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Description A Fairy Tale

I wrote a fairy tale,
In the ambry under stairs,
I get a loving mail,
So I put my socks into pairs,
I took my coat and rent a boat,
Now on the blue ocean I can sail,
I would float to reply your note,
Cause I won't let my story be fail,

I fought great waves,
Rain chilled me to the bones,
I slept in sea caves,
So hungry I could eat stones,
I left my town, now I will drown,
Will I ever see another dawn?
I made my frown turn upside down,
And now my worries are gone!

I'll be out of my mind,
Or rather out of ideas really soon,
So let's find,
A place to spare together the afternoon,
Hang out in the night,
Lie on the field when stars rise on the sky,
Sleep till' the light,
If we fall asleep sooner than we even try!

I wrote an epilogue,
To one great fantasy book,
I had funny dialogue,
With the mirror on the hook,
Just in one flash it had to crash,
Because you hug me from behind,
It was such a dash, you was so rush,
Not a way my book was designed,

I said don't worry,
The first chapter may start,
Who'd think I'm Kori,
Too shy to get into your heart,
Remove all the pains from your veins,
Shoot rainbow colours in there,
Today may be some rains in city lanes,
Because we will beat like a pair!

I'll be out of my mind,
Or rather out of ideas really soon,
Look what I find,
Your eyes must be close relatives of the moon,
We should take a good rope,
So I can catch a star and shake it just a while,
For I hope,
Having stardust in your hair could make you smile!

I wrote a fairy tale,
But now I really have to go,
I get a loving mail,
Better not to be so slow,
She's outside and I don't want to hide,
My friend wants to wish me for Valentine,
I hardly tried to be good fable guide,
Wish my poem wouldn't end with this line!

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Picture Art by *DarthAxel
Poetry Art by ~KorialFox

Thank you so much for this beautiful picture Rai, it is very fitting to the poem and it couldn't have been more heartfelt, thank you so much

Please comment and favorite here [link] Thank you!
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Comments: 9

DNangel-dark [2011-03-28 15:42:01 +0000 UTC]

both are amazing! yall did very well at his 'u'

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KorialFox In reply to DNangel-dark [2011-03-29 17:10:12 +0000 UTC]

(He did the better part )

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DNangel-dark In reply to KorialFox [2011-06-21 06:13:41 +0000 UTC]

well i like yours too :b

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SonAsh-The-BandiH0g [2010-10-31 20:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it Fits,
Good Job with the poem ;D

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Angrymonkey2489 [2010-10-21 04:29:00 +0000 UTC]

You guys did a magnificent job on both the aweing drawing and the beautiful poetic art

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Riolu-Pokemon [2010-10-20 15:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Great art and poetry I will never can draw so cool

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FireRai [2010-10-20 14:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear you liked it~
It was my pleasure n.n

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MeerArtist [2010-10-20 13:46:15 +0000 UTC]

wow, it's great!

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Twilightwolf4 [2010-10-20 13:36:03 +0000 UTC]

wow

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