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Description Username: Alpha
Location: Unknown, US
Class: Fighter
Power: Mythology
Special Techniques:
Orion Shield - A powerful spinning shield that doubles as a discus attack which can be thrown in a barrage of projectiles.
Vulcan Fist - A charging dash attack in which the user is enveloped in searing flames. Makes for a good finishing move.
Poseidon Wave - A slow, but forceful projectile attack with a wide range, made of high-pressure water.
Zeus Rage - A quick and precise shot of electricity with a long range that can paralyze the opponent if timed right.

-THE ORIGINAL-
Alpha is based on my best friend, Mike Luckas (Ultimate Creature II) who was also one of the original character designers for the series back in 2004. My mistake with writing Alpha's material in the original was that I was too caught between writing him akin to Mike himself, but still trying to force the "goody-two-shoes" lead hero personality, which clashed very bizarrely. There was also his romance with Flamegirl, the dialogue I wrote at the time clearly reflecting how I old I was when creating the original. Alpha DID go through a lot of character development during TvTome Adventures however, but the pacing wasn't quite executed well enough, nor did he reach the end of his character arc since the series was cancelled after its third season.

-THE NEW-
The current incarnation of Alpha is something I'm very happy with. When developing the personalities of the main five characters, Alpha and Flamegirl I had the most difficulty with. My original idea was keeping him fairly the same, but I felt it would've been far too boring to go that route. When I eventually decided to cast Blake Swift as his new actor (replacing Mike Luckas, who voiced "himself" in the original), the rest fell into place. Alpha is now actually the youngest of the group, maybe only a year younger than Flamey at the most, but this age difference lets him come off as more spiritedly and naive. He's very sweet and maybe a tad awkward. His relationship with Flamegirl in this one shifted a bit, in which case he's very comfortable around her and can speak his mind when feeling vunerable or out-of-place. He also has a bit more of a bro-rivalry with Kirb this time, which makes for some funny moments. As seen in the first episode, after being infected with "Kajet", Alpha's state of mind changes and his confidence comes to the surface. I don't imagine it so much as a split-personality sort of deal, but more like his emotions are unbridled and he can say whatever comes to mind regardless of repercussions, which ends up being a lifesaver to his friends. In terms of design, I brought down his shirt a bit to show less belly, fixed his hair a bit to have the spike over one eye, as well as his long sleeves and scarf, to project that sort of introverted feel to him. I also gave him a feather-tail to match his angel wings (as opposed to the strange lizard-tail). As with the original, Alpha will be going through some major changes in TOME, so look forward to seeing him grow alongside his new-found friends!
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Comments: 103

Champ243 [2016-02-01 23:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey look I created my own TOME OC (shameless promotion is shameless):champ243.deviantart.com/art/TO…

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badgeurbirb [2015-09-05 08:16:15 +0000 UTC]

aka kirb's fictional husband

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BigMarioFan99 [2015-08-25 05:37:16 +0000 UTC]

"Have you ever tried one?","Have you ever tried one?","Have you ever had a Hot Pocket? They're delicious!"

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Kokorodramon [2015-06-18 17:36:42 +0000 UTC]

I cant help but imagining Dog Ears on him. (Like really theres the tail, but what about dog ears? XD)

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billy888888888 [2015-03-16 22:26:59 +0000 UTC]

I love alpha! Hes got red hair like me!

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sonicluke [2014-09-25 01:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Catzilla2000 [2014-09-16 02:35:01 +0000 UTC]

I had no idea on what i whas missing on, i discovered TOME not long ago wille watching the Game Theoryst, now im hooked, i love the show and have watched every episode

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Sword-wielding-gamer [2014-08-04 12:32:36 +0000 UTC]

I had no idea you had a deviantart! The show is awesome and I love it! Β 

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Keeganxd [2014-06-01 14:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Alpha is cool his Beta form looks awesome.

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bronybyexception In reply to Keeganxd [2014-10-10 16:20:10 +0000 UTC]

Was that a pun?

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KyndallChildOfHades In reply to bronybyexception [2014-11-23 15:05:19 +0000 UTC]

I think he was referring to his 'dark' form when possessed by the Forbidden Power.

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bronybyexception In reply to KyndallChildOfHades [2014-11-23 15:19:52 +0000 UTC]

I meant the whole Alpha & Beta thing

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KyndallChildOfHades In reply to bronybyexception [2014-11-23 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]

I know. That's what I was talking about. I could see how you'd think it's a pun, though. It may have been a pun. I just think he was referring to the Forbidden Power thing.

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WarpX97 [2014-05-02 23:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Alpha in ssb4

Neutral B:Β Orion Shield, hold B for shield and release (or just tap B ) for projectile

Up special:Β Vulcan Fist, recovery move; can be aimed

Side special:Β Poseidon Wave, a damaging version of Mario's fludd

Down special:Β Zeus Rage, horizontal version of Pikachu's thunder

Final smash: Kajet, press A for rapid slash and press B for Kajet shot

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ZENOSGREY [2014-01-08 04:56:43 +0000 UTC]

I've been a devout follower since the beginning... And after finally seeing the finale of season 1, I feel I NEED to tell you that this series is the most immaculate interpretation of an online gaming storyline that I have EVER experienced.... I have NO complaints, there aren't even any plotholes despite all the characters you introduce... It's FLAWLESS, and the twists are out of this world. NEVER stop making this series, after that finale and the explanation of Plan Z, you've set the foundation for this series to be a SMASH HIT, if it isn't already. Keep up the FANTASTIC work, you make other non-profit animated series look like complete and total JOKES by comparison.... After seeing episode 10, I just hold SO much respect for you and your creative genius. The character development was far beyond anything I ever expected out of this series, and everything about it is just PERFECT. Just keep it up. You are INTEGRAL to keeping today's entertainment both exciting AND meaningful. I leave it all to you and your outstanding decisions, Chris Niosi. Take it all by storm!

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DylanDylan54321 [2013-12-23 05:36:26 +0000 UTC]

I HAVE NOW STARTED THE VAST JOURNEY OF READING THIS COMMENT SECTION!

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mandipolo [2013-05-23 01:49:31 +0000 UTC]

so technically Sword Art Online copied him.... Well

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detectivegirl15 [2013-03-13 19:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Alpha He's my favorite character of TOME

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Liberty-Chan-1234 [2013-03-01 22:04:02 +0000 UTC]

holy mother of god this is awesome show and I love Alpha favorite character of ALL TOME time
He is sooo cool and in evil form he hot and jaden's voice acter from is the abridged show he is amazing to
wonderful job!

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SkytheStarhero [2013-02-15 20:40:20 +0000 UTC]

"grow alongside his new-found friends!" As an original TTA fan from back in the day, I don't know how to stress this enough: I cannot WAIT! I look forward to how the story plays out! Alpha will always be my fav! (sorry Ny.)

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Aquailita [2013-02-02 01:43:44 +0000 UTC]

The Forbidden Power has a NAME?!
"Kajet?!"
wow thanks for the spoiler! (>3<) rrrrrr....
lol its okaylove this series. i love (and hate) the "relationship/deal" between Alpha and FP. its so corruptive and scary adn controlling and stuff..... (but i mostly like it becasue im a tendershipper...)
love alpha. but i kinda like nylocke better.

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HunterJC18 [2013-01-16 03:55:52 +0000 UTC]

I wounder if theres going to be a Alphazet form that would be cool

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PotatoGurl12 [2012-09-18 20:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Cool Its Alpha

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Dave175 [2012-08-11 10:49:28 +0000 UTC]

What's Kajet?

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Liberty-Chan-1234 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-01 21:50:15 +0000 UTC]

the Forbidden Power
DUN DUN DUN

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Dave175 In reply to Liberty-Chan-1234 [2013-03-01 23:15:21 +0000 UTC]

THEN WHY DON'T THEY CALL IT THAT.

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-09 08:41:12 +0000 UTC]

sorry to be a know it all (030) but KAJET is the guy who makes the BGMs The forbidden power is kagemaoru :3

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-09 22:39:44 +0000 UTC]

THEN WHY DON'T THEY CALL IT THAT.

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-09 23:23:17 +0000 UTC]

makes it more mysterious, watch the original series >:3

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-09 23:56:20 +0000 UTC]

But that's like not calling any of the characters by name. It's not mysterious, it's pointless.

And I already did.

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-10 00:08:38 +0000 UTC]

awww thats mean to

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-10 05:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, how's he supposed to get better if no one tells him when he screws up? I'm not saying I don't like the show, but that doesn't mean I'm gonna hold my tongue it keeps itself from being better.

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-10 07:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww... well that makes it more unpredictable, usually shows like this would make it more obvious what would happen next so you just have to wait!

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-10 08:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Being unpredictable does not keep it from wasting its potential.

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-11 01:30:50 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* lets just agree to disagree

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-11 02:59:12 +0000 UTC]

To reiterate, I'm not saying I don't like the show. I like what they've put out so far. I just think it's missing chances to improve itself.

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-11 05:19:22 +0000 UTC]

that is a legitimate point.

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-13 06:55:17 +0000 UTC]

It just seems like they're compromising in areas when they should be taking advantage. For example, I'm all for leaving certain things up to interpretation when it comes to symbolic imagery or theming, but when it comes to the capabilities and mechanics of a game engine where the entirety of the story takes place, that's essentially saying you're leaving the laws of physics in your story up in the air, which is something you simply cannot do. Especially when your main antagonists are said to be bad because they can break those undefined game mechanics, and almost every character seems like they can break the game to some extent. How much damage can someone take without dying? Who is stronger/weaker than who? What are the strengths and weaknesses of each class type?

Again, I'm not saying this to reduce enjoyment or to make people dislike the show. I really think it's a great concept and still shows a lot of potential, even this far in. It's just not being used as well as it should and people watching should be asking for that. If it means it takes longer for each episode to come out, that's fine, so long as they're making use of all of the tools at their disposal.

You get me?

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-13 07:16:19 +0000 UTC]

yes I do. lets just.. stop for now..

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-11 02:57:32 +0000 UTC]

So you're saying this show couldn't be better than it is?

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-11 05:19:07 +0000 UTC]

no, But only one guy is animating, 2 people (including the animator) scripting, the rest are voice actors, oh and 2 background artists, just you know, 3 people really affecting the story so yeah... we have to keep that in mind.

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Dave175 In reply to Yopel5 [2013-03-13 06:34:54 +0000 UTC]

I know that, and I am cutting it as much slack as I can, considering their limitations. But when the main character and his love interest are the less developed than the main comic relief(s) and less expressive than the main character without a face, someone's gotta put their foot down, and who better to do that than a fan?

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Yopel5 In reply to Dave175 [2013-03-13 06:38:12 +0000 UTC]

I guess...

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Dugregas In reply to Dave175 [2013-02-20 02:36:08 +0000 UTC]

I know some things about that word. Many words like Kajet originate from religious texts such

as the Bhagavadgītā, the Bible, the Quran, etc. In many cases these family names are

shortened versions of a religious sentiment such as "Lamb of God" & is a Germanic surname

which comes from a profession, such as the name "Baker" which refers to the craft of baker.

But it could be something else.

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Dave175 In reply to Dugregas [2013-02-20 03:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Apparently it's just Kajetokun shortened.

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Dugregas In reply to Dave175 [2013-02-27 03:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Good to see some1 like Dave175 had the time to look into this unique word.

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Dave175 In reply to Dugregas [2013-03-01 23:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Still doesn't explain why they never refer to it by that name...

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Whokuu In reply to Dave175 [2013-04-21 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Well when if a show is re-booted that also makes everything that they've been through simply disappear. They don't remember it's name and they still don't quite understand what it is either. As far as they are concerned at the moment is that it's very dangerous and not to be messed with. So in all reality it does make sense that they don't call it by it's name; because they don't even know what it is.

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Dave175 In reply to Whokuu [2013-04-22 16:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but usually when the creator releases the name of a plot device, that name is usually brought up by SOMEONE before we're 7 episodes in.

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Whokuu In reply to Dave175 [2013-04-22 20:39:04 +0000 UTC]

It has been brought up but not mentioned to any of the main characters. Only the hackers so far know what it's called from the unknown source

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