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Published: 2012-03-10 05:49:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2107; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description EDIT: I left the group, and according to its rules I need to delete the app form so people won't confuse it with a meme XD Still, I will keep her info for the people who added it to favorites (and it can come handy later).
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Yay~! I did got in! X3 Now I have to hurry up and do some art for the group, so I can stay in ^-^! Agh, why I'm such a slow artist?!? >.< *accepts her challenge~*
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My app for:
Might be deleted/scrapped if I don't make it to the group


BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Volta Joltana Atl Lyn
Nickname: Jolty
Age: 23
Birthday: September 12th
Gender: Female
Nature: Timid
Pokémon: Jolteon
Hometown: Nayam City


HISTORY
Jolty is the eldest of two daughters. She was raised in a loving and caring family: a Vaporeon as a father, a Jolteon as a mother, and a little Flareon sister. She was born in a Spanish speaking country, but her English is pretty good, just some grammar and spelling errors here and there.

To avoid her daughters evolving by accident into espeon, umbreon, leafeon or glaceon, their parents gifted Jolty and her sister with an everstone ribbon.

Evolution sometimes is not easy for the eevee species: little Jolty found a sweet hobby on desserts, so she felt that a leafeon would suit her for that job, but at the same time, she developed a natural talent on massages, and she really enjoyed giving them! So, maybe an espeon would be great too, but she didn’t like the idea of being the Sun Pokémon. Espeon or Leafeon? In the end, she decided that she enjoyed more giving massages, but would she be happy being an espeon? Is not that she hated that possible evolution, but that she didn’t liked the idea being hyper-sensitive to others, and the psychic powers weren’t attractive to her.

As she grew up, she learned that there were massage therapies with electroshock. Jolty suddenly felt excited. She always admired her mother, and she was a jolteon! She did some research on that kind of therapy and also asked her mother for all of the possible moves that a jolteon can learn. When Jolty reached her 15 years, she asked to evolve into the Lightning Pokémon. She decided to keep her pin missile move so she could also apply acupuncture therapy.

Even though she decided to be a therapist, college brought many doubts along with wonderful experiences. Jolty learned thundershock on her first semester and got problems controlling its intensity, so her massages ended with disastrous and paralyzing results. She thought that being a therapist wasn’t for her. At some point, she fell in love and developed a relationship with a houndoom. Things started getting better as Jolty suddenly started relaxing and controlling her electricity and making friends. As time went on, romantic problems appeared and Jolty couldn’t produce electricity at all; after analyzing the situation and getting support from friends and family, Jolty finished her relationship with her boyfriend and felt a great freedom. With her mind cleared, she got a new focus and learned how to control and produce her electricity, getting better on her massaging skills. Nevertheless, she still has issues controlling her electricity when her emotions are high.

After graduating, she started working at a Pokémon Center in her hometown, Nayam City. Even though she enjoyed her life at that moment, she felt that it was necessary to "leave the nest" and explore the world, so she could finish growing up. She asked to be transferred to a Pokémon Center in a country that she found interesting, and Poketopia City’s Pokémon Center was the one to reply.

Jolty was a little afraid of arriving to a big city as Poketopia, so she investigated for quiet and calm place near her new job at the hospital and found about Pokette Town. Being a timid girl, she decided that Pokette was just what she needed for getting used to this new country. Still, she became homesick and that made her timid nature to develop greater. She is more of the shy type rather than having low self-esteem issues; still this jolteon won’t start up conversations with new people due to being a nervous girl.

Who knows? Maybe after settling up and making new friends, Jolty’s timidness will disappear.


JOB
Massage therapist at the city's Pokemon Center.

Note: Unless you are a patient at the Pokémon Center, Jolty won’t apply you acupuncture therapy. This is because Jolty feels confident on her work environment and won’t get nervous. She will gladly give you a massage instead. (As you can guess, maybe being close friends with Jolty will change her mind).

HOBBIES
She loves baking and doing any type of desserts; she still dreams on having her own bakery shop one day, though she really loves her job as therapist.
She loves videogames (she can forget her timidness if the game gets interesting)
She enjoys stargazing, that’s why she also loves Pokette Town: no light pollution at all.
Likes to sing, though just for herself (neither that good or THAT bad singer)


FAVORITES
Food: Chinese food, especially wonton soup.
Berry: Cornn Berry, but she is fine with other sweet berries and some of the dry type.


CATCHPHRASE
She doesn’t have exactly a catchphrase, but some “umm…” or “esteee…” will come out in her babbling.


ACCESSORIES
She wears a necklace with a remain of the thunderstone that she used to evolve.
She also has her everstone ribbon that she used as an eevee, just for nostalgia.


EXTRA INFORMATION

MOVES: Being a therapist, she learned some moves that could be useful for her job.
Thundershock, the move that made her being a therapist on the first place, might be replaced by Thunderbold when she learns to control its power.
Thunder Wave, perfect for tensed muscles.
Pin Missile, acupuncture therapy (relax, she won’t launch them with wild aim)
Wish, a move passed by her dad’s side (yep, she has Togetic dna XD)

ABILITY: Volt Absorb
Though this ability might not be helpful at all on her job, it sure helps to bring back Jolty to her senses. In college, some electric type friends would help her to “recharge” when she was tired or when she couldn’t produce electricity (you could say that some friends electrocuted her to cheer her up).

MISC.
Her electricity color is white most of the times. It’s yellow when she is angry or stressed; light blue when she is in a pretty good mood (overjoyed, for example).
Jolteon’s game footprint show it has three fingers/toes; I’m assuming it has a fourth toe on the “back?” of its paw (like dogs and cats). Jolty has three fingers and a thumb on each hand, while her feet/paws keep their “animal”-like aspect.
Jolty doesn’t like spider-like bugs, though maybe a joltik pet will change a bit her mind~ ...or not?
She likes clean and ordered places, disorder can stress her out.
Caution, her hairbrush is charged with static electricity; if you use it, your fur will go "poof! I'm fluffy~!"
Because her own static, she has problems to made her hair soft and silky.
If Jolty gets angry, she will get an electrifying aura (literally).
She is a fast runner, like many jolteons.
Jolty is heterosexual/straight (just in case XD)
She isn't curvy at all and is a little bit thin.
She doesn't like to use make up at all, just for special occasions.
Thanks to her Volt Absorb ability, she isn’t afraid at all on electric storms (though the sound of the thunders make her anxious).
Due to one of her teachers believing on the spiritual side of the massages, Jolty is a bit into it too. For example: having a feng-shui mirror on the entrance of her house, or using incenses and the like.
She has a collection of the incense items ( [link] ) that she uses for her work at home.
Her hometown's name is "Mayan" backwards.
Atl is nahuatl for "water" and Lyn is danish for "lightning".
In Latinamerican countries and Spain, is common for people to have two last names: paternal last name (Atl) and maternal last name (Lyn).
To be honest, Jolty first was born as my pokesona, but I slowly started to develop her as a unique character. Still, she will have my birthday so I don’t get confused about why I’m getting “birthday presents” on my unbirthday


Edit 10/03/2012:
-Added more history as suggested
-Also, changed "hospital" to "Pokemon Center"
-Expanded the trivia a little bit too.


Edit 15/03/2012:
-More trivia just for fun facts
-Even more history! A peek to Jolty’s college life~


Edit 27/03/2012:
-Special thanks to for that great critic!
-Fixed some plot holes (related to her bakery hobby) and expanded Jolty’s history.
-Clarified that the houndoom was a he (added to the triva her sexuality orientation)
-Added her Volt Absorb ability (and a trivia related to it)


Edit 10/04/2012:
-Changed her age from 23 to 24 years, I feel that suits her best.
-Changed the “trivia” to “misc.”
-Added a bit of extra information on the Job section and a new pair of misc.

Edit 28/05/2012:
-Added a bit to her Misc. related to her being a bit into the spiritual side of the massages and that she has a collection of the incense items.
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Comments: 33

bubbles46853 [2012-12-02 15:26:10 +0000 UTC]

She's cute! May I hug her?

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Leeveey In reply to bubbles46853 [2012-12-05 15:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Just be a bit careful, remember that joteons got a spiky fur

Thanks for the +fav! ^_^

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bubbles46853 In reply to Leeveey [2012-12-05 16:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Okay then! *hugs her softly*

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HimeHeishi [2012-05-05 00:23:43 +0000 UTC]

MY BIRTHDAY. SHE SHARES MY BIRTHDAY.

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Leeveey In reply to HimeHeishi [2012-05-05 15:52:07 +0000 UTC]

well then, we share the same birthday then! I have only met one person on my life whom shared my birthday, you are the second

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HimeHeishi In reply to Leeveey [2012-05-05 16:32:16 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Really?! Then the third is my cat! hes the same age as me too.

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Leeveey In reply to HimeHeishi [2012-05-06 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Dah! XD Well, your cat chose a wonderful day to be born! September 12th, the best day eveeeeer~! X3

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HimeHeishi In reply to Leeveey [2012-05-07 14:59:22 +0000 UTC]

YEESH! XD

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BrainCrabs [2012-04-19 13:27:11 +0000 UTC]

moor eevee evalushens \o/
Cam will be so happy to see moor of his kinda yeeeee
and and i love her paints O: i want them yes yes \o\

i hope we can rp sometime :'D

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Leeveey In reply to BrainCrabs [2012-04-19 16:23:49 +0000 UTC]

By paints you mean her color o.O? Sorry, didn't get it

Wow, Jolty would panic by Cam's aspect and tell him to go with her to the Pokemon Center to check why he is so... pale? Though I wonder how will they ever meet if he is lonely and she timid

Eon-power forever~! X3

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BrainCrabs In reply to Leeveey [2012-04-22 20:47:37 +0000 UTC]

oh pffft no sorry i hav probulms spelling as you can tell OTL but yes i do like the colors you used <:

oh gosh Cam would be so mad, since people always ask him if hes ok and stuff |D
but Cam always finds a way to meat new pokemon |D

yeeeeees

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Torracattos [2012-04-19 04:39:17 +0000 UTC]

*fav'd* She's got a very interesting history and I'm glad she got in. She's got some pretty cool uses for her moves and maybe someday she'll get to meet Ty in the RP and play video games with him XD

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Leeveey In reply to Torracattos [2012-04-19 16:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment and fav! Luckily, I got pretty of time for create her, and it helped that I wanted to create her a comic way before learning of Pkmn-Crossing

I think we were on the same chatroom last night, but you should keep an eye, because she is pretty timid to start up a conversation (man, I though being timid would be easy, but I must be careful and made her seem calm, quiet or serious )

Jolty will gladly play Super Smash Bros. Brawl

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Torracattos In reply to Leeveey [2012-04-19 18:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Sounds pretty cool! I'd like to see that!

And yeah I think you were in there in the Roost. Ty is very friendly and eager to meet new people so maybe he'll try to meet her soon And Ty would love to do that

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Leeveey In reply to Torracattos [2012-04-21 15:34:23 +0000 UTC]

If you don't mind, I would like to Note-RP with you I won't be able to Chat-RP for the weekend, but I want to meet people

Thanks again! I hope we can RP soon! ^_^

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Torracattos In reply to Leeveey [2012-04-21 17:55:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm open for note RP's now so send a note if you'd like. I got like 5 or 6 right now so replies might be slow. Well tge main reason is I'm not home and on my conputer. I'm on my itouch

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Heatheru [2012-03-26 19:21:57 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, a Jolteon that practices acupuncture is truly an interesting way to take advantage of a Jolteon's spiky appearance (and Pin Missile). I love that you've focused her life goal into one avenue (becoming a massage therapist) and it sounds as if you've done some research in the field. Acupuncture usually has a spiritual side though, so you might want to look into having her gain some professional training in this aspect of it.

One seriously problematic thing I'm finding with the history, which is actually very easy to fix, is that you started off saying that her timid nature grew worse as she moved to Poketopia City--but her hometown is Nayam City? And lateron she leaves her hometown to work at the Poketopia City's Pokemon Center...? So she goes from Nayam City to Poketopia, to Poketopia again? You might want to revise this section so that the acceleration of her timid nature is attributed to her move to Poketopia after college, or from Nayam to somewhere else? I hope that makes sense (I'm beginning to confuse myself).

I particularly like the section of her history involving her ex-boyfriend (I'm assuming the Houndoom was a 'he'), and how she has experienced difficulty controlling/producing electricity because of relationship problems she experienced with him. The art of acupuncture requires a calm and delicate touch, so I imagine this was a great obstacle for her to tackle--seeing as she also needed electricity to produce Pin Missile needles and electroshock therapy. I've always felt that electricity is a very volatile, emotional element, so I may be a bit biased--but I feel like I can relate to it being applied this way for your app.

Hmm, if baking is truly her dream, I feel like you should give more detail to this in your history. Currently it doesn't really cover this aspect of her character at all--so I think you might want to consider explaining where this comes from. You might also want to pick out an 'Ability' for her, this can sometimes be a nice spot for even further character development; and since you've already selected a move set--this might go nicely with it.

Hope that helps, good luck!

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Leeveey In reply to Heatheru [2012-03-27 20:14:21 +0000 UTC]


This! I love this kind of critics! Thanks a lot!

I think I fixed all of it~ My imagination went crazy with your point about her bakery hobby that I couldn't help but add her problems in choosing an evolution!

I also felt that electricity can be chained to the emotions. And since we are talking about pokémon, Pikachu always used his electricity along with his emotions That's why I linked Jolty's electicity with her emotions.

Thanks again! If you feel that the new information can be better, feel free to say it!

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SakuraDragoness [2012-03-15 18:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Nery nice and interesting character!

I'm sure you'll get in :3

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Leeveey In reply to SakuraDragoness [2012-03-16 05:15:02 +0000 UTC]

I hope I can made it to de group though I hope I didn't ruin it by asking critics

Thanks for the fav! ^_^

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SakuraDragoness In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-18 00:15:14 +0000 UTC]

lol, well she's great ^ ^

no problem ^ ^

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zkfanart [2012-03-15 03:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Muy linda! Y mne gusta el estilo de su ropa hay algo de casual style pero hay algo de personalidad en su pose

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Leeveey In reply to zkfanart [2012-03-15 04:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Gracias Zk X3! Espero que también les guste a los moderadores del grupo ^^

Luego subiré otros dibujos de ella :3 y si no entro al grupo, ahora sí me pongo a hacerle su cómic XD

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zkfanart In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-17 00:30:56 +0000 UTC]

De nada y de nada! Yeah!

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slamer165 [2012-03-11 22:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Very nice application. Im sure you'll get in!

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Leeveey In reply to slamer165 [2012-03-12 15:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope so too! If you feel I can improve her more, please, tell me ^_^

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slamer165 In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-16 00:12:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't feel like there's much you could add, but a little more history wouldn't hurt~

*Is just throwing out ideas, cuz this app is great as it is already*

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Leeveey In reply to slamer165 [2012-03-17 05:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Okey, added more history

Thanks again!

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slamer165 In reply to Leeveey [2012-03-17 17:46:53 +0000 UTC]

No Problem, And I like what you put, It tells quite a bit more about her.

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Flansy [2012-03-10 18:34:18 +0000 UTC]

She is so pretty!
I like all her information, and how you incorporated her moves with her job needs.
It looks like she is very thought through~
I hope you make it in. n___n

If you like to rp with , shoot me a note~

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Leeveey In reply to Flansy [2012-03-10 23:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! If there is anything that you think I could improve, please tell me ^-^

If I make it to the group, I will take your offer and note you Jolty needs to know people even if she is timid

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hywo [2012-03-10 15:32:13 +0000 UTC]

hey :3
your app looks great to me! The only thing I'd do is expand her history a bit, describe some of her past events perhaps. It does have the five lines, but half of it just describes Jolty's personality, so to be on the safe side, I'd add some more story. It'd be a pity if you'd not be accepted on that, because the rest of the app is as good as perfect.
Your character is pretty cute o3o

good luck in april ^^

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Leeveey In reply to hywo [2012-03-10 17:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Okey dokey! Done! Is it better?

Thanks a lot for your review! ^-^

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