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kalaja — My last breath

Published: 2004-07-11 21:32:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 977; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 366
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Seeing the starfish in the water is like...
The photo has a meaning, if you can figure it out, well...

Hope you enjoy it!!!
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Comments: 31

cimerias [2008-01-02 21:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Omg, its sooo beautiful!

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starlit-sky [2007-10-14 20:39:26 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous

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threefiftydee [2005-12-15 23:58:45 +0000 UTC]

beautiful... make me calm...

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Envy--Kitten [2005-07-23 21:34:57 +0000 UTC]

the colours in this are fab. great work

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javanti [2004-12-12 15:00:58 +0000 UTC]

wow this is so calm and still. i love it . im amazed.

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AshleyxBrooke [2004-12-11 18:01:08 +0000 UTC]

very pretty

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maus [2004-10-18 09:52:47 +0000 UTC]

i love it, the shining starwish in the middle looks great, the darker plants around it and in the corners make it interesting and more three-dimensional great work!

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hArMy [2004-08-21 23:39:48 +0000 UTC]


Beautiful pic. indeed, the colours are just awesome!
It takes my breath away.
An that starfish..

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olino [2004-08-09 22:14:09 +0000 UTC]

lovely photography, really like to see the blue of the sky reflected on the water, nicely done!

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badfinger [2004-07-29 17:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow very clam and still sad. Great!

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darkened-flame [2004-07-20 06:16:38 +0000 UTC]

fantastique

im watching veryyyyyy intently. The color in this is just spectacular.

I really wish I could say much more about it but it really catches me as "wow"

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CLFire [2004-07-20 00:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful!!! The starfish is awesome!

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eswanson [2004-07-19 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow beautiful shot! The colours are amazing and everything is so clear I like how the starfish is the centre piece of the photo, although not as bright as the coral and seaweed around him, he still stands out... Nice capture

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Aleks-kun [2004-07-18 12:26:28 +0000 UTC]

great work in color!
Creativity in tins!
Everything is perfect.... unbelievable work

you surprised me with this one, really....

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annlee [2004-07-14 06:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely lovely. The composition, the details, the colors so nice.... really like the way the starfish stands out.

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boomslice [2004-07-13 12:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Amazing colors. I've tried to take shots like this, with little success. Great job.

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hollyw0uld20 [2004-07-13 05:42:11 +0000 UTC]

what brillent lush colors. there is a very nice swooping composition here. that is very appealing and creates a relaxing flow. fav it.

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Myangelofmusic [2004-07-13 01:04:51 +0000 UTC]

beautiful..The colors are breathtaking..

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Katerina423 [2004-07-12 23:33:16 +0000 UTC]

This is a really wonderful photo.. it's vibrant and alive.. the colors are just magical here. I don't know what meaning you inteded to put here but what i the feeling i got as soon as i saw this .. was that some star up in the heavens decided it was time to leave the clouds and come down to earth.. so it took it's last breath and dove under water.. and that's where it lives now.. happy as can be, but still secretly missing the feeling of the wind. hehe somewhat unrealistic interpretation i guess.. but reality is highly overrated. I definitely like what you're doing here.. i think it's really good work.

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kalaja In reply to Katerina423 [2004-07-12 23:42:03 +0000 UTC]

I’ve got to say you nearly cracked the meaning of it, but then again I love your comment on it, thank you for your time.

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triggerfinger [2004-07-12 12:45:28 +0000 UTC]

is this a tidepool display at an aquarium? i love those

about the photo:
it's a beautifully executed shot. the vividness of each form in the water is so well defined under the liquid. i especially enjoy how some parts of the kelp (?? lol) stick out of the water giving another dimension of texture.

about the lighter portion:
i think the photo may benefit more if the lighter section created the border rather than the way you have it now. i think a lot of the details seem softly focused with this presentation. it takes away slightly from the quality which is a shame because it's one of the best water/sealife shots i've seen here at dA.

about the border:
my eyes (and sense of symmetry) are bothered ever so slightly by the larger top portion of white. it seems to unbalance the framing. perhaps if you made it the same size as the white portions at the sides it would regain the balance.

just my two cents

all in all, a really lovely photo that makes me want to dip my feet in the water!

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kalaja In reply to triggerfinger [2004-07-12 19:13:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for your comment, I made a few changes to the photo, I think it looks completely different now.

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triggerfinger In reply to kalaja [2004-07-13 06:13:49 +0000 UTC]

now, it's perfect

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derUhl [2004-07-12 11:57:41 +0000 UTC]

The picture is amazing, but I don't like the framing, with the vivid colours at the outside and the sort of bleach ones on the inside. Maybe that's because I interpreted it differently from you ? The title seems rather negative, or at least melancholic, but to me, the picture conveys a very positive meaning, something like having found the needle in the haystack.
However you interpret it, it still is one of the best pictures I have ever seen, so a +fav from me.

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boarderline [2004-07-12 09:08:07 +0000 UTC]

woow reeally beautiful!! i like the many details! i can see something like a bear in the white plant in the left corner on top.

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x3n [2004-07-11 23:57:47 +0000 UTC]

excellent photo my friend, great imigary and a very beautiful subject
i think of death, but also wondering through life with no real aim or ambitions (kindof how i feel at the moment) very skillful

all in all its a very good photo...one of your best

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Dionysis42 [2004-07-11 22:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Amazing shot.
Incredible detail and colors.

I just feel myself being drawn in and soon it will be my last breath.

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blackened-tear [2004-07-11 22:22:23 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!
:*
kisses

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alfonz [2004-07-11 21:54:41 +0000 UTC]

no comment needed

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radioactive-orchid [2004-07-11 21:40:04 +0000 UTC]

this is such a breathtaking shot! instant +fave!

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avenescent [2004-07-11 21:36:08 +0000 UTC]

even saying " i love this " would forever be an understatement. it's more of like looking into a mirror and recognizing myself. when i die i want to be cast into the sea.

A.

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