HOME | DD

FireRai — The Poet

Published: 2010-10-20 07:17:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1191; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 14
Redirect to original
Description A Fairy Tale

I wrote a fairy tale,
In the ambry under stairs,
I get a loving mail,
So I put my socks into pairs,
I took my coat and rent a boat,
Now on the blue ocean I can sail,
I would float to reply your note,
Cause I won't let my story be fail,

I fought great waves,
Rain chilled me to the bones,
I slept in sea caves,
So hungry I could eat stones,
I left my town, now I will drown,
Will I ever see another dawn?
I made my frown turn upside down,
And now my worries are gone!

I'll be out of my mind,
Or rather out of ideas really soon,
So let's find,
A place to spare together the afternoon,
Hang out in the night,
Lie on the field when stars rise on the sky,
Sleep till' the light,
If we fall asleep sooner than we even try!

I wrote an epilogue,
To one great fantasy book,
I had funny dialogue,
With the mirror on the hook,
Just in one flash it had to crash,
Because you hug me from behind,
It was such a dash, you was so rush,
Not a way my book was designed,

I said don't worry,
The first chapter may start,
Who'd think I'm Kori,
Too shy to get into your heart,
Remove all the pains from your veins,
Shoot rainbow colours in there,
Today may be some rains in city lanes,
Because we will beat like a pair!

I'll be out of my mind,
Or rather out of ideas really soon,
Look what I find,
Your eyes must be close relatives of the moon,
We should take a good rope,
So I can catch a star and shake it just a while,
For I hope,
Having stardust in your hair could make you smile!

I wrote a fairy tale,
But now I really have to go,
I get a loving mail,
Better not to be so slow,
She's outside and I don't want to hide,
My friend wants to wish me for Valentine,
I hardly tried to be good fable guide,
Wish my poem wouldn't end with this line!

~KorialFox~

-----------------------------------------------------------------

A little trade with n.n
I drew a picture to his poem ^^

The Character and the Fairy Tale poem are copyright by Kori
Artwork by me X3
Related content
Comments: 13

Lyonchello [2010-10-22 15:53:12 +0000 UTC]

That poem is pretty cool, and same for the drawing too!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireRai In reply to Lyonchello [2010-10-24 17:31:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the both of us =n.n=

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Lyonchello In reply to FireRai [2010-10-24 22:00:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

KorialFox [2010-10-20 13:18:00 +0000 UTC]

The picture is so much beautiful, all is wooden, it's exactly where I would love to live =")
Thank you so much for the amazing picture, as well as featuring my poetry, I am so thrilled!
Can I post the picture in my deviations as well, with link here?
Thank you so much Rai

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireRai In reply to KorialFox [2010-10-20 14:33:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you like it, Kori *^^* :cuddles:
I'd like to live in a wooden house too <:3

You are free to submit it, if you want~ :3

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

LIUKANG08 [2010-10-20 12:54:05 +0000 UTC]

i wonder how kori writes i mean he has paws no fingers

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireRai In reply to LIUKANG08 [2010-10-20 14:32:54 +0000 UTC]

That's one of the miracles of the furry world X3

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

CrossCartoon [2010-10-20 11:25:53 +0000 UTC]

How wonderful and really great poem accompanied with a great picture
It is a wonderful picture Rai

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireRai In reply to CrossCartoon [2010-10-20 14:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for both of us :3

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

GessyTheHedgehog [2010-10-20 09:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Lovely pic as always, good job!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireRai In reply to GessyTheHedgehog [2010-10-20 09:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you *^^*

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

saber-th [2010-10-20 08:50:04 +0000 UTC]

that's very sweet, bwooo <:3

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireRai In reply to saber-th [2010-10-20 08:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you *^^*

👍: 0 ⏩: 0