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Published: 2006-12-26 06:19:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1726; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 6
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Description Another death. The fifth prostitute killed in the past three months. Hopefully the last. Jack the Ripper, as we dubbed him, had struck again. I walked to the room were the body lay. On the bed, blood soaked the mattress. There were apparent slits with a knife across most of her body. As I examined the scene, I thought of what it must have been like in her shoes that night.



It was Friday, a usually busy day in a prostitute’s line of work. It was November 9, 1888. There had been a string of murders in the area, and Mary Jane Kelly, also known as ‘Marie Jeanette’ Kelly or ‘Ginger’, was worried. However, she had bills to pays. She was weeks behind in her rent, and business was slow. A man came up to her. He was charming, but she was on edge. There was something about him, something off.

He noticed how tensed she was, and with a reassuring smile said, “I’m not the killer, just a client.” She brought him to her apartment, as she did with most clients, and offered herself to him. It was then as she began unbuttoning her blouse, she noticed he was coming towards her. She was standing in front of the bed and facing away from him. He came behind her and strangled her with rope.

After a few choking, gasping breaths, she was dead. The man, Jack the Ripper, caught her as she fell and laid her on the bed. He began with slitting her throat, and soon followed by basically dissecting her. He did so while barely getting blood on himself, a remarkable feat indeed.



After photographing the crime scene, I thought about how she was the most gory victim and how she was lucky she was dead when he began. Her thighs were severed from the bone, and she had several slashes on he face and neck. Many organs were removed and found strewn about the scene. As I left the scene, I turned and said to her body, “Fly, and let this worlds sorrows never weigh you down again.”
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Comments: 31

dE-N0idED [2011-12-10 22:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Nicely written

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iluvarbok In reply to dE-N0idED [2011-12-17 13:37:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Thion98 [2010-02-06 01:06:36 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed this exceptf for the end for a moment i was like. "OMGWTF!" Then i realized how true the words were.

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iluvarbok In reply to Thion98 [2010-02-06 01:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Thion98 In reply to iluvarbok [2010-02-06 01:35:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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OmegaRockman [2009-05-18 23:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow... makes me want a series following his pursuit. But the "never caught" thing really makes for an unsatisfying ending...

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iluvarbok In reply to OmegaRockman [2009-05-19 00:26:24 +0000 UTC]

It's historical fiction. I can't just make him get caught. He was never caught, so I have to maintain history's integrity.

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OmegaRockman In reply to iluvarbok [2009-05-19 00:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Exactly why making a series would, unfortunately, not work well.

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iluvarbok In reply to OmegaRockman [2009-05-19 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Er, yeah.

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OmegaRockman In reply to iluvarbok [2009-05-19 01:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Mmhmm. *sips beer*

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iluvarbok In reply to OmegaRockman [2009-05-19 01:25:10 +0000 UTC]

...

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OmegaRockman In reply to iluvarbok [2009-05-19 01:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Boomhower > you

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iluvarbok In reply to OmegaRockman [2009-05-19 01:33:56 +0000 UTC]

...

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OmegaRockman In reply to iluvarbok [2009-05-19 01:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Well fine.

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-06 01:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Heyhowyoudongjustbeingolddanggangboomhaouryouknow?

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-02-06 18:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Mmhmm.

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-08 03:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Yup

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-02-09 19:29:21 +0000 UTC]

-sips beer- Yep.

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-09 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Yep.*tAKES A DRAG.*Lol caps lock.

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-02-11 14:14:33 +0000 UTC]

LULZ I MEAN Yep.

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-13 00:27:55 +0000 UTC]

lulz yep.

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-02-15 00:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Mmmhmm.

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-15 03:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Dies of alcohol poising.

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-02-26 21:30:34 +0000 UTC]

-dies as well-

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-26 22:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Now we both dead.

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-03-01 18:47:32 +0000 UTC]

Shoot.

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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-03-02 01:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Xd

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OmegaRockman In reply to Thion98 [2010-03-02 21:08:13 +0000 UTC]

XD

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ShadowG777 [2009-04-09 12:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Is Jack the Ripper a true event or some story?

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iluvarbok In reply to ShadowG777 [2009-04-09 13:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Actually, Jack the Ripper is a very famous serial killer in London from the late 1880s. He was never caught, and only murdered prostitutes. Mary Jane Kelly was his last known victim.

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xxdeceptivexx [2007-01-09 18:11:38 +0000 UTC]

I like the final ending sentence and the way you just do small scenes, snatches of what could have happened.

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