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JackalTheAce [2016-12-01 02:08:31 +0000 UTC]

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This is a very well done piece! The colors are done nicely [thought the marker is a bit obvious at time but that might just be me. I'm not the most keen with markers. The lining is smooth, though the cloak is a tad bit rough on the edges. It was very nicely shaded. There is one area I would like you to work on however. The face. It is not a bad face, certainly not! Faces are very hard to get, trust me. However, it would be a good idea to practice your faces and the placement of the eyes, lips, nose, and other features. Very nice! Keep up the good work!

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DancingPartySoda [2016-12-01 01:47:17 +0000 UTC]

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In my opinion, the top of the hair doesn't go high enough, the ears are too long, and the eyes are too far apart. I don't know what that lump in the cloak is, and the stripes on the shirt don't curve in the way they should. The headband seems too thick, and i think the way the cloak was colored is, well, messy. The shading on the face and neck don't make sense, and I'm confused as to why there's lime green under the cloak. I think having at least one side of the cloak on or over the shoulder so the shoulder is visible will make the drawing make more sense. This is only my opinion and I understand if you find it harsh.

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artii2tiiciin2aniity [2016-12-01 01:24:04 +0000 UTC]

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This is a really good picture, the colors run nicely and aren't just randomly spewed all over the place. The design is simple and nice to look at.

The eyes are a bit too far apart and one is bigger then the other, I suggest using guide line to help them be closer in size. Here's a tutorial that shows what I mean- img07.deviantart.net/374f/i/20…

I like that you put shines in the hair, but your shading needs work, I can't tell where the light source is coming from. www.deviantart.com/art/Really-… This is a good reference for shading.

And the last thing I'll suggest is in place of leaving out some of the line art, try variation in thickness of the lines.

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KawaiiAnimeKitsune [2016-12-01 01:21:18 +0000 UTC]

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My Name is Noah and i am joined to a group called Project Comment where i will get a notification for every peace of art that is good on this big world wide website i call Devientart. I do review's on a system i call a Praise and Polish system(things i liked of the picture and stuff you can work on.) this is helpful because it is a Critique. I start this always with the Polish. I think the marker lines is are showing and that could honestly ruin a project, in this it both ruin's it BUT it also looks like it works as it flows throughout the cape. also is it supposed to be a vampire elf? if it is where is the other tooth? is it being covered by the tongue? So now that the Polish is over on to the praise. I think it is an amazing drawing the vision is cool and the originality is kind of up but not fully original the technique was destroyed by the marker lines. the impact was amazing because the shading and diffrent things helped it along the way. Also I LOVE drawings where you can not figure out wether it is a girl or boy or not. I have spent time making this Critique and this is honestly an amazing drawing and i hope you keep up the good work and try to fix some points i have brought up helps you. You have earned my watch!
From your pal, Noah

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SnoByrd [2016-12-01 00:50:09 +0000 UTC]

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This is overall, a pretty good picture but there are some things that you could improve on. One thing is the proportions. Her eyes are too far apart and the eyebrows are a little uneven. The hair is pretty good but the lighting is a tad unnatural at the bottom. Her bottom lip is too thin and there are some lines that cross where they shouldn't (Ex: Where her closer ear meet her hair.) Another thing to remember is to keep the curve of the jaw within her neck so it doesn't make her head look too big. The shading is pretty good and the clothes look nice as well. The use of color is also good so overall, this is a nice pic. Hope this helps!

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alftheotter [2016-11-29 21:16:30 +0000 UTC]

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The coloration is great. I especially like the way you colored and shaded the hair- it makes it appear as though it is reflecting light, and it appears more natural in a way than just a flat color or shade. The ears are pretty detailed, and they help accentuate the rest of the face and the hair just by being focus points for the eyes. I also like the look of the cloak clasp- it is simple, but elegant in design, and the color that you picked makes it appear as if it were shined up brass or bronze.

There are a few rough edges on the cloak, but I feel that in a way that may improve the look by making the picture as a whole look less stiff and more fluid and natural.

Keep up the great work!

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LifeKnife [2016-12-01 07:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Well done!

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VanillaSnuggleMonk [2016-12-01 01:46:27 +0000 UTC]

I really like the color scheme here! Although, its very obvious that you used marker. An easy way to fix this is to either layer it to full saturation, or to be very careful in not going over already drawn lines, especially if they're already dry! Personally, I would have made the lower lip much thicker, but that's all in preference.  I like the shape of the head, but the eyes should be either lower on the face, or the forehead larger. Look in a mirror to see how a face is proportioned, I find that it helps quite a bit! I  love the hair!

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BigMac1212 [2016-11-29 20:29:18 +0000 UTC]

What a pretty character.

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gvsgdude89 [2016-11-29 20:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.  My only question is was the fang intentional?

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