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hiroshiparadox [2013-03-30 22:09:45 +0000 UTC]

I really like the coloring! The contrast between lights and darks is dramatic, but you build into the shadows in a soft way that looks great. I especially like the edge highlighting, and how it makes her figure pop, and how it gives you the feel of stage lights hitting her from the front, even without presence of a big, elaborate stage or audience scene.

I like how the microphone cord and her hair add a lot of energy and movement to the pic. The shapes of her hair, particularly her ponytail, are particularly fun.

I think you did a great job with her figure. The balance of her weight across her legs and hips feels natural,and the curve from her waist up her back looks well done, too. I think the shapes all have a great sense of volume and softness, partly from the lines themselves and partly, again, from the great coloring and shading. I like how her hands and arms look, both of them -- the shapes are good, and the poses make a lot of sense for her singing on stage. I feel like the arms, and upper body as a whole are a bit too small, and don't stand forefront as the focus of the pic as much as they should in comparison to her larger legs.

The only other thing I'd critique is that most of the energy in the pic comes from the lighting, the swing of the microphone cord and the bounciness of her hair. I think the pose is strong and the figure largely well-drawn, but I think a more animated dancing pose would've carried that energy throughout the pic even more.

But overall, I really like how she looks. Super cute! And in spite of my (hopefully minor!) critiques, I do think her figure and the coloring are awesome. Great work!

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Aniapl [2013-01-10 10:34:52 +0000 UTC]

great job! love it!

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bexDDD [2013-01-10 08:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooo! such fine girl~ hahaha!
nice work!! I miss ur art :'D

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FallenAngelGM [2013-01-10 05:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Pretty cool! I love her fashion style! Do you do commissions?

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