Comments: 33
bubbles46853 [2012-12-02 15:26:10 +0000 UTC]
She's cute! May I hug her?
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bubbles46853 In reply to Leeveey [2012-12-05 16:14:14 +0000 UTC]
Okay then! *hugs her softly*
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HimeHeishi [2012-05-05 00:23:43 +0000 UTC]
MY BIRTHDAY. SHE SHARES MY BIRTHDAY.
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HimeHeishi In reply to Leeveey [2012-05-05 16:32:16 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! Really?! Then the third is my cat! hes the same age as me too.
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Leeveey In reply to HimeHeishi [2012-05-06 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Dah! XD Well, your cat chose a wonderful day to be born! September 12th, the best day eveeeeer~! X3
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BrainCrabs [2012-04-19 13:27:11 +0000 UTC]
moor eevee evalushens \o/
Cam will be so happy to see moor of his kinda yeeeee
and and i love her paints O: i want them yes yes \o\
i hope we can rp sometime :'D
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BrainCrabs In reply to Leeveey [2012-04-22 20:47:37 +0000 UTC]
oh pffft no sorry i hav probulms spelling as you can tell OTL but yes i do like the colors you used <:
oh gosh Cam would be so mad, since people always ask him if hes ok and stuff |D
but Cam always finds a way to meat new pokemon |D
yeeeeees
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Torracattos [2012-04-19 04:39:17 +0000 UTC]
*fav'd* She's got a very interesting history and I'm glad she got in. She's got some pretty cool uses for her moves and maybe someday she'll get to meet Ty in the RP and play video games with him XD
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Torracattos In reply to Leeveey [2012-04-21 17:55:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm open for note RP's now so send a note if you'd like. I got like 5 or 6 right now so replies might be slow. Well tge main reason is I'm not home and on my conputer. I'm on my itouch
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Heatheru [2012-03-26 19:21:57 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, a Jolteon that practices acupuncture is truly an interesting way to take advantage of a Jolteon's spiky appearance (and Pin Missile). I love that you've focused her life goal into one avenue (becoming a massage therapist) and it sounds as if you've done some research in the field. Acupuncture usually has a spiritual side though, so you might want to look into having her gain some professional training in this aspect of it.
One seriously problematic thing I'm finding with the history, which is actually very easy to fix, is that you started off saying that her timid nature grew worse as she moved to Poketopia City--but her hometown is Nayam City? And lateron she leaves her hometown to work at the Poketopia City's Pokemon Center...? So she goes from Nayam City to Poketopia, to Poketopia again? You might want to revise this section so that the acceleration of her timid nature is attributed to her move to Poketopia after college, or from Nayam to somewhere else? I hope that makes sense (I'm beginning to confuse myself).
I particularly like the section of her history involving her ex-boyfriend (I'm assuming the Houndoom was a 'he'), and how she has experienced difficulty controlling/producing electricity because of relationship problems she experienced with him. The art of acupuncture requires a calm and delicate touch, so I imagine this was a great obstacle for her to tackle--seeing as she also needed electricity to produce Pin Missile needles and electroshock therapy. I've always felt that electricity is a very volatile, emotional element, so I may be a bit biased--but I feel like I can relate to it being applied this way for your app.
Hmm, if baking is truly her dream, I feel like you should give more detail to this in your history. Currently it doesn't really cover this aspect of her character at all--so I think you might want to consider explaining where this comes from. You might also want to pick out an 'Ability' for her, this can sometimes be a nice spot for even further character development; and since you've already selected a move set--this might go nicely with it.
Hope that helps, good luck!
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SakuraDragoness [2012-03-15 18:19:15 +0000 UTC]
Nery nice and interesting character!
I'm sure you'll get in :3
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SakuraDragoness In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-18 00:15:14 +0000 UTC]
lol, well she's great ^ ^
no problem ^ ^
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Leeveey In reply to zkfanart [2012-03-15 04:42:22 +0000 UTC]
Gracias Zk X3! Espero que también les guste a los moderadores del grupo ^^
Luego subiré otros dibujos de ella :3 y si no entro al grupo, ahora sí me pongo a hacerle su cómic XD
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slamer165 [2012-03-11 22:08:08 +0000 UTC]
Very nice application. Im sure you'll get in!
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slamer165 In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-16 00:12:25 +0000 UTC]
I don't feel like there's much you could add, but a little more history wouldn't hurt~
*Is just throwing out ideas, cuz this app is great as it is already*
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slamer165 In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-17 17:46:53 +0000 UTC]
No Problem, And I like what you put, It tells quite a bit more about her.
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Flansy [2012-03-10 18:34:18 +0000 UTC]
She is so pretty!
I like all her information, and how you incorporated her moves with her job needs.
It looks like she is very thought through~
I hope you make it in. n___n
If you like to rp with , shoot me a note~
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hywo [2012-03-10 15:32:13 +0000 UTC]
hey :3
your app looks great to me! The only thing I'd do is expand her history a bit, describe some of her past events perhaps. It does have the five lines, but half of it just describes Jolty's personality, so to be on the safe side, I'd add some more story. It'd be a pity if you'd not be accepted on that, because the rest of the app is as good as perfect.
Your character is pretty cute o3o
good luck in april ^^
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