HOME | DD
licrydis — Paperbound
Published: 2009-06-02 08:39:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1525; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 2
Redirect to original
Description
"Magical Muse Literature Contest" entry------------------------------------------
1
a TEA(r)drop
on blank paper
i started drawing
2
wor(l)ds bound
in paper
left me sketchless
------------------------------------------
First I hoped it would turn out to be more explicit and descriptive and my magical muse would take some specific form, but it remains abstract. So be it.
It's in visual poetry category because I think it's more apropriate even if the poems are (a bit unusual) haiku. I admit I may have put more effort into painting.
Watercolor on KOH-I-NOR paper. Written and painted by me *licrydis
I have a feeling there is something wrong with colors, maybe I will change the image later...
Related content
Comments: 23
I love this, the words and images compliment each other so well!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you. Im haiku if you use only the most necessary words, they should speak also inbetween the words and lines to tell the whole story. So yeah, that was the goal exactly, thank you for noticing that
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
welcome.
i
havebieng
trouble
with
bieng
short
simple
and
yet
painting
my
extravacant
pictures
into
peoples
minds.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
lol, I like your one-word-per-line style
make it a poem, anything can be a haiku, you just need to put away everything that is not important. keep it simple and maybe the images will emerge in mind on their own.
(I am just pulling this out of my finger, I don't think too much about my '
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
but everything is important!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
You've been featured here . Congratulations on the contest!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you kindly for feature, it means a lot.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This says so much with so little. Absolutely brilliant.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you very much! This is the ultimate goal when writing haiku. Thank you ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
tak to sa ti znovu podarilo, obrazky podmania
a v tej prvej haike by som pouvazoval namiesto I started drawing iba I draw
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
aj som nad tym uvazovala, ale prislo mi, ze 2 slabiky je fakt malo. ale mozno mas pravdu...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
no napisal som to, pretoze ukazanie nejakej casovej linie pri opisovani isteho obrazu/sceny, ktory/u by sme mali vnimat nezavisle do casu, sa mi zda zbytocne, skor hodne na experimentovanie s tým, co haiku dokaze obsiahnut
z dvoch slabik sa daju urobitit lahko tri a obsiahnut tak vacsi priestor, napr spojovnikom: - i draw . To mi tam ide aj funkcne
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
i really like this! such beautiful poetry and painting! im going to show this to my friends.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Wow, thnak you! I am glad you liked it so much ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thank you for runing the contest ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1