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Published: 2009-09-20 11:35:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 646; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description 1.
my hair on grass
he plays breath
~ harmonique

2.
hands through cluds
eyes staring stars
habanos!


... breaking haiku conventions again :3
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Comments: 5

RoughArt [2009-09-20 13:39:11 +0000 UTC]

forma mi evokuje williama blake-a a obsah, ze aj veci prirodzene, uvolnujuce a neobvykle mozu nahle davat zmysel (klucove slovo je nahle, skratka nieco niekam zapadne a je to ono)

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licrydis In reply to RoughArt [2009-09-20 13:42:11 +0000 UTC]

hehe, clovek nikdy nevie, co sa kde objavi :}
zaujimava to analyza.
dufam, ze sa tesis z dlho slubovaneho haiku, pretoze to spodne, to je ono...

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RoughArt In reply to licrydis [2009-09-20 13:51:55 +0000 UTC]

jasne, ze sa tesim a navyse som pocteny a 4 more!

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Miciap [2009-09-20 11:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Great!

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licrydis In reply to Miciap [2009-09-20 11:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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