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LakrisDrops — Jack the Ripper
Published: 2007-10-30 23:13:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2621; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 21
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Description Jack’s eyes traveled slowly by the lines in the antique book playing with each word they came over. He bit his tongue, it started bleeding, he read the words over again, so he really could taste the blood the man in the book was covered up with, how he slashed their throats and cut out their guts, fast. So fast that nobody could ever catch him, or even notice that something just wasn’t right. He read how the man put some of the warm pieces of the young whore in tiny, tiny boxes and packed it with him before leaving the dead body behind.
Jack’s eyes widened in pure amusement as he put the book down on the old table beside his cup of tea. (And, yes, you got right, he was reading ‘Jack the Ripper’. Again.)
He let out a long sigh, his mouth was covered up in a big satisfied smirk, he was quiet facinated by this man who shared the same name as Jack himself. Ever since the Christmas he was given the book he had studied every single word it spoke. From right to left, up and down, from the end to the begining. From begining to end.
Yes, Jack knew all there was to know about Jack the Ripper and more than most people here on Earth...

He looked at the clock upon the big white wall, it was time to go.
“Time for work,” Jack mumbled to himself as he stood up, heading for his office in the next room. The room was dark and devastating to look at from the outside where the door used to be. The curtains were all red, the ceiling was cracked, and the old paintings were about to disappear.
Jack stood still for some seconds, and then he took some steps silently into the room, towards his desk.

He looked through some files that were hidden in one of his lockers.

“Found you.” He whispered in a gentle tone, "are you ready for death, silly girl?" His smirk became bigger as he read through the file a couple of times. Then he walked over to another desk. There he found a few knives, two forks, a scalpel and some candy. A lot of it.


“Are you leaving for work? Again?! Wait up!”
A small demon came running after him.
“Mind your own buisness, would you?”
The demon frowned at Jack’s bag.
“Looks like that is about to explode, many souls tonight?” She asked.
“No, just one. But this one is a really nasty one.” He smirked, and then he disappeared out of the door.


Jack followed an old muddy road, then he walked silently over a bridge, he paused for some minutes, took a look in his notebook, then he left the old bridge alone in the dark again.
He passed by someone being killed back in a corner, but he didn't interrupt the other man's work, he just went to the street sign he was looking for. It read only the word "Street."
A smile played upon his lips, and then he headed to the right, into an almost empty street where he stopped. Jack looked up at a very, very old house. He took the few steps up to the door, which was locked, of course, and he found the extra key which was hidden inside of a bunch of old newspapers. He unlocked the door with the old golden key, and then he entered the house silently. The walls where painted in old, old colours, such coulours which  were now forbidden to sell at the market anymore, and the marmorfloor was covered up with old sheets. Jack sighed, then he entered the door to the livingroom where he found the chosen one for this night.
Her name I will not tell.

After a few more steps he noticed that the girl had seen him in her mirror, she slowly turned her head and body to the tall, dark, winged man behind her.
“Who… who are… what are you?” Her eyes widened.
He took a few steps closer, “That’s for me to know, and you to find out... besides.. I know you know quiet well who or what I am,” he took a pink box up from his pocket.
The little box was filled with cute little red hearts.
“Candy?”
She took one who had broken into half, ‘a bad sign...? ’ She thought to herself as she put it in her mouth.
Suffocation, and after some seconds it felt like someone was choking her with their bare hands. She became sleepy, and then everything went black...

She was woken up by a strange melody, and of course, Jack’s voice.
"Tell me,” he paused for a minute, “when you were a child, did no one tell you not to take sweets from strangers?"
“Fuck you!” She replied, short and sweet.
Her hands were tied on her back, she glared at him.
"Now," Jack put on another record, "are you ready to play with me?" He smirked as he pushed the ‘play’ button.
He started singing.
“Come with me, and you’ll be in a world of pure imagination. We’ll begin with a spin, traveling in, The world of my creation.”
"You are insane!" The girl tried to push herself up from the indigo carpet.
"Oh, no little girl, hold on there for a sec..." Jack took one of the rusty forks laying on the table, then he stabbed it into her left knee.
"Now, you can't run." He smirked evilly, his eyes turned black, which made him look even spookier.
"Who are you?!" She writhed in agony.
“You are repeating yourself, dear.” He teased, “oh, well.” He paused.
“I am the Angel of Death," Jack took up another fork, "and this is my job. You can thank the real ‘Jack the Ripper’ that I’m still doing this after so many years," he smirked as he stabbed the new fork into her right knee, "wanna play now? Or are you still stuborn?" He took the scalpel up from his pocket.
“Let me go, you fuckin’ freak! It hurts!” she cried out.
But Jack remained calm.
“Can you say after me, slooowly; ‘Please, Mr. Ripper, play wiw me...’ ?”
He waited for a moment.
“No? Oh, well then... This is gonna be so fun!”
The girl screamed in pain as Jack started to slide the blade of the scalpel over her soft skin. Jack laughed, but stopped. "Shut up, silly girl, you're gonna die tonight." He licked the bloody scalpel.  
“Mmmmm, tastes like sugar, as I were told by my senses,” he paused, “but it needs something more, some ingrediense is missing, but what could it be?” He scratched his head, thinking, “Oh, now I got it! PEPPERMINTE! That’s it! I think I got some left right here in my pocket, actually. Pulverized! Ready for use and all that chit chat!” He looked through all of his pockets on his jacket.  
“Ah, here it is!” He smiled gently, “just a little bit of this into your little cuts here and there, and voila! We got a whole new bloodtype!”
The girl let out a big scream again, then another one, she cried and cried, though she knew no one could hear her.
Jack sighed, "Why do they always make such noise?" he stuffed her mouth full with the marshmallows he had brought with himself, and then he found some chocolatesauce and poured it into her eyes.
"There. Finally a bit more silent."
He giggled at her as he started to cut her long dark hair off, then he sewed in some liqourice bootlace as a replacment for the hair. In the end you could see nothing but a wig of liqourice, and some blood.. of course.
The girl was in shock.

-Ting, tong, doing-
It was the clock, who sang this pittyful melody of the time...

Jack paused, "Oh, tea time," he looked at his watch just to make sure that her clock was right, "would you like some tea?" He giggled more, he really enjoyed this. The girl shook her head, her skin was pale blue, and her mouth... well, it was full of candy.
He stood up, "okay then, you wouldn't mind if I use your kitchen to warm the water," he leaned down to her ear, "would you?"
“Slå deg løs,” she tried to say something in a foreign language, but it was too painful for her, she writhed in pain again.
”Oh, in a bad mood, are we? And I who have come this long, long way in the dark just to pay you a visit, tsk, tsk.“ He walked silently out of the room, leaving the girl to herself.

As soon as Jack’s footsteps disappeared, the girl tried to drag herself up with a little help from a round table. It seemed to look down at her, laughing, she was sure it laughed at her, there she lay on the floor with two forks for each of her knees, with chocolatesauce over her eyes, a wig of liqourice and in pain, breathing heavily.
But she didn’t care much about that right now. She looked at the phone sleeping in its own dust, paying no attention on what was happening around it.
She grabbed the telephone receiver.
Suddenly she heard a rusty voice and the sound of a shaking tea-cup.
"Oh, I was such a fool and trusted you," he looked down at the girl who was trying to crawl herself up to the phone table.
"The first thing you do as soon as I turn my back from you for one sec, is to try and escape from me." He shook his head slow as he took a sip from his tea.
"Hmmpf!Mmm!!Mh!"
"What?"
"Hmmpf!" The girl tried to say something, but it wasn't easy now when her ugly little mouth were stuffed full of candy.
"Oh, you want some tea?" He looked down at her lying there on the paved floor as he smirked.
"Nnnh!Nnnh!" It wasn't easy to hear what the girl had to say.
Jack smirked as he poured the warm acid tea down over her. The girl moaned in pain as her skin started to peel off.
"Ahahahahahahah! Oh, aren't you a beauty full of shit?" Jack dragged the girl back into the living room.
"You are so... hmm… what can I call you? What to call a thing like you?" he laughed softly, the girl almost calmed down by his warm laughter, it was so full of life and love...but the feeling disappeared as soon as he slammed her half dead body into the white wall (Which was now, not white anymore, but covered in the girl’s blood).
“Want some more candy, dear?” Jack nailed her hands into the cracked wall.
She screamed, so hard, she screamed with all of her air left in her lungs, but it was not enough to get her voice back, it was already gone. Jack smashed her jaw together so she bit her own tongue off.
“No more candy, I guess, ne?” He bit her underlip playfully.
She tried to shake her head hysterically from right to left instead.  
“Yes? So you want some more after all?” He turned to his bag behind him and took something up, it looked like a wire cutter.
Jack looked at the girl again, approached her. His hand shaking with delight, he stretched it towards her darting eye.
“Be still now, or the Doc won’t give ya lollipop!”
He grabbed the slimy, slippery eye balls between two fingers and dragged it out, quick as anything.
”Pling, plong, Avon calling,” he giggled as he started to cover the eyeball up with chocolate and sugar.
Then he placed the eye on a pretty silverspoon.
“Now I want you to say ‘aaah’,” he held the spoon up to her mouth.
“Now, eat. It sure tastes good. You made it all by yourself. Of course, I helped you, but... let’s just not talk about that.” He laughed, “let me sing for you while eating?”
He pressed the home made sweet into her bloody mouth.
She chewed it slowly, as tears rolled down her cheeks.
“Now, while you’re eating that lovely candy of yours, I’m gonna take this needle and inject chocolate sauce into your body! Oh, this is so fun,” he mumbled to himself while pushing the needle into her veins.
“Chocolate, chocolate, yummi chocolate covered girls!” He sang, licking up the hot blood mixed up with chocolate.
“I guess that before you die, you’ll probably wanna know why I’m here?”
She shock her head slowly, her head hung like it was dead down to her chest.
"You’ve flirted with suicide many times. That's not okay at all, little one. That’s what all this is about," he smirked as he gently caressed her hair, “you’ve been a very selfish little kid.” He tied a thicker form of liqourice bootlace around her thin neck, then he pulled harder and harder, her face went from bluepale to bloodyred, and then it become blue again, then white. She started shaking.
He let go for a sec, looking at her. He stared through her soul, she just knew it, she could feel it. His eyes, breaking through every living cell left in her body.
The girls breath stopped as the pain she had caused humans all around...


“Hold your breath
Make a wish
Count to three


Come with me
And you'll be
In a world of
Pure imagination
Take a look
And you'll see
Into your imagination

We'll begin
With a spin
Traveling in
The world of my creation
What we'll see
Will defy
Explanation

If you want to view paradise
Simply look around and view it
Anything you want to, do it
Wanta change the world?
There's nothing
To it

There is no
Life I know
To compare with
Pure imagination
Living there
You'll be free
If you truly wish to be

If you want to view paradise
Simply look around and view it
Anything you want to, do it
Wanta change the world?
There's nothing
To it

There is no
Life I know
To compare with
Pure imagination
Living there
You'll be free
If you truly
Wish to be”
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Comments: 49

eternal-hummingbird [2014-02-04 14:36:31 +0000 UTC]

~nosebleed~

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Freddy1016 [2013-05-21 05:43:15 +0000 UTC]

My god this was just to freaking amazing!My god th

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Guildedcrest [2012-07-18 15:54:54 +0000 UTC]

I love jack the ripper....he is so.....fascinating

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MidnightComet15 [2012-07-17 02:13:27 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEE IT! Not only was it a twisted story but it was Jack like, AND you had Willy Wonka's song in it! XD

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PhoenixMonroe [2011-09-27 22:31:27 +0000 UTC]

This, m'dear... this is horrible and excellent at the same time and I love it.

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HipHoP-CrAsH [2009-07-04 11:31:16 +0000 UTC]

hurraah for... "jack"
jeg må bare si det, men jeg bare børt ut i en liten latter da jeg leste" TEA TIME" XD
liksom som om dette var en del av hverdagen hans, digger det. fint skrevet, selv om "slå deg løs" var litt merkelig xD

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bebellalessa [2008-05-15 18:35:21 +0000 UTC]

wow! so cool story, i love this! awesome!

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LakrisDrops In reply to bebellalessa [2008-05-19 15:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, hun! ^^

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FoolsxxGold [2008-05-11 23:30:47 +0000 UTC]

I can't decide if I'm amused or have the chills.

I think the story was lovely. For some reason I loved the different uses of the candy, and Jack is love. I feel kind of bad for the girl. But only a bit.

It was wonderfully creepy and yet also humorous, though that could only be me.

I will never, EVER take candy from anybody after this. Seriously.

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LakrisDrops In reply to FoolsxxGold [2008-06-26 09:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, thank you so much for your lovely comment XD

Yeah, people seems to like Jack (so do I ), hehe. He is really a nice guy ... if you get to know him *ahem* >_>

Jack: *sips some tea* ... I am. u_u *ehehehehe >]*

Sorry for comment back O_O *bows* m(_ _)m

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LakrisDrops In reply to LakrisDrops [2008-07-22 16:24:30 +0000 UTC]

*haha, I meant sorry for late comment back XDD And now I am late again!! XDD omg. XD

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Devilkat [2008-01-20 04:56:41 +0000 UTC]

*shudders* You are one of the most original writers I've ever read and a mistress of the cheerfully creepy. Ick! This gave me a nightmare and still I must fave it, being a Serial Killers Addict. All Hail the Weird!

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LakrisDrops In reply to Devilkat [2008-01-22 11:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much *blushes*
And thanks for the fave! *gives you some chocolate and tea*

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foreverstrange [2007-12-02 17:00:54 +0000 UTC]

I read this over and over and love it more each time!
It gave me shivers!
Seriously, write another with Jack.
Please.

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LakrisDrops In reply to foreverstrange [2007-12-03 07:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Why, spank you very much! I am myself not very satisfied with this piece now, so I will do an update or something.
And of course there will be more Jack. Just that bloody school ish in the way now x_x
Thank you for reading

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foreverstrange In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-12-03 13:35:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.
I showed it to all my friends, and they think I'm slightly disturbed.
So now I will have to pay them a visit in their sleep.

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LakrisDrops In reply to foreverstrange [2007-12-16 22:59:02 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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foreverstrange In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-12-17 06:58:34 +0000 UTC]

I think writing about gore-like stuff is okay, because it's simply made up.
That's the whole point of fiction, right?
Be who you want to be, do what you want to do and most of the time, say what you wanna say.

I think you're very brave putting it up!

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LakrisDrops In reply to foreverstrange [2008-01-01 01:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Spank you

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foreverstrange In reply to LakrisDrops [2008-01-04 11:42:26 +0000 UTC]

*grin* yes plea- I mean you're welcome.

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Sitronsaft [2007-11-27 20:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Laik, ju tåtali søkk. Men den var jævlig bra XD Eg nekter å si noe stygt om den, og i såfall hadde eg aldri funnet noe mer enn at den e så lang at eg nesten isje gidder å lese den(AI HÆV NÅO PEISJENS), men eg må for den e for bra.

Engelsk-norsk rox, btw.

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Akrit [2007-11-05 15:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Stilig tekst.
Jeg må få lest jack the ripper altså..

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Monkeymaniac [2007-11-02 08:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwww!
That's so cute!

... no? No... okay... yeah... shutting up... likemynosewhereitisthanks...

LOVE Jack! He's amazing! Both of them. XDD
Jack the Ripper was kickass, and the new generation Jack is doing a splendid job!
Have he read American Psycho by Breat Easton Ellis? I think he'd enjoy that one too. 8D

Either way, it's a wonderful story!
It's really descriptive and with a nice (gory and slightly creepy) mood, and it's a wonderful end to it. ^^

WOnder, though: did he kill her just because she THOUGHT of commiting suicide, or did she really do it?

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LakrisDrops In reply to Monkeymaniac [2007-11-03 11:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes! It ish cute! Damn, I love me Jack!
And I've always been facinated by Jack the Ripper!
(syk liten unge som jeg var, men den tid er nu over *dramatisk voice* XD)
Jack: American Psycho? o.- *thinks* No, I haven't read that one.... *pauses* ... who wants tea?
Aww, me poor little wee Jack, he's a dead one now. *hugs him*

Aaah. No she didn't .. or She did kill herself in a way through the story xD hahaha, Jack thinks this is just funneeeeh! >D

Thank you so much for reading !

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loladrawsthings [2007-10-31 17:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Bloody Hell, quite literally. Amazing Aki, worth working hard for to post on time no? There's a couple of mistakes, but the quality of the writing far makes up for that.

Love Youse <333333

Is Riot still being an emokid? u.u

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LakrisDrops In reply to loladrawsthings [2007-11-20 08:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you again! Sorry me late replies, too much messages here on dA and far too much school work!
Oh, yeah. Mistakes >_< Don't like 'em! XD

Nope, Riot ish not emo anymore ^^ He couldn't be happier, even though he doesn't show it, but I'm sure as long as Shadow know its all awwight! >8D

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loladrawsthings In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-11-20 17:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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LakrisDrops In reply to loladrawsthings [2007-11-23 10:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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loladrawsthings In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-11-23 21:08:15 +0000 UTC]

>D Actually, his job sounds pretty fun, if I was pissed off with someone, it'd certainly be the sweetest way to kill them >]

WUW YOU LOADS! <3

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LakrisDrops In reply to loladrawsthings [2007-11-24 19:21:38 +0000 UTC]

haha, I know! XD I want that job too! XD But unfortunately it's taken TT^TT

WUW YOU TOO<3

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loladrawsthings In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-11-25 14:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, dammit. I'll just have to be content with preying on the blood of innocents x]

^^ <3

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LakrisDrops In reply to loladrawsthings [2007-11-26 11:36:58 +0000 UTC]



<333

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loladrawsthings In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-11-26 18:26:11 +0000 UTC]

xD I'd love to meet Jack, just not if he wanted to kill me.... >_>

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LakrisDrops In reply to loladrawsthings [2007-11-28 08:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Jack: Of course I wouldn't have killed you. You are Aki's friend.

Seee? = D

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loladrawsthings In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-11-28 17:32:27 +0000 UTC]

x]

So tempting to offer Jack candy xD

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LakrisDrops In reply to loladrawsthings [2007-11-28 17:57:22 +0000 UTC]

ahahah!

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tivoliet [2007-10-31 13:01:31 +0000 UTC]

ah.. fikk ikke den søte blå "joy" tingen til å synes i teksten. do'h

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tivoliet [2007-10-31 13:00:58 +0000 UTC]

see you soon. joy

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tivoliet [2007-10-31 12:54:46 +0000 UTC]

he won't steal my soul, right?

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LakrisDrops In reply to tivoliet [2007-10-31 12:57:14 +0000 UTC]

No, Riot is the soul collector ^^

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tivoliet [2007-10-31 12:38:33 +0000 UTC]

damn aki.
bra, Bra, BRA! Nei, ikke BRA!
FRYKTELIG fantastisk!
That's right.
creepy, though.

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LakrisDrops In reply to tivoliet [2007-10-31 12:45:13 +0000 UTC]

^^ Spank you, hun!
<333
Jack: *bows* thehe.

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Susa-the-insane [2007-10-31 05:26:42 +0000 UTC]

:fave+:
Me wuws it still!
Flinke deg seg!
It's so wonderfully sweet and gory and dead >D

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Stregian [2007-10-31 02:15:36 +0000 UTC]

LOL The next time someone offers me candy, I'll just fly at them in a blind rage and scream "EAT YOUR OWN EYEBALLS, YOU BASTARD!' XD And then I'll beat them into the floor and stab them to death with a candy cane. LOL

Well written. Felt sorry for the girl even if she was one of those Emo angsty types. And while Jack was interesting...I wanted to rip his flesh off with my teeth. 'Not so funny when it's your blood sweetening the tea, Jack.'

Happy Hallows!

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LakrisDrops In reply to Stregian [2007-10-31 05:35:43 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XDDD There is a reason for why I am ALWAYS buying candy myself u.u

>D

Thank you for reading<3 Really means a lot to me! ^w^
Jack: ... *gives Aki some chocolate*
Aki: ... *stares at* You wanna kill your own daughter!? Dx
Jack: ... noo.. Just a gift, since it's your b-day the 31th of October, hun.. and I'm like..dead now.. So.. Say hello to Angelo from me! ^^

*snaps the chocolate out of his hands* ... *mumbles something*

...and.. oh, I think he would find it funneh. about the .. his own blood sweetening the tea ^^

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ShrimpyMuffin [2007-10-30 23:17:14 +0000 UTC]

MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAAA~~!!! >8DDD
Again: I LOVE this story!! (And even if I said so at school, I'm glad I'm not that girl. 8D )
If anyone ever asks me if I want homemade candy, I'll now definately say "NO." . XDD Yesh! Errh~! I don't know what more to say!! 8D
I simply love it! >8D *evil laugh* You're very good at writing stories! >x3
Jack~! 8D *drools over with Aki*


HAPPY HALLOWEEN to you too, Aki-Cato-chan~~!! ^w^ >:3

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LakrisDrops In reply to ShrimpyMuffin [2007-10-31 05:38:56 +0000 UTC]

hahaha! xD Aww, thank you!
Jack: *eye twitching* ...stop...drooling...over...me...! >_< *mmmrrrr*

I think he likeys you! XD = D

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ShrimpyMuffin In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-10-31 21:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome! XDD
Awww, nooo, whyy? 8D Don't you like to think about that you have fangirls around you~? = 3

OH RLY? 8D Hahaha, riiight, like somebody would ever. XDDD = D

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LakrisDrops In reply to ShrimpyMuffin [2007-11-28 08:09:55 +0000 UTC]

XDDD

Jack: ... -_- I'm gonna pop your eyeballs out and feed them to your friends.

Oooh, he ish in a goodie goodie mood today! ^-^

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ShrimpyMuffin In reply to LakrisDrops [2007-11-30 18:53:32 +0000 UTC]

JACK, YOU'RE SO NIIIICE~~!! 8D

Oh yes, I can really tell... XD

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