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dE-N0idED [2011-12-10 22:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Nicely written
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Thion98 [2010-02-06 01:06:36 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed this exceptf for the end for a moment i was like. "OMGWTF!" Then i realized how true the words were.
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Thion98 In reply to iluvarbok [2010-02-06 01:35:54 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
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OmegaRockman [2009-05-18 23:41:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow... makes me want a series following his pursuit. But the "never caught" thing really makes for an unsatisfying ending...
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iluvarbok In reply to OmegaRockman [2009-05-19 00:26:24 +0000 UTC]
It's historical fiction. I can't just make him get caught. He was never caught, so I have to maintain history's integrity.
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OmegaRockman In reply to iluvarbok [2009-05-19 00:50:30 +0000 UTC]
Exactly why making a series would, unfortunately, not work well.
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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-06 01:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Heyhowyoudongjustbeingolddanggangboomhaouryouknow?
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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-09 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Yep.*tAKES A DRAG.*Lol caps lock.
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Thion98 In reply to OmegaRockman [2010-02-15 03:23:07 +0000 UTC]
Dies of alcohol poising.
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ShadowG777 [2009-04-09 12:41:26 +0000 UTC]
Is Jack the Ripper a true event or some story?
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iluvarbok In reply to ShadowG777 [2009-04-09 13:31:32 +0000 UTC]
Actually, Jack the Ripper is a very famous serial killer in London from the late 1880s. He was never caught, and only murdered prostitutes. Mary Jane Kelly was his last known victim.
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xxdeceptivexx [2007-01-09 18:11:38 +0000 UTC]
I like the final ending sentence and the way you just do small scenes, snatches of what could have happened.
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