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Mea-Mina [2012-07-22 17:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Gedichte in einer Fremdsprache (nehm ich jetzt mal stark an) zu schreiben ist net unbedingt leicht, Du machst das gut!
Falls Du in der Richtung ne kleine Herausforderung suchst: versuch mal den Inreim in Vers 2 (light-bright) durch das gesamte Gedicht zu ziehen, also eine kompliziertere Reimform.

Sorry, ich hab in der Uni ne kleine Arbeit zu Reimformen geschrieben . . .

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Astrocat [2004-02-10 13:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Yay Karoon! I love the poem, your not allowed to say its crappy

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kellendraysia [2004-02-04 15:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely wonderful! I think the poem came out great! It really carries a lot of meaning, and it fits the image of Karoon next to it very well.

I love Karoon's pose and the movement. The outfit is wonderfully done and the glowing orb is a nice touch. I really like his facial expression and his hair. Wonderful job on the background Keep up the lovely work! I promise I'll be back to comment more!!

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3D-Fantasy-Art [2004-01-31 19:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Very very cool. Like the poem - it really complements the pic. Great background and light halos too!

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Mirri [2004-01-31 16:08:27 +0000 UTC]

*squeeeee*
This is fantastic!!! The poem is just great and the piccy of Karoon is sooooooo lovely He looks so very eeeeevil!

Thankies Ki!!!!!!

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TheSylverLining [2004-01-31 13:56:57 +0000 UTC]

0_0 *jawdrop*WOooooaaaaahhhhhh. *goes into wordless convulsions* Art... so beautiful... poem... so powerful... ack... self-destruct-taking-inferior-art-and-po etry-initiated! 3-2-1 BOOOOOM! x3 Mwaha! I LURVE THIS! ^___^

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