Guess what? Real relationships aren't pretty, so this IS feasible. Any relationship is feasible depending on circumstance.Β 

Hell, for all we know Twilight decided to throw the monsters a hearthswarming party because Fluttershy felt bad for the bugabear, and Tirek and Twi got drunk and made a bad decision. The point being: You don't know what happened for this relationship or child, and your attack on it is simply because you don't like it or agree with it, even though your opinion doesn't matter. Because, newsflash: if you don't like it, you can ignore it.

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F-ishyCookies In reply to CrimsonFangX666 [2018-03-23 15:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Nah, it would work.

HE COULD HAVE BEEN REFORMED.Β 

Twilight could have cast a spell to make him her size temporarily, and then after she's pregnant she could change him back. If she couldn't cast that spell Discord could. Or Celestia. Or Luna. Or all of them combined.

And lastly, MLP is colorful horses that the pegasus ponies control weather and a pony with a horn and wings raises the sun and moon. Obviously MLP logic isn't the same as our logic, so if that whole spell thingy didn't work, they could just randomly spawn a kid or adopt one since their logic isn't the same as ours.


OR, if he doesn't get reformed, maybe he captured Twilight by somehow escaping from Tartarus and raped her, then left her alone. Vindhov did this, except with Wind Rider and Rainbow Dash.Β 


That's a lot of reasons. Think about it. It can work.Β 

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Dadjoke-Ness In reply to F-ishyCookies [2018-03-23 16:15:40 +0000 UTC]

(I'm just giggling at your Vindhov tag, since this bab was one of Vind's designs that Sura adopted xD)

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F-ishyCookies In reply to Dadjoke-Ness [2018-03-23 16:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD

I know I just found that out a few minutes before you posted this reply xD

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NavyBr0wnie In reply to CrimsonFangX666 [2018-03-23 15:06:16 +0000 UTC]

In some olde lores it’s believed that dragons have the ability to take on a mortal form temporarily to mate with another of a different species as a way to progenate and continue their race.

In Greek mythos the pantheon of gods are often depicted as leagues larger than that of a mortal man and as such have been show to have the ability to shrink themselves or take a mortal coil for a bit to secure offspring.

its not entirely impossible tired may have the ability to also shift himself to a smaller stature or even change his appearance slightly. Changelings aren’t the only ones who can shift, Case in point twilight when she made the mane 6 into breezies.

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Siansaar [2018-03-23 13:14:30 +0000 UTC]

She looks more like Tirek's grandma

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Cheesy-Doodles In reply to Siansaar [2018-03-27 00:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Lol I was thinking the same πŸ˜‚

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tigreanpony [2018-03-23 12:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Very cool, so grumpy, you did a great job.

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Weidenlied [2018-03-23 12:40:16 +0000 UTC]

What an adorable grump!

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RebeliousNerd [2018-03-23 12:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Aaahhh that is the next gen they bought from Vindhov πŸ˜‚

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Pinksneasel [2018-03-23 09:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I thought we were getting more Lucy art and story...

Still a cute grumpy babuu though.XD

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Ravnos2 [2018-03-23 05:59:02 +0000 UTC]

We need more lucy. how would she deal with Pandora?

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Godzillamaster69 [2018-03-23 05:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she's grumpy.

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LezzyBugO3O [2018-03-23 04:37:05 +0000 UTC]

One does not keep a lady from a good read.

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